FF:Love,Loss and Hope(updtd prt 10)

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piya mehta

@piya666

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

I donno that much Hindi but i will write half in Hindi and half in English

INTRO

Vidya - age 22. A beautiful , sweet , shy girl.... She's not very outgoing ...She doesn't forgive easily...Her only hope is on Sagar after her twin sisters death.....Is really into art and music....Sagar's girlfriend..

Sagar - age 22. A cute , outgoing , romantic guy........He has a bad temper....He has a self-confidence that is sometimes seen as arrogance. Vidya's boyfriend

Divya - age 22. Vidya's dead twin sister....

Sahil - age 24. Vidya's brother. He has a bad attitude ....when it comes to girls he's always there...Married to Anjana

INDEX

1 - 1
2 - 2
3 - 3
4 - 4
5 - 5
6 - 6
7 - 7
8 - 8
9 - 9
10 -10

Edited by piya666 - 16 years ago

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@Tariii

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Posted: 17 years ago

sound interesting, continue really soon hunn

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piya mehta

@piya666

Beginner

Posted: 17 years ago

PART 1

Vidya had lived in this house for twenty two years , all of her life, and she had never been afraid here before
She was afraid now.
She used to sleep through the night, secure in knowing her twin sister, Divya , was behind her in the big bed , and more often than not feeling the weight of Herry, her dog , against her feet and smelling his familiar doggie aroma.
Tonight Vidya awoke in darkness, alone in the bed, for even Herry had deserted her.For a moment she didn't remember that Divya was gone, that she would not be coming back, and then the pain his her like a physical blow.It knocked the wind out of her, and she made a protesting sound.
A moment later she heard the clicking of big toenails the wooden floor before they were soften by the rag rug , and the bear-sized nose nudged coldly at her out flung hand
The dog whined, echoing her own misery.
"Where have you been?" Vidya demanded, and he whined again as he leaped onto the bed, nearly crushing her when his 120 pounds collapsed against her legs.
She answered her own question."you're looking for her , aren't you?" Her hand crept down to fondle the shaggy fur, the ear that pricked up at the of her voice. "I kept looking for her too , Herry"
She swallowed hard , knowing it didn't matter if she spoke aloud to the dog.There was no one to hear her in the empty house.
"She's gone, you know.She's not coming

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Rina

@Rayanaa

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

Wow the start was very good.
I loved the start and I'm 100% sure that you will go very far.
I just want to wish you all the best and luck in your life.👍🏼 Hope you'll get every happiness in the world.
But continue soon when you get some time. You have done a great job and just keep it up.
But take care and keep smiling...If you don't trust me then go to your mirror and give a smile and then you'll know how sweet you're. By the way what's your name?😊

Love S.Rina