(NEW) FF:Priya ka Prem Part 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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You can find part 1 here: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1062723

Hi guys, I'm back with part 2 !
First of all I want to thank you all for your great warming comments and support.;)<3


Here starts part 2:
Prem (Sharad) steps out from his red cabriolet and walks towards the college. The wind is blowing in his hair. The song bachna ae haseeno is playing in the background. He looks very stilish and cool.
Everyone is whispering and saying: Prem is here! Prem is here!
Girls are saying: He's so cute.
Guys are saying: Kya style hai, yaar
Priya says: Olo ka patha!

Prem walks into the college and stands outside the classroom. His friends, Shahid, Raja and Ajay comes too.
-Hey Prem, did you watch the game last night? Shahid asks
-Oh no yaar, I missed it
-Come on Shahid, how could Prem watch the game? Last night was his date with Anjali. Raja says
-It wasn't a date. We're just friends.
-Yeah right. Your "just" friends with the most hottest girl in Delhi. How can you NOT have a crush on her? I do!
-Me too Ajay says
-Stop it yaar. It wasn't anything like that.
-So how was it? Ajay asks

Prem remembered the night before. It was probably the most embarrising night of his life. How could I be so stupid? He thought. No, It wasn't my fault, It was hers! Leading me on like that with her talk. It was a good evening. They sat and had dinner in a fancy resturant. They ate, talked and laughed and remembered some nice memories. Then suddenly she ruins everything and blurs out:
-You know mummy and daddy nee meri shaadi ki baat karley. They said now that I'm 20 I need to settle down and make my life complete.
-Haha okay. And how do you feel? Have you found your lucky guy?
-Prem, I'm in love. And daddy approves of this person.
-What? Anju, you never told me this. Wow, congrats. Who's the lucky guy?
-He's a great guy and our families are very close but...
-What's the problem then?
-Um, I don't know how the guy feels about this. That's why I'm having this conversation with you. Prem I...
Suddenly Anjalis father came.
-Prem beta hi. How are you?
-Uncle ji! Good, and how are you? How's auntie? Wo Anju nee kuch baate..
-Ahh. Maine usko kehdiya ke wo tumse baat karle. Beta, tum to jaante ho ke aaj bahot mushkel hai ke ek acha sa larka... I mean since you two are such good friends I thought..
OMG, what are they saying? Prem do something! He thought to himself
-I'm sorry! I can't do it! Prem blurs out loudly and rises from his chair. Everyone in the resturant is watching.
-Do what beta?
-Marry Anju. Dekye Anjali bahut acha hai liken main aur shaadi? I like Anju, but not in that way. I'm sorry
-Liken Prem main to .. Anjali says
-Nahi. Anjali I'm sorry. Uncle ji, I'm sorry.
Anjali and her father starts laughing. Prem looks confused.
-Why are you laughing? This isn't funny!
-Buddhu! I don't want to marry you! I want to talk about WHICH guy I want to marry!
-Haaa beta. Maine uske kehdiya ke wo tumse baat karle kyun ke tum dono ache dost hoon, aur tum uske madaat karlo.
-Madaat?
-Haan, baat woo hai ke wo larka ke anjali pasan karti hai wo tumhara dost hai. Iselye maine socha ke tum use madaat karlo.
Prem understood everything and just realized what a fool he made of himself.

-Olo ka patha! he says to himself loudly. Just then Priya passes by and thinks he said it to her. She looks at him angrily and goes into the classroom.
-Why does she look so angry? he says to himself
-Come on everyone knows that miss perfect hates guys, if so they aren't her professors. She's a so called feminist. Anyways come on, class has started. Shahid says
They go into their class. The guys sit on their usual places, on the third bench row next to eachother.
Mrs.Sharma comes in and begins her lecture.
-From now on we are going to work with literature.
Everyone sighs, except for Priya whos sitting on the first row with her friend Pooja.
-We are going to read and write literature. Ajay spit out your gum!
-Sorry! he says
-Anyways, I will give you a theme. And that theme is... Love. I want you all to read 3 different lovestories and then write one own.You will have 3 weeks for this project. And it will be in pairs!
-Noo! someone said
Even Priya protested
-But Mrs.Sharma isn't it better if we...
-No Priya. You all will be in pairs. And this is because I want you all to really know and understand eachother. I want you all to learn on a different and new way, who knows maybe some pair fall in love? she said and giggled.
The class was quiet.
-Anyways here's the pair list. Raja you are with Pooja. Rani you are with Ajay. Priya you are with ... Prem!
Both Prem and Priya looked at Mrs.Sharma.
-But! Both of them said at the same time.
-No buts here! This is the pairs, and I suggest you befriend with each other. You will spending time with one another for 3 weeks. Today I want you all to get to know each other.
You got to be kidding with me both Prem and Priya thinks loudly.
Everyone else in class left with their partners. Prem rises up from his chair and walks to Priya.
-So, shall we go, partner?
Priya had a feeling that this will turn out bad.


Promo for part 3: I didn't know you love me Priya, Prem says to her.

Please leave comments and critics.

Thanks// theflyingdonkey
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Brilliant update!! I can't believe how badly Prem embarrased himself though....it was soooo funny!!! Aaaw man, he's called Prem!! I absolutley love that name....Prem and Priya....perfect!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suha_18

Brilliant update!! I can't believe how badly Prem embarrased himself though....it was soooo funny!!! Aaaw man, he's called Prem!! I absolutley love that name....Prem and Priya....perfect!!!



Hehe thank you.. I also love those two names, especially together ! They are perfect for each other, the names. Prem aur Priya. It reminds me of love. hehe 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow.. mindblowing.. loved it so much.. nice love story.. continue soon ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Really nice
I really loved it
Keep it up with your wonderful work
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!!!!! i read both parts! it is great! it was soooooooo funny how prem had embarrassed himself!!!!!! ooh sounds good! update soon plz, i luv this ff so far!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi everyone, thanks for all ur great comments :)

I have alot of exams and schoolprojects right now, but i promise i will update part 3 on friday 7th november 😊

Promo hint: You guys will find out what Priya ka Prem really means & stands for ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

hi everyone, thanks for all ur great comments :)

I have alot of exams and schoolprojects right now, but i promise i will update part 3 on friday 7th november 😊

Promo hint: You guys will find out what Priya ka Prem really means & stands for ;)

awesome! cant wait! good luck with your tests and projects. hope you do good!

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