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khulh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

i don't know what to say i have mixed feelings .
i'm feeling so sad for sanju , in the first i was laughing but when he refused her i felt so bad
and really vidya made me laugh sooooo much
and i'm soooo happy because kal will be sagar aur vidya ke sagaye

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Thanks mijanur for commenting but plz do write about your likes and dislikes of the update too. Still didn't receive comments from Sana and Neha. Wondering when they will comment. Anyways, here is my next update. Enjoy.

Sanju is in the church sitting on her knees in front of God. Tears are rolling down her cheeks and her hands are folded. She is praying to God, "God, aaj main jo karne jaa rahi hoon, please uss mein aap mere saath rehena. Please meri help karna. Please." Saying this, she picks up her phone and dials someone's number. She says to herself with a determined look, "Sahil, aaj tum sach bologe ya phir aaj iss dunia mein meri aakhri din hogi." Here, Sahil is in his room crying and holding his and Sanju's picture which was clicked when they won the 'act and dance competition' trophy. When he sees Sanju's smiley face in the picture, he says to himself very sadly, "Laanat hai mujhpe. Jisse pyaar karta hoon, usse apni dil ki baat bol bhi nahin sakta. Aur uske upar usse itna dukh dena padhta hai. Bhagwan, mere saath hi aisa kyun kar rahe ho aap? Ek hi cheez maanga tha ke Sanju ke saath ek happy life bitaa saku aur woh bhi nahin ho sakta kyuki..." Suddenly, he gets a call. Seeing Sanju's name on his phone screen, he looks shocked. He says to himself, "Itna kuch hone ke baad bhi Sanju ne phone kyun kia? I hope sab theek ho." Sahil wipes out his tears and nervously picks up the call. "Hello", he nervously says. Sanju determinedly says, "St. Mary's Church mein main tumhara intezaar kar rahi hoon. Aadhe ghante mein yaha pohoch jaao." Sahil pretends to be rude and says, "Main nahin aa sakta." "Agar tum adhe ghante mein yaha nahi pohoche toh phir main yaha hi apni jaan de dungi.", Sanju very seriously says. "Yeh kya pagalpan hai Sanju?", Sahil concernedly asks. Sanju replies seriously, "Adhe ghante mein pohoch jaao warna tum mujhe zinda nahin dekhoge, i promise." "Kuch nahin karogi tum. Main adhe ghante mein pohoch ta hoon.", Sahil says with a very worried and concerned look. Sanju cuts off the phone, wipes out her tears and says to God folding her hands, "Aab sab aapke haatho mein hai god. Mujhe yakeen hai ke aap jo karoge theek hi karoge." She keeps praying folding her hands and closing her eyes.

It's noon. Sagar is in Vidya's room, lying on sofa and looking at Vidya. He keeps looking how innocently Vidya is sleeping. A breeze of wind comes and Vidya's hairs blow onto her face. Sagar sees this and goes near her. He sits near on his knees on the floor near Vidya. He takes away Vidya's hairs from her face and runs his fingers through her hairs. Vidya is innocently sleeping. Sagar then kisses Vidya on her cheek. Vidya is slowly waking up. Sagar thinks in mind, "Arey yeh toh jaag rahi hai." Thinking this, he rushes to the kitchen. Very quickly, he makes lemon juice for Vidya. He looks very cute while making it. Then he puts the glass of lemon juice on the trey and walks to Vidya's room. He sees Vidya sitting on bed and her right hand is on her head. Vidya says closing her eyes and putting her hand on her head, "Yeh sar kyun ghum raha hai?" Sagar smiles and says, "5 glass bhaang pine ke baad sar ghume naa toh aur kya hoga?" Vidya gets shocked and says, "Main? Bhaang? 5 glasses? Kya baat kar rahe ho?" "Haan ji. Bilkul theek bol raha hoon. Aur bhaang pine ke baad tumne jo kia woh toh...!" Saying this, he mischievously smiles. "Kya kia maine?", Vidya confusingly asks. Sagar smiles cutely and naughtily and says, "Tumne mujhe hot kaha, dashing kaha, aur sexy bhi kaha." Vidya gets shocked and she puts her fingers on her lips. Sagar makes a funny face and says, "Aur yehi nahin. Tumhe mujhe apni taraf khich kar kiss bhi kia yaha." (puts his finger on his lips) Vidya makes her eyes wide and says, "Haaiii rabba!" Sagar comes close to Vidya and says lovingly and with romance, "Iss mein itna shocked hone ki kya zarurat hai. Arey yaar hum dono isse bhi jyada karib aa chuke hai toh phir yeh kya cheez hai." Vidya smiles and blushes. Seeing the sweet smile and the blushing cheeks of Vidya, Sagar cutely smiles and then he bends down his head near Vidya's womb. Vidya is smiling continuously. Sagar cutely says, "Angel, aapki maa itni kyun sharmaati hai? Inhe bol nahi sakte ke itna naa sharmaaye." Vidya smiles and playfully hits Sagar on his head. Sagar laughs out. Then he says cutely, "Accha aab bohot mazaak ho gaya. Aab yeh lemon juice jaldi se khatam karlo." Vidya makes an irritated look and says, "Nahin mujhe nahin pina plz." Sagar smiles and says very cutely, "Mere liye bhi nahin?" Vidya smiles and says, "Accha theek hai." Sagar gives the lemon juice glass to Vidya and Vidya, in one sip, finishes the drink making a cute face. Sagar smiles and says, "That's my Vidya. Aab dekhna tum kuch der mein behetar feel karogi." Vidya smiles and nods her head. Sagar smiles and hugs Vidya. Vidya hugs him back!!! <3

Sanju is walking here and there in the church and waiting for Sahil. Sahil comes there pretending to be rude and says, "Kyun bulaya mujhe yaha?" Sanju turns her face to Sahil. Sahil sees Sanju's eyes teary and feels sad. But he tries his best to hide his real emotions. Sanju says very seriously, "Kya tum mujhse pyaar karte ho?" Sahil pretends to be rude and irritated and says, "Maine tumse pehele bhi kaha naa ke main tumse pyaar nahi karta." "Nahi karte?", Sanju asks determinedly with lots of emotions in her eyes. "Nahi!", Sahil replies very rudely. With teary eyes, Sanju says, "Agar tum mujhse pyaar nahin karte toh phir mere jine ka koi matlab nahin hai." Saying this, she immediately takes the bottle of poison from her purse and was about to drink it. At the right moment, Sahil holds her hand, takes the poison bottle from her hand, throws it and says worriedly, "Yeh kya kar rahi ho Sanju? Yeh kya pagalpan hai? Plz dont do like this." Sanju looks at Sahil with teary eyes and says, "Main tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon Sahil, lekin agar tum mujhse pyaar nahin karte toh phir main mar jaanaa hi pasand karungi. Aur tumhe meri itni fikar kyun ho rahi hai? Tum toh mujhse pyaar nahin karte." Sahil looks very worried and he says, "Tumhari zindagi mere liye bohot importance rakti hai Sanju." Sanju asks seriously, "Kyun? Tum toh mujhse pyaar nahin karte toh phir main jeeyu ya maru, isse tumhe kya?" "Kyuki tum Vidya ki dost ho.", Sahil says looking to other side. Sanju makes Sahil turn to her side and says seriously, "Sirf Vidya ki dost iss liye? Kya tum mere liye kuch bhi feel nahin karte?" Sahil looks down and says, "Nahin!" Sanju makes Sahil look at herself and says, "Toh phir tumhare aakho mein aasu kyun hai Sahil?" "Aasu? Nahin toh," Sahil replies nervously. Sanju screams out loud, "Toh phir tum nahin manoge ke tum mujhse pyaar karte ho. Theek hai. Chale jao phir. Aur mujhe marne ke liye chordo." Sahil says worriedly, "Marne ke chod doo? Yeh kaisi baat kar rahi ho tum?" Sanju screams out loud with lots of pain, "Just leave. I wanna die. Just go away." Saying this, she breaks down and falls on the floor. Seeing Sanju in that condition, Sahil fails to control his emotions any more and he breaks down and falls onto the floor too. Both are crying. Sahil holds Sanju's cheeks and says, "Please aisa mat kaho. Please dont cry like this. I can't see you like this. Please I beg." , Sanju moves away Sahil's hands and says while crying,"Why can't you see me like this? Why? You don't love me naa? So what's your problem? Just go away." Tears began to roll down Sahil's eyes and he holds Sanju's cheeks and makes her look at himself, "I can't go away leaving you like this. Main nahin jaa sakta." Sanju looks at Sahil's eyes with teary eyes, sees him crying and says very emotionally, "Kyun nahi jaa sakte?" Sahil is unable to control his feelings anymore and he tells very emotionally, "Kyuki main tumse pyaar karta hoon." Hearing this, Sanju keeps looking at Sahil. A little smile comes on her face and her eyes are still teary. Sahil continues with teary eyes and emotional look, "Haan bohot pyaar karta hoon tumse. Tum mere liye meri sab kuch ho. Nahi ji sakta tumhare bina." Saying this, he hugs Sanju. Sanju smiles sweetly and hugs him back!!! <3 Hugging season goes on for long. Sahil thinks in mind worriedly, "Yeh main kya kar raha hoon? Kyun khud ko rok nahin paya? Yeh nahin hona chahiye. Mujhe khud ko rok naa hi padega." Thinking this, he moves back hesitantly. Sanju confusingly asks, "Kya hua?" "Yeh nahin ho sakta. Hum dono kabhi ek nahin ho sakte," Sahil tells with teary eyes and very emotionally. Sanju is shocked and she says, "Kyun Sahil? Aakhir baat kya hai? Tumhari koi problem hai kya? Mujhe bataao Sahil. Kyun aisa kehe rahe ho." Sahil tells sadly and emotionally, "Main tumhari zindagi barbaad nahin kar sakta Sanju." Sanju holds Sahil's cheeks and says lovingly, "Tum meri zindagi kabhi barbaad nahin kar sakte Sahil. Tum aisa kyun soch rahe ho? Aakhir baat kya hai? Dekho agar tumne mujhe nahin bataayaa toh phir main yehi apni jaan de dungi." Sahil puts his finger on Sanju's lips and says, "Please aisi baate dubara mat bolna." "Toh phir bataao baat kya hai.", Sanju asks worriedly. Sahil closes his eyes and very emotionally he tells Sanju, "Mere pas bohot kam time bachaa hai Sanju. I'm suffering from Brain tumor." Saying this, tears began to roll down Sahil's eyes. Sanju is shocked. Tears roll down Sanju's eyes too.

Precap: Sahil tells Sanju not to tell about his illness to Sagar and Vidya as tomorrow is their engagement.

Here's the end. Hope u all will like this part. Likes and dislikes, please. Waiting for your comments. Take care. Love... Bidz... 😳

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

ITS A VERY GOOD FF.I WAS A BIG FAN OF DULHANN.I LIKE THIS FF CONCEPT & LOVE BOND BETWEN SV.

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_SilentSoul_

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Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: mijanur
ITS A VERY GOOD FF.I WAS A BIG FAN OF DULHANN.I LIKE THIS FF CONCEPT & LOVE BOND BETWEN SV.

Thanks so much 😳
Keep reading the updates 😊
Will appreciate your comments 😃
Take care 😊

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khulh

@khulh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

hi bidu
i love sagar and vidya's scene so much and i imagined vidya's face when sagar told her what she did hahaha
and i was worried that what sanju will do to know if sahil love her or not
and now i can't wait to know what will happend with them
waiting for the next

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Neha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Awesome update !

Loved it !

Waiting for next !

Update soon !

Thnx for pm !

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_SilentSoul_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Thanks Fatima, Mijanur and Neha for your comments. Here's my next update. Have fun reading this. And yeah, the story is focusing on Sahil Sanju love story so please forgive me if you feel there are less SV scenes but truly I try my best to put SV scenes as well with the SS scenes.

Vidya comes out of the washroom after taking shower. She wore a pink salwar suit and she's looking beautiful as always. Her hairs are open and wet. Sagar comes in and keeps looking at Vidya when Vidya's back was towards Sagar and Vidya is drying her hairs standing in front of the window. Sagar could see the knot at the back of Vidya's salwar suit was untied as Vidya's hairs were all in one side. Seeing this, he goes close to Vidya and tells softly at her ears, "Vidya." Vidya shakes in shy. Sagar continues telling to Vidya lovingly, "Tum bhige baalo mein bohot khubsurat lagti ho." Hearing this, Vidya smiles very sweetly and shyly. Sagar continues saying softly, "Tumhara knot khula hai." Vidya blushes, smiles and softly tells, "Baandh do." Sagar gives his million bucks smile and touches Vidya's back to tie her knot. Vidya closes her eyes. Sagar ties the knot with a smiley and loving face. Vidya smiles and opens her eyes. Sagar makes Vidya turn towards him and says in a caring way, "Chalo lunch karlo. Itni der bhuke rehena theek nahin hai." Vidya says with a guilty look, "Areey main toh aaj khanaa banaa hi nahin paayi." Sagar smiles and says, "Toh maine banaa diya." Vidya gets shocked and says, "Tumne?" Sagar cutely says, "Areey iss mein itna shocked hone ki kya baat hai? Tum janti ho naa ke main thoda bohot khanaa banaa leta hoon." Vidya says confusingly, "Haan par.." Sagar puts his finger on Vidya's lips and says, "Ssshh! Aab baatein bandh aur jaldi se chalo lunch karle. Maine tumhare liye kuch khaas banaayaa hai." Saying this, Sagar smiles shyly. Vidya raises her brows and says smilingly, "Khaas? Aab toh mujhe khanaa hi padega. Chalo." Sagar smiles and both goes to the dinning table.

Sanju is shocked. Tears are rolling down from Sanju's and Sahil's eyes. Sahil continues talking making a sad face, "Haan Sanju! Mere dimaag mein tumor hai. Yehi vajaah thi ke maine tumse apni feelings chupaayi rakkhi. Kyuki future mein main tumhe pal pal marte huye nahi dekhna chahta tha. Main nahin chahta tha ke mere iss dunia se jaane ke baad..." While Sahil was going to say further, Sanju covered his mouth with her palm and says with a determined serious look, "Tumhe kuch nahin hoga." Sanju takes off her palm. Sahil is amazed seeing Sanju's belief. Sanju wipes her tears from her cheeks and says, "Mujhe apne God par, aur mere pyaar par pura yakeen hai. Mere rehete main tumhe kuch nahin hone dungi. Maut ko tumse pehele mujhse hokar guzar naa padega." Sahil immediately covers Sanju's mouth and says worriedly, "Bhagwaan naa kare ke yeh sab ho. Aisi baat phir se kabhi mat kehena." Sanju takes away Sahil's palm and says very seriously, "Doctor ne iske ilaaj ke baare mein kuch toh batayaa hoga tumhe..?!" Sahil says making a sad face, "Operation karke tumor nikaalaa jaa sakta hai par..." Sanju asks confusingly, "Par kya?" Sahil continues, "Operation successful hone ka chance 30% hai aur 70% chance hai meri jaan..." Sanju makes a tensed look and says, "Aisa kuch nahin hoga. Tum kal hi doctor se baat karoge aur jaldh se jaldh tumhara operation hoga." Sahil tells worriedly, "Main operation nahin karwaayunga." Sanju asks shockingly and confusingly, "Par kyun?" Sahil continues, "Agar operation nahin karwaataa hoon toh mere pas 2 mahine hai jeene ke liye aur agar operation karwaayaa toh jaldi hi agar main.. Aur waise bhi operation successful hone ki sirf 30% chances hai." Sanju holds Sahil's cheeks and says very lovingly with a determined look, "Negative mat socho, Sahil. Tumhe kuch nahin hoga. Mujhe vishwaas hai." Sahil's eyes become teary seeing Sanju's strong belief. He holds Sanju's hands which were on his cheek and kisses them. Then he hugs her. Sanju hugs Sahil back! Sanju thinks in mind, "God, mujhe itni strength dena ki main Sahil ke saamne kamzor naa paru. Mujhe strong bannaa hoga Sahil ke liye. Please god, meri help karna ke main apni emotions ko control kar saku. Aur please mere Sahil ko kuch nahin hona chahiye." Sahil looks worried and he moves back. Sanju says confusingly, "Kya hua? Itne pareshaan kyun dikh rahe ho?" Sahil says seriously, "Main sirf tumhare kehene par operation karwaayunga par yeh baat Sagar aur Vidya ko pataa nahin lagna chahiye. Kal unn dono ki engagement hai aur main nahin chahta ki meri vajar se unn dono ki khushi kharaab ho. Please mujhse wadaa karo ke unn dono ko tum kuch nahin bataayogi." Sanju says confusingly, "Par..?!" Sahil says in a requesting way, "Please." Sanju agrees and says, "Accha theek hai, Sagar aur Vidya ko iss ke baare mein kuch pataa nahin lagega." Sahil smiles and says, "Mujhe samajhne ke liye thanks." Sanju smiles and both hugs again. Tears starts to roll down Sanju's eyes but Sanju wipes those quickly so that Sahil doesn't get to know about it.

Sagar and Vidya are sitting in the dinning room. Sagar is feeding Vidya very lovingly and Vidya does the same. Vidya says smilingly, "Bohot yummy chicken banaayaa hai. Its really tasty." Sagar smiles sweetly and says, "Thanks." Sagar continues telling smilingly and lovingly, "Tumhare liye ek surprise hai." Vidya asks confusingly, "Kya?" Sagar smiles and says, "Chalo mere saath." Sagar binds a cloth on Vidya's eyes. Vidya smiles and says, "Yeh kya kar rahe ho?" Sagar cutely says, "Ssshh! Chup chap mere saath chalo." Saying this, Sagar takes Vidya in a room and takes off the cloth from Vidya's eyes. Vidya sees the room. The whole room is decorated with toys and the walls are of different colors. Seeing all these, Vidya gives the biggest smile ever.

Precap: On the engagement day, Sanju is helping Vidya in wearing her lehenga and ornaments. On the other hand, Sahil is helping Sagar in fixing his sherwani.

Here's the end. Hope you'll like it. Don't forget to comment telling about your likes and dislikes. Will wait for the comments. And the next update will be the SV Engagement Special Update. So wait for that! ;) Take care. Love... Bidz!!! :)

Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago

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khulh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

i love it sooooooo much
i love sagar and vidya's scene soooooo much yaar
and i liked sagar's surprise sooooo much
and i like sahil and sanju's very very much
it was sooooo emotional
waiting for sagar and vidya's sgayee