SV FF- Shayad Yehi Toh Pyar Hai (Up. Pg4)

So I guess we are going to be getting some pretty crappy stuff for a couple of days and I had long promised Shaili this Fan Fiction so here it is…

So this actually starts from when Vidya sees Sagar for the first time in the Ganga river in Banaras. Its more like my take on what would/could have happened between Sagar and Vidya if Sagar was actually normal, not mentally challenged and had met Vidya in Banaras. Would he have eventually fallen in love with her knowing that she is illiterate? If so, how? How would they come closer?

After strict orders from his Dad for the last time Sagar Pratap Singh has finally come to Banaras to make sure everything at the Haveli is in order. He has to make sure that Chacha-Chachi the caretakers are able to manage it well. His cousin Chinu has come along to accompany him. They landed in Banaras last night and early in the morning the next day, on Chinu's request he agrees to tag along with him to the Shiv Mandir by the Ganga ghat. He is not as interested in the pooja and decides to take a swim in the waters of the holy river.

So there it is… my FF will begin with the same scene where it all began…

..Shayad Yehi Toh Pyaar Hai..

Update: Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 4

ME Firstttttttttttttttt.....Thank you SO much Neha...for finally giving in...and posting it..lekin this is such cheating...jaldi se post the rest..otherwise ill keep buggin u...the beginning has got me thinking...wht will the rest have? 👏 👏 jaldi...next part plssssss... 😛

Kya Neha yaar.."its like taste the food..but you can eat one year later"? Come on we are hungry..ayse kyse chalega? Maan me dard..pet me bhuuk..bahut e kahil haal..
Jaldi peyas bujao and jaldi khana do..please... 😭

Great start..I love that scene...can't wait..
This whole week is going to be crappy..Thanks for thinking of us...
👏 👏

Hey Neha 😊

Great begining 😉

Can't wait to read what happens next 😉

From Shireen 😳

awwwwwwwww very intersting plzzz update soon 😉

NEHA DIDI!!!AWESOME UPDATE JUS GR88...ANOTHER SUPENSE FILLED UPDATE...I AM VERY HAPPYJUS GR88...ANOTHER SUPENSE FILLED UPDATE...I AM VERY HAPPYPARTS IN RED I AM BEING SARCASTIC...

hONESTLY..AS MAHI DIDI..KNOES I HATE SUSPENSE...LIKE hello? GET ON WITH the story...coz if u keep me hangin, i swear i'll strangle u!!! that goes 4 creatives as well...EACH AND EVERY ONE OF THEM!!!!!! 😡 ..sry i am short tempered 😳 but ur ff was amazin!

Ok... here it is... the very first part.. Hope you guys like it..

PART 1:

As always, Vidya has come to Shiv temple to do Shambhunath Pooja. Unlike everyday, she sees a new face today at the temple. Its not someone from Banaras else she would have known. Maybe they came from some city far away from Banaras. How she wished she could go visit one of those big cities some days. Coming back to thoughts of Shambhunath she proceeds to begin her Pooja. As she is about to leave, her red dupatta gets blown off by the gush of the wind and heads straight for the river waters. She runs trying to get a hold of it straight into the middle of the river. As she is about to grab the duppata, the most divine face she had ever landed her eyes upon merges out of the water. For what seemed like an eternity their eyes lock and they have an intense staring session. Finally, he breaks off the eyelock.. grabs her dupatta and swims away. She hears the guy from the mandir yelling out "Dadda.. Dadda.. chaliye we have to go meet the caretakers of the Haveli.. They are all waiting for their Chhote Thakur"

On their way to the Haveli…

Chinu: Dadda… achha the Chacha-Chachi who are in charge of the haveli I don't think they are doing a great job or anything. I mean when you meet them you will know……. (He notices Sagar hasn't been listening to anything)… Dadda… Dadda

S: Huh.. kya hua Chinu?

Chinu: Did you even listen to what I was saying?

S: Haan.. yeh duppatta haveli mein… rite?

Chinu: Kya baat hai Dadda? Thinking of the duppatte wali girl, kya?

S: No way.. are you crazy? Yahan ki ladkiyan kitni gavar hoti hai.. me falling for one of those? Not possible.

Chinu: Then what's this dupatta doing with you? Why is it wrapped around you? And how come you were not listening to what I was saying?

S: Woh toh.. Ok here.. but you can't tell anyone…

Chinu: That you have fallen in love with her?

S: No duffer… Mere pant ka belt toot gaya and its very loose now.. luckily ussi wakt that dupatta caught my eye so I just took it warna mujhe dupatta wrap karne ka shauk hai kya… Now don't laugh..

Chinu(laughing): Dadda… oh my god.. oh my god aur wohh bechari pata nahi kya soch rahi hogi…

S: Chinu.. stop it.. stop laughing.. Hum kal hi usse yeh dupatta jaa kar waapis kar dege.. Chalo a baa gayi Haveli.. lets meet those weird caretakers…

On the other hand, Vidya on her way home..

Vidya(thinking): Kaun the wohh… mera dupatta kyun le gayi? Chhote Thakur.. Haveli ke chhote thakur.. Jiski dekh bhaal chacha karte hai. Iska matlab hai hum phirse unhe mil paaege. Wohh shaher se yahan kyun aaye hoge?

Shaili: Vidya.. Vidya.. what you thinking?

V: Huh??

Shalu: Kya soch rahi ho?

V: Kuch nahi...

Shaili: Kya kuch nahi?? Kahin Chhote Thakur ke baare mein toh nahi soch rahi?

V: Nahi Shaili.. unke baare mein kyun?

Shaili: Pehle toh woh kitna HOT HOT hai... Kaash wohh mujhe bhaav deta par nahi dupatta tera le gaya… Kahin usse tujhse ishq vishq na ho gaya ho. Na hua ho toh main line mein khadi hu…

V: Chup karo.. pata nahi kya bolti jaa rahi ho... Hum wohi soch rahe hai ki unhone humara dupatta kyun le liya

Shaili: Main keh rahi hu.. Usse tujshe pyaar ho gaya hai.. Chhote Thakur ko humari Vidya se pyaar ho gaya hai..

V: Chup.. kitna zor se bol rahi ho.. koi sunega toh kya lagega... aur waise aisa kuch nahi hai.. humein dupatta waapis kar dege woh..

Shaili: Woh kaun?

V: Woh.. Chhote Thakur... Uff... chalo ab.. ghar aa gaya.. Shaam ko market jaate wakt main tere ghar aa jaaoogi phir saath mein chalege..

Later at the Market…

V: Chalo Shaili…. Aur bhi sabji leni hai humein.. Shaili.. chalo... Kahan dhyan hai tumhara...

V(taps Shaili on her shoulder): Aapka ghurna bandh ho gaya ho toh chale??

Shaili: Vidya dekho na… He is sooo HOT.. Kaise na ghooroo.. Dekho

V: Hum yahan kisiko dekhne nahi… sabji lene aaye hai.. Chalo..
As she turns she bumps into someone… Its him from the river… the same divine face..

S: Excuse me… Listen..

V: Huh?

S: Sorry about the dupatta… here it is..

V: Umm… dhanyavad… Lekin…

Before she could ask him about anything else he had started walking away…

Chinu: Suniye… aap…

V: Vidya.. mera naam Vidya hai..

Chinu: Vidyaji.. woh Dadda toh thode aise hi hai... bura mat maaniyega. Thanks for the dupatta.. Aapne Dadda ki izzat bacha li

V: Kya?

Chinu: Kuch nahi.. aapko bataya toh Dadda mujhe maar dalege… Kisi aur din.. Aap kissi din haveli aana.. Waise bhi hum yahan kisiko nahi jaante.. Ab aapko jaante hai toh aap humein ghumane le jaa sakti hai

Shaili: Chhote Thakur saath aayege? Phir main zaroor aapko sab dikhaoogi..

V: Shaili… (turns to Chinu)… Zaroor. Hum aapko zaroor ghumane le jaayege

Chinu: Achha ab main chalta hu.. pata nahi Dadda kahan chale gaye

After he leaves...

V: Tum chup nahi reh sakti thi? Kya zaroorat thi Chhote Thakur ke baare mein puchhne ki

Shaili: Wah… ek toh maine tumhara itna bada kaam kiya.. Tumhe Sagar Pratap Singh ke saath ghumne jaane ka mauka dilvaya aur tum mujhe par hi gussa ho rahi ho

V: humare liye ya apne liye… tum bhi toh saath aa rahi ho

Shaili: Achha toh tum akele unke saath jaana chahti thi?

V: Humne yeh kab kahan… Kya kya chalta hai tumhare dimaag mein…

Shaili: Abhi main soch rahi hu ki main tum dono ki shaadi mein kya pehnugi...
V: Hey bhagwaan... iss ladki ka kuch nahi hoga.. Ab chalo aur ek baat samajh lo.. Humein unse pyaar nahi hai.. samjhi??

Shaili(thinking): Tum kaho ya na kaho Vidya… Tumhari aankho mein saaf dikhta hai.. Pyaar toh hai…

Alright.. Thats it for the first part.. I'll continue soon. Shaili hun I hope you liked your dialogues... Real life mein nahi mere FF mein you get to be close to your dimwit..

awwwwwwwwww its sooooo Goood Neha 👏 you better continue this!its sooooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeet 😳 i love it!!

Neha..
khana bahut accha thi..thankooo...bhagwan tumhe tin bar (wish) de --- ek ek bar update karogi to 3 wishes granted from God..Itne saare log khushi honge..isilye bhardaan..

Shaili bechari to maar jayegi..tum ushe nayika se side actor bana di....heheheheheheehhehehehehehe

Chinu is also nice Shaili.. 😉

It was really good..Thanks..can't wait for the next part... 👏

👏 Neha too good...like i already told u... 😛

and u already knw all the conditions for my character...but just a reminder...dont make me call him chote thakut for too long...jeeju-saali are goin to be veryyyy close...ekdum badmash dono..and hum aapke hai kaun style..i dont mind chinu...as long as im closer to saagar.... 😳 i cant live without my jeeju u knw...hehehehehe... 😳 😳

chal jaldi se..whn is the next part coming? 😛 im waitingg....i hope my role gets stronger...it better.... 😳

btw..loved the funny part...bechara mera dimwit...finally we solved the puzzle...why did he take her duppatta? 😆 grt one neha...loved it! 😃