(FF) Kyun Nahi Hua Pyar? NOTE Pg. 78!!!!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

Meera...aap cheti cheti jao aur next chapter likho aur cheti cheti post karo. 😛 😳

Reemz di, mujhe aap maat kaho!!! Main aapse choti hoon......I think...😉😆😆 I'm writing it right now! Will post in a bit!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera😳😳

Part 2

Recap: Sagar reveals that he has recovered and he reveals that Sindoora is the one who made him mentally ill. Aniket, Uma and Sagar all get together and kick Sindoora out of the house. Uma tells Sameer that no one will ever be able to take him away from his house. Sagar asks Vidya to come upstairs to their bedroom with him, and so she obediently follows…


Vidya and Sagar make their way to their bedroom, and Sagar shuts the door,

Sagar: tum yahaan se chali jao.

Vidya shell shocked looks up at him and just looks at him as if trying to recognize this person who is talking her.

Sagar: I know, ke mere kehna tumhe bura laga hoga, lekin yehi saach hain, agar tum mujhse pyar nahin karti to tum yahaan kyun ho?

Vidya: (starts tearing) aapko kisne kaha ke hum aap se pyar nahin karte?

Sagar: That doesn't matter Vidya!

Vidya who doesn't understand what he just said, just gets frightened by his loud booming voice.

Sagar: mere matlab hain, ke mujhe jis kisi ne bhi kaha hain, uss baat ki koi amihath (importance) nahin hain…

Vidya: aap….kaise…..aap…..assa nahin kar sakthe….

Sagar: Vidya, tum isse mushkhil kyun bana rahi ho? I love you damn it, and I know you don't love me!

Vidya: aapne….kya kaha? Humari samaj mein nahin aaya….

Sagar: Vidya, main ek failsla liya hain, ke tum iss ghar ko chor ke jaogi, lekin aabhi nahin, tum thore dino baad jaana…Sameer ko tumhari aadat se nikalne ke liye thore dino chaiyye na?

Vidya: (crying)hmm

Sagar: Please Vidya, tum ro maat, I know tumhe meri baat buri lagi hogi, lekin agar tum mujhse pyar nahin karti to….kyun?

Vidya: hum aapse…..karte hain….
Sagar: (getting angry now) Tum jhoot bolna band karo! Main janta hoon ke tum Tushar se pyar karti ho!

Vidya: (shocked) aapko…yeh… kaise?

Sagar: mujhe kaise pata chala? Tum kabhi aapna chera dekho, jab tum uski taraf dekhti ho….aur phir Harsh ne bhi mujhse kaha, aur phir….choro Vidya, main janta hoon ke tum usse pyar karti ho, aur woh bhi tumse pyar karta hoga…(interrupted)

Vidya: Bas kijiye Sagar! Bahot ho chuke, hum aapse kitni baar kehte rahe, ke hum aapse pyar karte hain, kisi aur se nahin! Lekin aap hain ke…..

Sagar: kya kaha tumne?

Vidya: (blushing tomato red) ji….maine….

Sagar: (happy) tumne mujhe Sagar kaha?

Vidya nods, while smiling slightly….

Sagar: (ecstatic) aur tumne aapna pyar ka izhaar bhi kiya?

Vidya starts backing away slightly going towards the closet…

Sagar: jawab kyun nahin de rahi ho?

Vidya : ji….woh….. (nods)

Sagar : aaj main itna khush hoon Vidya !!

Vidya: lekin aap to chathe hain, ke main ghar chor ke chali jao….

Sagar: arre stupid, tumne kabhi meri acting nahin dekhi kya? Main natak kar raha tha!! Kyun ki mujhe jaana tha, ke kya tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho?

Vidya: aap natak kar rahe the? Aur mujhe aapne kitna rula diya….

Sagar: agar aapni pyar ka izhaar karana tha, to kuch to assa hi karna tha na?

Vidya: aap bahot bure ho….

Sagar: aacha? To phir tum mujhse pyar kyun karti ho? Jao, Tushar se pyar karo!

Vidya: yeh aap kaisi baatein kar rahe hain….mujhe to yakeen hi nahin aaraha ke aap saach mein theek ho gaya hain…
Sagar: Vidya….(he takes her and sits her on the bed) Main tumse pyar karta hoon, aur uss din jub maine woh poem tumhe suniya tha, to woh meri saach mein feelings thi….

Vidya: lekin uss din, hume kuch samaj mein nahin aaya tha, aap mujhe uska hindi mein matlab sunienge?

Sagar: of course!

Vidya looks up at him

Sagar: mere matlab hain, ke zaroor!

Sagar puts his head in Vidya's lap, and she puts her head on top of his head….while in the background Bolo Na Tum Zaara from fightclub is playing because someone in the room next to them is watching tv, with that song playing….


Ok so my ending was crappy, but I hope you liked everything else….I tried to make it happy and cheerful afterwards, but I needed more inspiration and it wud have been ten times better!!! Sorry everyone, if you didn't like it!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera

OMG!! I READ BOTH PARTS!! AND EHH!!! I LOVE LOVE IT!! SUCH A GREAT JOB!! LOVE IT LOVE IT!! WOWW! HURRY AND CONT!!

Originally posted by: Nabihah

OMG!! I READ BOTH PARTS!! AND EHH!!! I LOVE LOVE IT!! SUCH A GREAT JOB!! LOVE IT LOVE IT!! WOWW! HURRY AND CONT!!

omg....I'm glad you liked it so much! (but no posting in caps!!😆) lol anyways....I just posted this part....aabhi abhi doosra itni jaldi?? 😆 I'll try....lol.....

Luv ya loads,

Meera😳😳

Awwww!! Im smiling like an idiot. 😆 😆 Great work Meera! 👏 👏 The dialogues are very well written. Looking fwd to ur next one! 😳

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

Awwww!! Im smiling like an idiot. 😆 😆 Great work Meera! 👏 👏 The dialogues are very well written. Looking fwd to ur next one! 😳

Aww....I'm happy you liked it Reemz di!!!! I was really scared about this part, specially if it made sense or not....😆 I'm glad you liked my hindi...I hated it...I rather write it in English, but I love talking in Hindi, just can't spell my words properly in hindi!!! lol...i'll try maybe to post one today!!😳😳😳

Luv ya loads,

Meera😳

Meera I've read it and LOVED it 😳 😃 ... feeling to lazy to write a big comment 😕 will come later 😳 😉

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Aww....I'm happy you liked it Reemz di!!!! I was really scared about this part, specially if it made sense or not....😆 I'm glad you liked my hindi...I hated it...I rather write it in English, but I love talking in Hindi, just can't spell my words properly in hindi!!! lol...i'll try maybe to post one today!!😳😳😳

Luv ya loads,

Meera😳

I know what you mean. i have to talk myself through the hindi worsd and then try to work out how spell them in hinglish. 😆 Its tough!

Originally posted by: Nancy_89

Meera I've read it and LOVED it 😳 😃 ... feeling to lazy to write a big comment 😕 will come later 😳 😉

I'm glad you liked it so much Nancy!!! btw got my friends all addicted to Javeda Zindagi!😳😆😆 It's ok if you feel lazy right now, lekin baad mein zaroor aana!!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera😳😳

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

I know what you mean. i have to talk myself through the hindi worsd and then try to work out how spell them in hinglish. 😆 Its tough!

😆😆 and then at times my gujju comes in too....so I have to go and re-write some of it....

Anyways...I'm starting the next part question though....what shud this part have?😕😕 I'm having a mindblock!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera😳😳