FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: sv_4eva
Gina Di!!!! I just finished reading all of the updates...and what can I say????? I love it!!! It's a fabulous, fantastic, marvelous, wonderful story!!!! I just love how u describe everything....such a lovely story!!!! Continue soon!! waiting desperately....😃

Oh wow you started reading my FF, hehe 😳 Well I'm glad to have one more reader ! 😆
Awww thanks meri pyaari si Farhana. You're too kind !

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Posted: 16 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: svforever
ATB!!

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yes dear, you almost reserved the first spot hehe 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: svforever
That was sooooo hilarious! Priya is so bholi....but Prem, I just love him. So sweet and down-to-earth......di, this is one the best updates you have ever given......now that I think of it......all your updates were always great and wonderful.....please continue soon, bye luv ya!

Hehe I'm glad you enjoyed it ! 😛
I know nah, Prem is very premi, isn't he 😍 😆
Oh wow, maybe I should have a voting done, to see which update you all like the best 😆 Just kidding !
Thank u jaanu, a very big thank you dearest <3 <3

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Posted: 16 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: Suha_18
Aaahh....what's this...*Suhana rubs her eyes*...am I dreaming...did Gina udpate?? Hehee....great update
Yes .. You are dreaming ... You are dreaming .. Gina didn't update ... Hehe just kidding !
Gina...and I agree...this update is like one of the best you've written so far!! It was wonderful!!! 👏
Oh wow, thanks hehe ! Everyone keeps saying that .. Hmm, you all haven't read the .. oopsie spoiler hehe

They way you used Desi Girl with Prem and her new look was amazing...hehe...I was just thinking about this song...then I read your udpate...what a coincidence...this song definitely describes Priya (and Divyanka) perfectly!!! 😃 Hihi yes .. aur aapko bhi =) Aap hai meri, desi girl, desi girl hehehe ..
And when Priya called Prem's friends 'bhaiya'...it was sooooo funny...Priya is a very smart girl....and Prem is just...jeez...how do I describe this guy...too good...😍Prem is just ... Premi ... haiii ..
Thanks Maleka ji ! Thenkoo very much <3 <3

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Posted: 16 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: SDforever
its ok gina!! i hope ur feeling ok?? i know i was sick too. hope ya feel better!! gr8 update i just loved it sooooo much!! but i still kinda like the priya in the dress better. lol. thats me, i luv girls in dresses and stuff verses sarees!! but its ok as long as prem accepts her however she is! update soon!! i love u soooooooooooo much ginaaaaaaaa!!

Yes, I am feeling much better now. I have recovered, aww thanks =)
I am glad you liked it ! Hmm I like both dresses and traditional wear ..
Thank u meri pyaari si Neha ! Miss you, have fun in Disney land =D 😛 😛

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Posted: 16 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: Suha_18
Oh Gina...I just realised something....you're an IF Dazzler now!!! Congrats!!! And you reached 50 pages of your FF...when you posted Part 25....so thats a Silver and Golden Jubilee!!! Extra congrats for that!! 😃😃 🥳

Hihi thank you dearest !
Yupp I'm dazzling 😆 Doesn't it show ? 😛 Hehehe ..
Oooo thanks dear .. Yupp part 25 .. I think I'll end it at part 50, what do you think ? 😊 This summer at least ..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: kirancanada1

obviously priya would look pretty
when prem weds priya, there will be a wedding where priya makes herself look hawt!
but if you get too much danda then you won't like it

Yes Priya aka Divyanka is very very very beautiful 😛

Hehehe ok 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

#398

Hello ji !

I will update as regular every friday. But since exams are coming up, there might be a slight change, but if that happens, I'll let y'all know. As of for now, regularly updates on fridays 😛
So here it is, part 26, Enjoy ! It starts with a dialogue between a guy and a girl. Guess who ? 😆 :

-There's something I need to tell you, he said and got the courage to finally tell her what he felt.
-Okay, tell me, she said randomly
-It's important, he said with a bit more serious voice
-Okaaay, tell me then, she said and was getting curious. What was it, she thought to herself.
-It's something I want to tell you, something I...
-Okay seriously I am getting anxious here, just tell me!
-I... he said and then stopped. Maybe it's too early he thought. But then he looked at her face. Her beautiful face, those mesmerizing eyes and that breathtaking smile. No, I have to do this now, he thought to himself.
-You...? she said and tried to find out what he wanted to say.
-love you, he said and smiled.
She got surprised and looked at him.
-Did you just... she said
-Yes... he said and smiled.
She smiled too. He loved her. HE loved HER! Her love is responded ! Well she kinda knew it. But still there was a part of her which was scared, what if he didn't feel the same way for her as she did for him. But now she knows. Her love is responded !
She looked at him and thought to mess with him a bit.

-Oh, umm .. thank you, she said and turned her back.
-Huh? Th..Thaank you? he said and was surprised. Did she just say thank you when he just confessed his feelings?
-Yes, that was sweet of you to say. But I am sorry to tell you that I...
Oh boy, he thought to himself. She didn't feel the same for him. But he really thought there was love between them. He loved her. He truly, deeply, madly loved her. And he thought she felt the same. But what if she had gotten tired of him?
-...love you more, she said and smiled.
He looked at her, surprised. Love you more? He smiled. He came closer to her and put his hand on her cheek.
-Did you just... he said
-Yes... What did you think? she responded.
Both of them smiled and had an eyelock.
-I really love you, and I don't ever want us to be parted. I want you in my life, forever, he said and looked into her eyes.
-Arre main kaha ja rahi hoon? she said and smiled.
He got down on his knees.
-You are my life now. I love you. I've loved you a very long time now, I just didn't have the courage to tell you because everyone would think it was too soon. But why wait when you have found love? You're my love, my life, my present and my future. You're my everything. And I want us to be together forever. Will you marry me? he said and took out a little blue box from his pocket and opened it. Inside it was a big, beautiful diamond ring.
She got tears in her eyes. She was overwhelmed. It seemed like a dream, like a fairytale. She pinched herself on her arm. Ouch, it's really happening she thought.
-Of course I will, she said and also went down on her knees and hugged him.
He was about to put the ring on her finger, but she stopped him.
-Not yet ... First you have to ask my hand from ..., she said.
-Okay, I will come tomorrow, with my parents, he responded quickly.
He kissed her on the forehead, and they hugged.
-I love you, he told her.
-I love you more, she told him.
She was in his arms. It felt so good, she thought. Soon, she would be with him for the rest of her life. It felt good.

-Ehumm, someone said loudly.
Both of them got scared and let go of each other. They turned around and saw a girl in a dark purple salwar suit, looking at them. She was in her early twenties, but the wrinkles on her forehead which showed she was angry, made her look older. The girl was none other than Priya !
-Okay seriously, I let you two have a nice picnic in such a beautiful place, and that too privately because I trust you both. And first you two go overtime and then I see you two here in each others arms ! What if someone else saw you? You know how they are here, they will gossip and make your life miserable.
Madhu looked at her watch. It was 8.30 pm. Oops, she promised to be back at 8.
- Sorry Di, but you won't believe what happened... she said and smiled.
Priya looked at both of them. Mohit and Madhu. Ufff, why are they in such a hurry, she thought to herself. Then she noticed how Mohit was down on his knees, and that he was holding a little blue box. Oh no, she thought.
-Yeh kya hai? Seriously, I told both of you that it's too early !
-But Di, it's been almost three weeks now. And that's a long time. And we both love each other, please...
Priya sighed. She looked at her sister. Her 21 yearold sister, who suddenly seemed more like an adult than a teenager as she always had seen her.
- Priya ji, I love Madhu from the bottom of my heart. I have never, ever felt like this before. Madhuri is the one for me. She is my everything from now on. And I promise you, I will always make her happy and I will always love her and charise her, Mohit said.
-I know... I don't have any doubts about your love. But it's too early..., Priya said
-Love doesn't have a time. But if you want, I can wait. I will wait forever for her, Mohit said.
Priya looked at how Madhu was looking at Mohit, and how Mohit was looking at Madhu. There's no point of keeping the two of them away from each other. And it will go as the plan, Madhu will graduate from college, get her diploma. And she will get a wonderful, caring husband from a very good family. And her life will be settled, forever. Priya got tears in her eyes.
- I will talk to papa, and you will have to come with your family to ask for Madhu's hand from my father, Priya said.
Madhu was thrilled of joy and hugged her sister. Mohit was also very happy.
-I will talk to my parents when I come home and we will come to your house tomorrow, if it's ok? Mohit said.
-Tomorrow? Umm, sure it's okay. Now meri pyaari si choti behen, let's go. Mohit jee or should I say, jijaji, I'll see you tomorrow, Priya said and took Madhus hand and started to walk. Madhu looked at Mohit and smiled. "Tomorrow", she said. "Tomorrow", Mohit said to himself and smiled. "Tomorrow", Priya said and sighed ...

Precap: Ladke wala is coming to ladki wala's house ... hehehe

Hehe I hope I didn't confuse you all too much in the beginning. I thought it was a fun idea to write like that 😆 Since I can't have suspense in the end, I'll have it in the beginning hehehe 😛
I hope you liked it !

Have a nice weekend everyone 😊

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Suhana

@Suha_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#399

Ufff...Rajkumariji....Maleka aapko sazaa degi...main itni excited hogayti beginning parkar...mujhe laga ke Prem and Priya had confessed their feelings for each other...😆😆...oh well...I'm happy for MM...and nope...you're not ending at Part 50...I would like minimum 500 Parts if you don't mind...hehe.....

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ViSu_SD

@ViSu_SD

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Posted: 16 years ago

#400

Wow, lovely update, Gina Di!!! But u know what I seriously thought that the begining part was between Priya and Prem and I was really happy....but I'm also glad that Priya agreed for Madhu and Mohit's wedding! Fabulous update! Keep up the great work and plz continue soon.....=)!

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