SD SS: Love In Flight UPD = PG 25 (6/10-09)

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Bhoo

@canideactivate

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

OMG GG amazaing update!!! A bit short, but still very very amazing!! I read it like the day you wrote it, but I keep forgeting to comment...

I'm very very happy that Kishen is afraid of Sharad!! He knows he can't have her!! I wish Sharad was this possesive over me that would be pretty sexy!!

Update Nowww!!!!

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#142

OMG GG amazaing update!!! Thank you sio much Bhumi! 😳😊😳

A bit short, but still very very amazing!!

Well they all can't be 15 paragraphs long. 😆 Besides, just makes ya hungry for more ... right? <<wicked lil' grin>> :

[[ ::rubbing hands together::: "da plan is working" <<evil laugh>> ]]

I read it like the day you wrote it, but I keep forgeting to comment...

Wellllllllll ... at least you remembered now! 😊

I'm very very happy that Kishen is afraid of Sharad!! He knows he can't have her!!

Honestly, Kishen really is - just - a friend. 😊

I wish Sharad was this possesive over me that would be pretty sexy!!

Welllllll Bhoomika ... yanno that can happen! At least it can if I write a besharam scene with you and Sharad. Oh! But that's right! No Pie for Bhumi! No Pie on the menu. No Dreams of Pie! No dancing with Pie. No nuffin with Pie! 😈

Update Nowww!!!! <<raising pointed brow>> <<shaking head>>

<<giving you the "Seriously!? You're kidding - right!" look>>

Sooooooooooo ..... how's your update coming Bhumi ... hmmmm? 😃

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#143

UPDD haha pleashhhhhhhh

Hey Tari! I'm actually working on the update - but I'm sorta at a crossroads. I'm trying to decide if this is going to be the last update or not. Cuz I still have GC & EOL to update as well. So I have some thinking to do about what and how, depending of course, on what I decide to do. 😊

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Rina

@Rayanaa

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: fire_woman
Rayanaa = Sorry Sorry, I'm really very shorry GG. I know you are a little bit angry at me. But still I'm sorry.
Why would I be angry with you pari? I'm not, never could be, you are too much of a sweetheart for anyone to be angry at/with you! 🤗

Actually GG I had a lot to do. The shool is starting too. I have to repeat, I mean I have to be prepared. I want this year to go perfect with me. I always do this when I am at home. I study a lot.

Rina, I know how important school is - and is too you! I could hardly fault you for wanting to be prepared, do your very best, and succeed! So no worries! You concentrate on what's most important - and reading an update isn't - school is!

But anyways great, fab,outstanding updates.

Shukriya meri pyaari dost, bahut shukriya! 😳😊😳

I'm really very sorry for my late comment. But I hope you understand what I mean. Yes I agree, I was online sometimes but I had a lot to do. But I hope you will forgive me.

Nebber you mind 'bout all that! Just do well, be happy, and drop us a note occasionly - when you have time. 😊

Best of Luck with the new school year pyaari! 👍🏼

Aww so sweet of you. I knew you will understand me. Infact I know you😛
But anyways good luck with eveyrthing GG. Have fun and be always happy.
See you soon with a new update.

Byebye sweetie
xo Rina

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Kimberly [ nickname = gg~ ]

@fire_woman

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#145

EXCERPT: 13-8/09

THIS IS A SHORT EXCERPT from Part Five, the next - or possibly final - update. Hope you enjoy. 😊

Like today, she had been so still and lovely in his arms. Nuzzling his cheek against the loose tendrils at her temple, he sighed quietly. "What are we gonna do about this Diva?" Divyanka's eyes popped open at his quiet question. She had been so lost in his touch, the feel of his lips caressing her skin, that she forgot everything, but being held by Sharad. He was pressed so closely, the damp from his clothes was seeping into the back of her sari. When Sharad whispered butterfly kisses over the slender curve of her neck, she lost the ability to speak. When his lips trailed across her skin, exposed by her choli, pulling down the material to nip at the apple of her shoulder, she forgot how to breathe. And when he turned her in his arms, his eyes hot and fierce and pressed his forehead to hers, she lost the ability to think. And she didn't, she just surrendered with a tremulous sigh, sliding her arms around his waist. Lowering his mouth very slowly to hers, he waited for her to protest. When she didn't, he sipped very gently at her mouth. Slowly, slowly, slowly savoring the silk of her lips, flicking his tongue at the curve. He traced over her mouth,

teasing and tantalizing her, tempting and enticing her to part those plump, trembling lips so he could taste her sweetness.

I haven't quite decided if I want to end LIF or not. As I'm not certain where I want it to go, just yet. I'm doing a lot of writing and re-writing - so please - be patient. And stay tuned! 😊

Edited by fire_woman - 16 years ago

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: fire_woman

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#147

😆 i was just htinking what would happen if sd read this.would cherish their expression😆 thanks for the exerpt....................can't wait to see this steaming next(maybe last)update!! it was shoo garam already!! wonder how much masala there is gnna be in the update!! btw, can't wait til eol update!! thnx soo much for this!! it was fabulous!

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TTT

@Tariii

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#148

yup NO you shouldnt end this FF. that would be a bad idea. i mean seriously. we need writers like you, we have, sooo please dont end this story. expecting such great twists and turns the way you write just grabs me and when i see that its almost ending, i ready EXTRA slowly, when ive reached the end of the upd, i read it again, slowly. See, THAT'S how great your writing is.

you know how some SD fans, watch all their scenes over and over again, well i read this and i get the entertainment that those fans get when they watch sd scenes .

similar to my first comment on this SS. MY words cant explain what you\ve done to me. and what this writing of yours has done. Maybe if i had your writing style, i could\ve pulled it off, and explained beautifully exactly how i feel about this.

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@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#149

WOOOW!! TRUlyy wooow....have i missed an update or someting when did SD confess to each other ....enywy beautiful update...and about finishing the FF ...please give us a few more updates...your writing amazing and it is going to be missed