(FF) Kyun Nahi Hua Pyar? NOTE Pg. 78!!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Nabihah

ohhhh!! why tomorroww!! sounds soooooo interesting!!!!! 😆 please post ASAP!!! cant waitt!!!



Nabs....it is tomorrow!!! lol....anyways I'll be posting it in about 10 minutes...but I'm warning everyone right now, there is NO romantic scene in this part!!!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1


This ff will start right at Sindoora's birthday where Sagar just reveals that he has recovered since about the time where they all went holidaying and then Tushar appeared to save Sameer, ever since that time, where Sagar was under all that water, somehow he just felt weird and that's when he discovered that the way Sindoora di was acting towards him, because before his accident she was always mean towards him, and she never used to make him feel like a part of the family, and then he realized that in reality she was trying to keep him mentally ill. And so in order to find out really what was wrong, he continued acting as if his mentality was that of a little child's.


Chinu: dada? Aap theek kab hua?

Sagar: chinu, main theek bahot phele hogaya tha, lekin mujhe Sindoora di ki asliyat janni thi….

Aniket: Sagar, tumne bahot hi aachi kiya, jo tumhe Sindoora ka asli chehra hum sab ka sammne la kar karha kiya.

Sindoora: Sagar….tum….beta…tumhe koi ghalat fami hui hain…main to tumhari di hoon na? Main to tumse bahot pyar karti hoon…

Sagar: aap meri di thi, lekin jo aap ne Ma ke saath, Vidya ke saath, or Sameer ka saath kiya uske baad main kabhi bhi aapki izzat nahin kar sakhta…

Vidya and Tushar look at each other, and they both smile, but Sagar sees that, and feels still that maybe Vidya does love Tushar, and so he turns his attention back to Sameer.

Sagar: beta, tum kabhi bhi iss ghar se nahin chor ke jaoge….kyunki tum meri bete ho, tumse jo koi bhi kahe, lekin tum mere bete ho!

Uma: haan Sameer, tum issi ghar ka waris ho, aur koi tumhe iss ghar se nahin nikal saktha.

Vidya: Sameer, yahaan aao….

Sameer goes to Vidya and she gives him a tight hug…

Vidya: Ma, hum aap se wada karte hain, ke hum hamesha isse bahot pyar denge…

Sagar: Vidya, mujhe tumse akele main baat karni hain, tum mere saath mere kamre mein aaogi?

Uma: sagar beta, woh tumhare aur Vidya ka hi kamra hain….to usse tumhare maat kaho.

Sagar: (annoyed look) Ji ma

Aniket: Ma aap hi decide kariye ke Sindoora ka kya karenge?

Uma: Sindoora, hume yakeen nahi aata ke tum assa kuch kar sakthi ho, tu miss waqt is ghar se nikal jao! Hum tumhe police mein nahi de raha hain, lekin tum iss ghar se jao!!!!

Aniket escorts Sindoora out of the house, and then he takes Bharat up to his room and explains what just happened to him.

Everyone clears the living room leaving just Vidya, Sagar, Sameer and Tushar. Tushar notices Vidya's longing looks at Sagar, so he just picks up Sameer and tells him that he'll take him outside to play basketball.

Vidya: hum upar chale?

Sagar: haan chalo, mujhe tumse bahot zaroori baat karni hain

Vidya and Sagar make their way to their bedroom, and Sagar shuts the door,

Sagar: tum yahaan se chali jao.

Vidya shell shocked looks up at him and just looks at him as if trying to recognize this person who is talking her.

That's it guys…..tell me if you like it or not, otherwise I can just end it!!!

I know this is kinda going like Reemz ff, but trust me it's not!! But she did inspire me to write it!!

Luv ya loads,

Meera


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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooh...awesome beginning meera 👏 👏

but saagar...itna abruptly keh dia? Poor vidya..how can she take it?! 😭

continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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This is definately a different outlook on what possibly could happen 👏 👏 Great start Meera. Will be looking forward to know why Saagar wants her out. He thinks Vidya loves Tushar right? 😭

COntinue soon!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: inavars

ooh...awesome beginning meera 👏 👏 Thanks Sravi....I'm glad you liked it!!!😳

but saagar...itna abruptly keh dia? Poor vidya..how can she take it?! 😭 saagar ne keh diya, to dil ki baat hoti hain, woh sheedhe zuban par aati hain....I dont' know if she can take it!!😕😕😕

continue soon! I'll try tom!!!😃😃😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Reemz*

This is definately a different outlook on what possibly could happen 👏 👏 Great start Meera. Will be looking forward to know why Saagar wants her out. He thinks Vidya loves Tushar right? 😭 I'm glad you liked it Reemz!!!! That's exactly why Saagar wants Vidya out...because he's sad that Vidya loves Tushar.....😭😭😭

COntinue soon!! 😃 I'll def try for tom!!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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OMG I love it yaar...I am excited for you FF....it will be soo nice if it actually happens....but its going to be fun reading it....can't wait 😉 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hehe Meera here I am 😳 😳 😳
I must say that I just loved this part, absolutely great, you are doing a brillint job 👏 👏 👏

Sagar sounded lil rude towards Vidya 😭 Why does he think that Vidya loves Tushy?

BTW your hindi is perfect 😉

Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I love it!!! Its great and soo realistic...it is a possibility that it can happen.....Plz continue soon.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ooohh wow, a different story here..!! 😳 👏 👏 Meera, it's great yaar! Oh no, hope Sagar knows that Vidya doesn't love TUsshar par koi baat nahin, do continue, it's great!

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