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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
Asma and Pinky...dont worry...i will have some gr88 sv scenes in the update after the next...just coz i want to make the next one a bit intense...when harsh gets shot..and thenn they go bac home and stuff happens....dont worry i am sure u'll end up liking the upcoming updates as well...not trying to boast...one lil bit...hope u understand...
Ananya 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Alrite i am ready for an update...rnt u? and i am sorry for not updating any sooner to those peeps who like this ff...(ayesha, asma, and etc) So here it goes...*short update..*

Recap: V leaning over a passed-out sagar begging him to get up and Harsh hungrily walking towards her...

Harsh: Kyun Vidya Rani?! Kaha tha na hamne...aanth mein tum hamare hi pass aaogi...aur tum ho ke, paisa dekhte hi, doli main baeth kar, phooorrr hone ko chali thi, woh bhi is chhote thakur ke saath. Chi chi chi....bahut buri baat hai Vidya, bahut buri...tum jaanti ho ki hum tumse kitna pyaar karte hain...jaanti ho...(harsh is closing in on her as he talks)

V: Pass mat aayi ye aap hamare....hum ab ek suhagan hain....pass mat aai ye...(to sagar now) aap aap uthiye...uthiye...aap haar nahin manenge...aap aap uthiye na...hame hame delhi jana hai...aap uthiye...

Just then there was a bang...a kind of noise that Vidya couldn't identify...she had never heard it before but she had a feeling it was very inappropriate at the moment. So Vidya turned around and was bewilldered...to notice Harsh making a strange face, mouth and eyes wide open, ass if he couldnt breathe or was chiking. Vidya was confused and scared at the same time, coz she knew that something had happened, becoz of the bang. Harsh, dropped to his knees with a loud thud, and Vidya noticed someone behind him...Lallan had appeared...

L: Harsh bhaiya, maaf kijiyega, par inka jaana zaroori hai, aur hum isme koi rukawat nahin aane dena chahte hain, chahe woh mere apne sage dost kyun naa hon...

H: Lallan...tu? Tune mujhpe goli chaliyi! tu mee paaon ki jooti se bhi battar hai aur teri itni himmat.

L: Harsh bhaiya, aisi baatein mat kijiye...aur aap hame bolne wale hote kaun hain? Jindagi bhar aapki sebha main lage hue hain...aur hamse kya chahte hain...

But Lallan didnt get to finish his sentence, coz Harsh charged at him due to the fact that lallan shot harsh in the arm...

Meanwhile, Vidya was shocked at the sudden appearance of such a cheapo when she felt his hands, that were on top of hers move. She slowly turned around to find his eyes opening..

V: (gleefully...but in a whisper) Aap jaag rahe hain! humne kaha tha naa, aapko juch nahin ho sakta...kuch bhi nahin.

S: (eyes finally open) V..vi..vidya, chalo yahaan se, chalo vidya,

She helps him up and rests his arms on her shoulders, so he's leaning towards her, and they both slowly and quietly sneak away from the haveli.

Sagar and Vidya get into the car, and Sagar quickly drives away.

Meanwhile with Sin

Chandra had come to pick Sin up...she asked her about Sagar and Vidya, Sin said she finally got Vidya away from Sagar's life and then when they were coming back, she might have fallen asleep and then when she woke up, she was cold and when she opened her eyes, she noticed she was lying on the side of the highway near the khaayi and the car, driver and sagar too were gone.

C: Di aap chinta mat kijiye, gadi ki khoj hum karwaa lenge, aur woh Sagar, aacha hi hua hoga agar gadi khayi main crash kar gayi hoi aur woh is duniya ko chod papa ke paas chala gaya hoga.

S: Theek aha Chandru, aur phir...joh bhi galat kaam karta bhagwaan ko pyaara ho jyata hai. Ab dekho naa, papa, duniya chod gaye, aur ab Sagar bhi. Ab deri hai toh sirf, us chhoti maa ki aur VIdya ki. Par Vidya ki chinta mujhe nahin hai...woh toh kabhio bhi mar jaayegi, par choti maa...uska kuhc na kuch intezaam toh karna hi parega.

Sindoora and Chandra end up giggling. The two then get into the car, and drive away.

Precap: Vidya & Sagar in car, hugging and V crying hugging S even tighter. Then they look at each other, and fall asleep...V in Sagar's chest. Both are endlessly smiling

Alrite guys, here you go, and the sv scenes are in the next lets say 3 or four updates. Don't worry, i am not like zee creatives. I have a good supply of SV scenes, and i will share them with u quite often in Sirf Main Aur Tum...tab tak ke liye, Salaam Namaste!

Ananya

Edited by eclipse_101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
ok no problem, glad you are updating!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Great update.Continue soon yaar.Funny too.lallan (hahahahhahahahahaahahha 😆 )I laughed my heads off reading it.Specailly when u were describing how Harsh looked when he died.Thank god.Once again continue soon.👏
Edited by chand pari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
Ayesha...u dont wanna be too sure he's dead!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey 😊

Great update 👏 👏

Harsh is out of the picture 😃

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shireen...as i said, dont be too sure Harsh is out of the picture...he might as well appear again! 😛 although that would suck..but he is outta the picture for now and about ten or twenty more updates!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh 👏 .....FANTASTIC.Sagar and vidya scene sharing stuff made me laugh 😆 ...U are too sweet to update yaar...CONTINUE NOWWWWWWWWW.pLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i cant prolly tmrrow..too tired...so sorry to keep u waiting..u'll get more sv and funny scenes..so no tension..glad u like my ff so much!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Alright everyone..get ready for my next update!!!!MUhahahahaha...hope this update doesnt get bitter sweet 😉

Recap: Sagar grabbing hold of V's hand while she is watching Harsh and Lallan fight...

Sagar and Vidya were peacefully sitting in the car. Vidya couldnt even believe she was going to her sasurall...and she hadnt even talked to her mother...well, that wasnt something to worry about, she could call when she gets there. Meanwhile, her first priority was sitting beside her, humming a beautiful tune...driving the car. Sudenly Sagar slammed the breaks, and the car skidded to a stop.

V: Kya hua? Kya baat hai...ap itne ghabraaye hue kyun hain?

S: Vidya...di..di ko maine highway par choda tha...yahaan se kareeb 2 metre door...aur woh soyi huin theen...par ab main dekh raha hoon toh wahaan di dikh nahin rahin...tum batho gadi main, main unhe dhundh kar laata hoon...

With this, S left the car and went to search for Sindoora..

V: Aap..aap hamari...aa... (he had left so she stopped in mid-sentence)

S returned with the driver about half an hour later...he asked Vidya to come sit with him in the back as the driver was found...

V: Par aap Sindoora didi ko dhoondhne gaye the na? Woh kahaan hain?

S: Di ka koi pata nahin chalaa....ab...ab ghar jaa kar hi kuch hoga, waise bhi bahut raat ho chuki hai.

D: Sach saheb...madam hame kahin nahin dikhin..maine kahan nahin dhoondha..

S: Koi baat nahin..ab ghar chal kar dekha jayega

So the couple sat in the back of the car, and the driver began to drive them home...

Sagar and Vidya were having a solid eyelock...Sagar's hand slid in to Vidya's..locking them into place. Vidya began blushing crimson...

S: Jaanti ho Vidya? Maine aisi khushi kabhi bhi mehsoos hi nahin ki...shaadi se pehle, sab kuch alag sa tha. Main America main tha...aur unhi logon ki tarah jita tha...par jab ghar aaya, kisi ko mera bartaav nahin pasand aaya...aur phir ek din..jab maine bussiness samhalne ki zimmevaari apne kandi liya...mujhe sabne kaha ki 'jao Sagar, mandir ho aao...itna bada kaam saupa gaya hai tumhe, toh bhagwaan ka aashirwaad bahut zaroori hai'...khakh asshirwaad...usi din, main sabke sath mandir gaya...di aur sab gaya par maine andar jane se inkaar kar diya...main wahin se bhagwaan ki murti koh dekh raha tha, aur phir maine saamne dekha...aur ek truck aa raha tha...main toh chaunk gaya...dar gaya..kuch nahin samajh aa raha tha ki ab kya karoon...main hil tak nahin paa raha tha shock se...aur phir...phir...

sagar began panting..

v: aap thik toh hain...kya hua aapko???

s: nahin kuch nahin...bas yuhin...phir main behosh ho gaya...juch hi pallon main aankhen khulin...aur mujhe pata nain kyun di saamne dikhin...mujhe laga woh meri madad kar rahi hian...aur phir, meri aankhen dobara band ho gayin...tabse yeh sab naatak ho raha hai..aur kyun...yeh toh main bhi nahin jaanta...(short pause) (sigh) Vidya...tumne meri zindagi ka khalipan dur kar diya hai...tumhe dekh hi mera dil zoron shoron se dharakta hai...meri saasein tej ho jati hain...meri kaanein tumhari saasein sunne ko maangta hain..meri haathein, tmhari mein samaana chah ti hain, mere sur main tumhara chehra gol gol ghoomta hai...aur mere charon bagal tumhari hi mehek..

Vidya began blshing crimson...

S: Kya tumhe aisa mehsoos hota hai?

V: (murmur) yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...

S: (laughs then has a major tearspill) mera saath kabhi nahin chodo gi na Vidya?

V: Hum aapko kaise chod sakte hain...aap aur hum toh ek hi hain na..sinein main ek dil dharak ta hai...saasein ek saath chalti hain...rukengi bhi toh ek saath...

Vidya rests her head in his chest, and he rests his on her head...he keeps looking down at her..and remembers his dream..the one he had at the hospital...Vidya was the fairy he had been dreaming about... she was the one he was searching...and he was the luckiest person to have found her...

jab kabhi main kho jaaun toh mujhe dhundh loge naa
jab kabhi main tanha rahu mera saath doge naa
jab kabhi mere behke kadam tum thaam loge naa
jab kabhi main kho jaaun toh mujhe dhundh loge naa
jab kabhi main tanha rahu mera saath doge naa
jab kabhi mere mushkil ho dagar tum sang chaloge naa
jab kabhi mere behke kadam tum thaam loge naa

Sagar puts his arms around her shoulders...and then asks the driver to stop after a while... they have already reached Delhi, but Sagar decided to show Vidya around tthe city...

jab kabhi de aawaz dil tum sun loge naa
jab kabhi toote khwaab toh tum bun loge naa
jab kabhi mujhse ho khata mujhe baksha doge naa
jab kabhi meri num ho nazar mujhe pyar doge naa

They go visit India Gate, and then a beach...Sagar is in the water, and then comes running bac to shore where v was sitting, wwatching sagar gleefully...

(only song in bckground> cant hear what they say)

S: (Mouthing) Chalo na Vidya...

V: Nahin Nahin...hame bhigna nain hai

S: Chalo na Vidya chalo.... Chalo!!!

jab kabhi ham na aye sanam tum ?? loge naa
jab kabhi mere aansu bahen unhe poch loge naa
jab kabhi umra dhal jaayegi mujhe yun hi chahoge naa
lo kasam kuchh bhi ho sanam tum durr jaaoge naa

He takes her into the water (with song in bckground) and she feels cold...but sagar comes from behind and splashes her...now she's soaking wet, and has her mouth wide open


tum hi meri jaan ho tum hi armaan ho
tum hi dhadkanon mein ho sanam
dil ka yeh iraada hain
tumse mera vaada hain
jeena marna tere sang hai sanam

Precap: Sagar and Vidya sleeping on each other's shoulders....when they reach home...Sin is walking into the house, when she notices headlights.....

That was all for now guys..until then..TOODLOO!

Edited by eclipse_101 - 17 years ago

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