SV FF- Shayad Yehi Toh Pyar Hai (Up. Pg4) - Page 3

Noodles... I wud have used Radha but I couldn't remember her name and I was talking to Shaili and we all know how crazy she is about Sagar so Radha has been replaced by Shaili.. hehe..

I'll try to update soon. I am glad you are all liking it..

heey
awesome start i love it
i have thought a lot of time about what would happen if they meet eachother and sagar was normal and not mentally challenged
and you're writing about that's so great because nou I can present at least something now

hehehe...yeah..jus make sure neha di that Shaili di doesnt steal all of dimwit's attention...varna Vidya ka kya hoga...? 😆 😆

Ok.. this is going to be a really crappy part.. so just bear with me... I am just too excited with this new track to actually think anything..

PART TWO

Recap: Vidya meets Sagar at the Ganga ghat. Sagar takes her dupatta and later returns it in the market. Vidya is mesmerized by Sagar. Chinu asks Vidya to show them around in Banaras. Vidya's friend Shaili readily agrees as she thinks Vidya is falling for Sagar.

Sagar: Pata nahi Papa ne yeh kahan fasa diya... There is nothing to do here.

Chinu: Dadda…. Let's go look around. They have really nice old temples in Banaras… People come from all over to visit all these holy places..

S: Wah Wah Chinu…. That was all that was left.. Night life mein disco or loud music ki jagah ab mandir ki ghantiya sunne jaayege hum. Tum jao I'll try to catch a movie on my laptop.

Chinu: Chaliye na.. waise bhi aap yahan baith kar bore ho jaayege. Vidyaji ne bataya tha ki aaj wohh mandir mein Ramayan ka paath padhne wali hai.

S: Vidya? Kaun Vidya?

Chinu(winks): Arre wohi.. aapke dupatte wali

S: What? Tumne usse baat kab ki? Did I not tell you we should keep away from these type of girls.. Pata nahi how can you tolerate being around them.

Chinu: You did not even say a proper thank you to her even though she saved you from embarrassment.

S: Hum yahan ke Thakur hai.. Agar usne madad kar bhi di toh what's the big deal. Waise bhi I returned her dupatta, rite?

Chinu: Theek hai Dadda… Ab please mandir chale?

S: Tum nahi manoge.. Main ready ho kar aata hu..

At the Mandir

Shaili: Vidya… Vidya jaldi dekh na..

V: Kya hai.. Mandir mein bhi tum chup nahi baith sakti? Panditji kitna achha paath kar rahe hai.. chup chap sun.

Shaili: Tu bas paath kar… Wahan dekh.. Sagarji. Gosh.. kitne HOT hai.. kurte mein toh aur bhi achhe lagte hai nahi?

V: Waise unpar bhure rang se neela rang shayad zyaada achha lagta.

Shaili: Vidya… tujhe kaise pata? Tumne unhe neele rang mein pehle dekha hai kya?

V: Jab hum chhote the toh woh Bade Thakur aur Thakurayan ke saath aate the.. Tab hum ganga ghat aakar khelte the. Uss wakt unhe neela rang bahut pasand tha.

Shaili: Arre… toh yeh pyaar bachpan se chal raha hai?

V: Chup.. pyaar nahi.. Hum bus unhe jaante the.. bus.. aur kuch nahi

Shaili: Aur phir bhi itna kuch yaad hai.. wah Vidya

V: Achha ab unhe ghurna bandh kar aur chup chap paath sun.

On the other side…

S: Chinu this is soo boring…

Chinu: Dadda.. aap sunege toh interest hoga na…

Unconvinced Sagar keeps looking around aimlessly when his eyes fall on her… A strand of her hair is falling over her left cheek posing a distraction to his eyes of her view. She tucks it behind her ear with her left hand and Sagar is finally able to get a full view of her profile. She looks sooo innocent… The strand falls back on her cheek interrupting Sagar's thoughts.

S(thinking): Ughh…. Stupid strand… If only I was there I would just pull it back so it won't bother her so much.. (coming out of his thoughts) What am I saying? Its that girl.. that girl from the river.. what did Chinu say her name was?

Chinu(interrupting his thoughts): Dadda.. Aap kya kar rahe hai? Kahan kho gaye.. Chaliye paath khatam.

S: Oh.. finally.. Thank God

Chinu: Waise aapko dekh kar lag nahi raha tha ki aap bore ho rahe hain..

S: What do you mean?

Chinu: You think I didn't see you stare at Vidyaji?

S: Achha uska naam Vidya hai.. main wohi soch raha tha ki uska naam kya hai.

Just then Vidya comes with the Aarti..

V: Chinuji, aarti.. (turns to Sagar) Aap bhi lijiye

S: Thanks

V: Jee Dhanyavaad

S: Kis liye

V: Wohh humara dupatta waapis karne ke liye.. Waise aapne humara dupatta kyun liya tha

Chinu bursts out laughing…

S: Shut up Chinu… (to Vidya) Kyun? Koi problem thi tumhe… Main tumhe aise dus dupatte laa dooga

Shaili: Aur aap ko laane bhi chahiye... Ek toh iska dupatta le liya aur dhanyawaad bhi nahi kaha

V: Chup kar Shaili.. kya keh rahi hai.. chal yahan se.. Chhote Thakur hai yeh..

Shaili: Toh? Dhanyawaad kehne se inki shaan kam nahi ho jaayegi…

Chinu: Nahi nahi.. baat yeh hai ki Dadda ke pants…

S: Shut up Chinu… Let's go

Chinu: Achha Vidyaji, Shailiji, chalet hai.. aapko yaad haina humko ghumne le jaana hai.

V: jee jab aap kahe..

Chinu: Toh phir theek hai.. kal subah chalet hai.. Aap Haveli aa jana

V: Theek hai..

The next day morning… at the haveli.. the bell rings..

Chinu: Arre… Shailiji.. Vidyaji nahi aayee? Aur yeh kaun hai?

Shaili: Shalu.. Vidya ke chacha ki beti.. Jo iss haveli ko sambhalte hai.

Chinu: Achha toh Vidyaji unki bhatiji hai.. lekin wohh hain kahan?

Shaili: Apne shambhunaath ke paas. Wahan se pooja khatam karke aa jaayegi. Chhote Thakur kahan hai?

Chinu: Dadda abhi so rahe hai.. Hum abhi jagate hai unhe phir chalte hai..

That's it for today.. Like I had warned you guys.. very crappy part.. I promise next one will be much cuter with more SV interaction...

The mandir scene was so beautiful, Neha! Sagar thinking how he could take care of the strand so it wouldn't bother her so much.... That's sooo cute! I can feel love in the air!

Of course, Neha since it's the beginning we understand there can't be a lot of SV scenes... But waiting for more SV interaction for next update!!!!

Awesome, Keep going!!! 👏👏👏

Neha it wasn't crappy at all..on the contrary it was really fun, cute..I really like your humor..very subtle and intense at the same time..
next part???? jaldi..pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Thanks Mahi.. yeah I have to atleast show that they are feeling something... Next part is all etched out in my mind. It will be cuter for sure.

😆 😆 😆 ok wht crappy part? this was sooo good....im dying laughing soo hard at myself...u knw na...reality mein toh ill be too busy blushing to say even a word...is ff mein hi sahi...i like all the talking i did....too good...

and chinuji bhi cute hi hai... 😛 yaad rakhna... 😉 😳 😳 waisey....i tried callin dimwit 'saagarji' in my head..and it feels sooooo weird....hehehe.... 😳 😳

Nishi,
Thanks... I am like this in real life too. I don't find it very humorous but I guess if you say it is then..

Shaili,
I know.. I am trying to build your confidence so when u get to meet Sharad you will not just faint.. hehe. Then you can thank me.. haha

that was great... something different to read. 😊