a poem vidya would write for sagar

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys, I wrote this poem back in high school. It's kind of silly. But i thought After sagar recovers and he teaches vidya how to speak english this poem would be perfect for her to write for sagar.

From the moment I met you

I just couldn't forget your face

Just the sight of it made my heart beat at an abnormal pace,

To utter your name makes me weak in the knees

It's like my heart is locked and you have the keys,

To hear your voice sends chills down my spine

Like a deep lions roar that put eveything out of my mind

When we first met I knew you were a gift from above

Than I immediately knew you were my first love.

I know it's silly but i thought it would be so cute to see vidya reading this to sagar after she has learned english with all her blushing and him staring at her while she reads😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg that was totally and utterly awesome! You know that has really cheered me up!! Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem. Oh its so nice, i have to read it again. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww......that is such an awesome poem...I almost got tears in my eyes.... 👏


Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW! that is really not sily!! its such a touching romanticly written adorable poem!!!! 👏 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hailaa that was beautiful..!! very very well done, it was a really sweet poem!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww...such a sweet poem thanks for sharing 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow man that poem is really good, mind if i copy this poem so in future i can say this to my first love n pretend ive written it?? 😳 please petty please
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow...nice poem...to good you should write more!! 👏
this is one poem..which is written by my Friend.. 😉

A couple of seasons back we became friend,

The cause was that event,which let it happen,

A mutual respect, perhaps, was the reason

Wasn't that close,still good enough, till my final season,

And then as it was pre destined ,

The journey diverted, just as it was timed,

Friends we were, for beautiful little reasons,

Friends we can be, for bearing common opinions,

Possible or not, to met in person,

But a mail afterall,is not that difficult, a proposition,

I never thought of you, to be that mean,

It's a different story though, if you're not all that keen,

Or is it still, that you are too busy, with your company,

Which I can tell you,to me, remained a mystery,

In whatever perspective, I put it through,

It only hurt, and I could'nt get the clue,

But I'm sorry that's your friend and of course much closer,

And too obvious to state, that to you so dearer,

And before that, I must be a worthless creature,

A lot worse perhaps, a lot poorer,

But like a good friend, I'll take that too,

If you can reply back, for, How are you?

Yeah,only if you do still recognize,

This idiot,who knows not how to write,

Name I'm leaving not,

My usual ID I'm using not,

Hide I can't though,for I'm not that clever,

It's my style for you, that's left behind here,

Work that too though,if you still remember,

More I expect not,enough it will be,even with lesser.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aww that poem is very very good 😃 very sweet and nice 😳

Nish darling that poem is great, it's all about friendship 😳 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: glasgow_gal

wow man that poem is really good, mind if i copy this poem so in future i can say this to my first love n pretend ive written it?? 😳 please petty please

Yeah ofcourse you can use it cause i never got around to use it cause i never got the chance to but hey atleast it help you. go for it😉

Edited by Arooj_007 - 18 years ago

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