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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok i just finished my homework finally thank god. So i thought today i'll just make sagar know about sin i promised myself thats if i get tired of typing. After this maybe i will continue so i can make harah mauha and chandra story finish because i hate they're scenes.Nahy i don't even like talking about them actually. oh back with the story.
It all starts when they show that plane taking off only the plane which ofcourse S.V and sameer are in. that they don't show.
Sin's room
the sindoora's background music is playing Sin-sin-sindoooooooorraaaaaaaaaa.(is it because she does lots of sins 😆 ) Any ways they show her face very angry and red she has her arms crossed and is walking back and forth and the music stops.
sin-mai asa kabhie na honay dayti aghar buaji or chote maa nay tung na beech may arrai hoti. pause, lakin mera bhi toh idea itna bakvaaz tha or us sagar kho bhi jana tha iss liyeah woh itni jaldi maan gaya. aysa nahi ho sukta ,nahi ho sukta.
While sindoora was blabing to herself suddenly buaji knocks on her door she has a glass of water and medicine.Sindoora turns around.
Sin- arrey buaji app ayayna. with a smile .
Buaji- beta sindoora yeh ley dava saar durd theek ho jahay ga. and smiles because she knows she's lying withot sindoora noticing.
sin-thanks buaji. Buaji leaves. after buaji leaves sin throws the water and medicine which is all over the place. She screams BUAJI!!!!!!!!!!
Back to S.V
They show sagar holding the bags and sameer standing sleepy beside him and vidya tring to open the door of the cottage in Goa that they've already booked and it's now night time. Vidya opens the cottage door and everyone enters. Sagar puts the bags down.
sam- papa maa muche neend arahi hai. in a sleepy voice.
before vidya can say anything sagar interupts.
S- ajj mai sameer ko saalau ga vidya. who looks happy and shocked same with sameer.
S- chalay beta. then he leads sameer to one of the bedrooms.
vidya looks around the house and spots a see threw glass door which leads to the beautiful backyard. vidya goes to open it when she's about to step out it starts pouring rain.now vidya gets the flashback of the time when they were at the farmhouse and how sagar and vidya were enjoing it.while she's getting the flashbacks the song lagan lagi tumsay maan ki lugan plays on until vidya turns around and see's sagar right in front of her.They both have a eye lock session when sagar says.
S-vidya kya howa ruk kiyou gahi.
V-woh hum. sagar grabs vidya's arm and takes her out in the rain. sAGAR spins vidya around when she stopped she found her self in sagars bhaho may.They enjoy them selves alot.
Now the scene switches to sagar vidya's cottge room and it's morning vidya is sleepin in sagars arms who now wakes all happy from the sunshine. She goes to washroom now. Sagar also wakes up who looks even happier he's sitting on the bed and looks as if he just remembered something important. he says to him self S-Oh di mai appko intni zaroori baat bhool gaya batana . He finds his cell phone which was on the nighttable still sitting on bed dails sindoora's bedroom phone numder not her cell. The bells ringing but sindoora doesn't care about it because on her cell she's talking to some goon.on the other hand superman Aniket is tring to pickup the phone which is right beside him thanks to his hand movements the reciver falls out of it's place and sagars still on the phone. he thinks sindoora actually picked it up so he says ,S- hello di , but hears no respond accept for sindooora talking on the cell phone to the goon. Which sin doesn't notice.

Sin-KAYA!!! Balwant or pasay mang raha hai mou band karnay kay liyeh.Theek hai.pause,Nahi woh mera bahi nai hai sagar nah mera bahi tha hai na hoga kubhi. May usay nufraat karti hoon issi liyeah ajj thuk jo bhi hova hai sagar kay saat uski zimaydar may hoon. LAKIN tumhay itni fikar kiyou ho rahi hai. Kaya police say daar thay ho idiot. Muchay dhek ho sindoora kisi say nahi daar thi hai.
then she hangs up on the goon and looks towards the phone first she gives aniket a sharp look and then puts the reciver on the right spot.
In goa Vidya comes out of the washroom and looks at sagar who looks terribly sad.Vidya comes and sits beside him and asks whats wrong in hindi ofcoures.
S- vidya hum ajj or issi hi wagt yaha say ja rahay hai or abhi muchsay kuch swal maat pouchna.
Vidya nodes sadly.

ok now sagar found out about sindoora maybe i'll continue to how sagar will react on this. FOR now hope u enjoyed it.
Chand pari 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Yay!!!At least there is something good going on somehwere...in this ff....we luv u too much Aisha!!!👍🏼thank u for the awesome update...call me didi...if ur younger than me (how old r u?) di reminds me of Sindoora...u understand na?
Anyways...keep smiling!keep psting..have a blast on if and keep updating the fantastic ff!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Hi this is my last update i guess .I feel nobody's enjoing this accept for my friend eclipse_101. I still wanna finish it becuz my sister said never leave anything unfinished.

Everybody's having a talk in the leaving room they're enjoing themselves with a cup of tea and some snacks. Suddenly Sindoora notices sagar,vidya,and sameer at the door. She is very happy to see them ofcoures because they came back from Goa so fast.She gets up and walks up to them now everyone also see's them and are suprised.
Sin- arrey sagar vidya itni juldi tum dono wapass agay. or ha manay sagar ko bohut miss kiya.
sagar looks very angry now his blooding is boiling seeing the terrible lady in front of him. so he raises up his hand to slap sindoora but stops and puts his hand down sindoora and the whole faimly including vidya who also has no idea what he did that for the whole faimly is shocked of what he just did. All of the people now stands up and s.v.sam enter the house.
Maa- sagar yeah kaya batamizi hai sindoora tumhari bari bahen hai.
S- bahen konsi bahen jo apnay bahi ko marr day na chahati hai ya woh wali jo pyar ka naatuk karti hai.
Now vidya is getting that sagar has found out the truth about sin didi.
sin- sagar yeah tum kaya kahay rahay ho may tumhay kiyou marna chahu gi.
S- Shutup just shutup ofcourse property kay liyeh. arrye chahi yeh thi toh mang layti may tumhay kushi kushi day daytha. He's cring while saying that now vidya also starts cring. now sindoora's crying but they're crocodile tears.
Sin- sagar tum asay kaysay khay suktay ho yeh JHOOT HAI. oh acha iss vidya nay tumhay burkaya hay.
Sin walks towards vidya with a very angry look.
Sin- kush ubb mayray bahi ko mayray khillaf bhurkanay mai tum kumayub hohi.
V- parr didi hum . sin grabs vidya's by the arm and throw her out the antrance (which i believe is alawys open).vidya lands flying on the floor and hurts her self on the forehead and is not able to stand up. sindoora turns around to face the others now sagars very very highly mad.
S- DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he walks up to sindoora and this time he actually slaps her. Sin puts her hand where sagar slaped her while there's a silence in the room.Sagar goes up to vidya and supports her to get up and makes her sit on the sofa.now he goes back to to sin.sin stares at him with anger in her eyes.
S- app sub loog jaana chatay hai kiyou may asay behave kar raha hoon. everyone nodes. s- theek hai tho suniyeh
Sagar tell's everyone the whole story about how he found out. Now everyone is starring at at sindoora with disgust which sindoora doesn't like and finally she blows up.
sin- hain hain hain manay he sagar ko marnay ki koshish ki thi. Pata hai kiyou baba kay marnay kay baad yeh property sagar ki honi thi lakin muche kaya milta. kuch bhi nahi.
maa- sin beta tum asa kasay khar sukti ho. humnay tumhay chanra,mahva ko apni betiyann mana hai phir bhi.
sindoora raises her hand to slap maaji but sagar stops her hand and pushes it away.
S- meri maa ko haat bhi mut lagana. maa muche maaf karday iss urat ko manay almost apkay jitna maanay laga tha lakin chi. he say's wiping his mom's tears.
bharat was listening to all this and is cring sindoora see's him when she's about to walk up to him he moves away.
bharat- app bohut buri ho chali jaho jaho. and he rans away cring. now sin is feeling guilty what she does is walk away up stairs.
suddenly everyone hears a gun shot they run up stairs and find sindoora deid on the floor. (acha nahi hova baychari hahahaa 😆 )

i am done hope u enjoyed it. 😊


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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
awww ur ending it..that sucks...it would be cool if vidya gave him a cold shoulder cuz u knw he never believed her...i think u were doing an awesome job...keep it going 😃 wicked..u killed sin lol=D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramsha1990

awww ur ending it..that sucks...it would be cool if vidya gave him a cold shoulder cuz u knw he never believed her...i think u were doing an awesome job...keep it going 😃 wicked..u killed sin lol=D

u really want me to continue what ur idea was came to my mind to but i'll only continue if more peoplr would like it. thanks though😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
heey
nice finfic I just read it
I think you really loves Sindora nah haha
you did a really awesome job by killinh her
it is really g8 pls continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
hiiiii
jaa please do continue...its great...
hihi first time i read that Sin is killed.... 😆
good job...
hope that u do post more 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
Oh Aisha plx plx plx cont..!! for me!!! plz???
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
Fine i'll continue becuz 3 people asked me to. oh hi again i killed sindoora hahaha. i really don't like her she was a pain in the eyes.
Well sindoora is not completely dead she has to oplogize then die 😃 . Everyone's in the room even bharat eccept for vidya u know she got hurt becuz of sin. Sagar runs up to her he is now sad and puts sin's head on his lap. Bharat is cring like he never did before.
S- di! di! apko kuch nahi ho sukta mai ubhi doctor ko phone karta hoon.
Sin- nahi sa-gar meri mu- uut ub karib agi hai is-is-is liy-la-la-liyeah much muchay mama maaf kaaa kaak kardo.
sin says it with alot of pain and also try's to fold her hands for forgiveness.
S- di please , sagar cries. manay hain maaaf kardiya lakin pur.
sin-shhhhhhhhhhhh muuu cha muuchay vavava
S- vidya
sin- hain maaf
CHINU goes to get vidya he helps her come up vidya is cring in sindoora's feet.
V- didi hunhay maaf karday appki iss halat ki zimaydur hum hay.
SIN- arrey na-hi vvvvaaa-idyaaa muu cha hy tata tum say maafi mangni chahiyeh hai. bhoolo please muche maaf kardiya tumnay .meray pass time nahi hay.
V- ji diddi
sin smiles.
Sin- bha-rattt idhar aaa hoo.maama kay pass.
bharat runs to sin and hugs her.
B- mummy apko kuch nahi ho sukta
Sin- bha-ratt much-hay maaf kardo mai achi ma na bun suki paaaleeeeeeeeeeesssssseeee muchay maaf karday na.
Now she starts breathing very hard and says upp sub bhi muchay maaaf and she dies everyone is shocked.

the scene swithes to sagars room
he's sitting in his room on his bed all depressed lost in his thoughts. vidya comes sits beside him and thouches him on the shoulder to support him (now she has a bandge around her head)
v-suniyeh
S-vidya chali jaho yaha say yeh sub tumhari waja say hova hai (how) tumhara meri zindigi may ana he ek pap tha. ub jaho.
ofcourse sagar doesn't mean it u know he's depressed so he said what came out of his mouth but vidya took it seriously. she's about to blast up.
V- acha hum bhi sumaj tay thay kay yeh sub humari waja say hova hai lakin yeh nahi pata tha kay humhara rishta ek pap hai.Ajj thuk apnay humhay sumja hi kaha hai jub didi ka such bataya humpay barak paray or kuch diddi kay saat hova buohut fikar hovi.lakin ajj thuk jo meray saat hova hai woh kuch nahi. pause, theek hai mai apki zindagi say ja rahi hoon . Vidya say's with anger,and sadness. Sagar just listens to her.when she leaves the room he realises what had happened.he had made one of his biggest mistakes by saying all this to vidya.Instead of oplogizing he scold her and blamed her. Now he's more tensed.


ok, i'll end it here my sis needs the computer. But until then hope u enjoyed it 😊 .
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Posted: 17 years ago
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lmao haha i lvoe that fact that u made sagar look like an idiot...i am sure ppl love ur fanfic i knw its alot better than the actual show at the moment...ur doing an awesome job..please continue lmoa i can never imagine sindoora being that nice lmao..sagar as usual is an idiot but vidya is awesome she told um off!!! YES FINALLY!

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