FF-Chup Chup Ke Pyar Hogya(3)Last Update pg 54 - Page 36

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sherrygurl

FANTASTIC UPDATE!!!!!!

OMg omg omg Why is Divya being balmed??? I need an answer right now.....😕 Seriously...

Now i don't want muddasar to go to jail i want him dead. You hear me.. You have to kill him somehow..
Allah toba itni problems😭
Update soonnnnnn

Thanks! Ahh..Divya is being blame because somewhow it leak into Amar finding Divya. 😳 Dead? Isn't that a little harsh but I'll see what I can do... Don't cry ..Everything will be better soon. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

~Part 154~

Recap: Amar wakes up. Usman learns that Divya is behind Amar's murder attempts. He tells Amar and Divya also hears this on the phone.

Divya is about to yell but Muddassar shuts the phone. He smiles at her.

Divya: Deka! Mene kaha ke Amar zinda hai.

Muddassar: Toh. Amar ko taba karne ke aur bi tarika hai aur ye aik hai. Tum dono ko alag karna. Jis larki ki katir usne kitna kuch nahi kia aaj woh hi larki uski jaan ki dushman hai. Divya is shocked and begins crying. Muddassar leaves her. Meanwhile Amar is shocked and doesn't know what to do. Believe the proofs or his heart which tell him Divya is innocent. His head begins hurting and Usman regrets telling him.

Usman: Amar tum aram karo. We'll think about this later. Amar nods and lies down. He closes his eyes.

A few days later: Divya is still in Muddassar's custody. He hasn't done anything bad to her yet but just kept her tied up. Amar is fully recovered and through out the time he would continuosly think about Divya. He didn't know what to believe. As the days progressed the police found more and more evidence against Divya which were all planted by Divya. And somehow people put in Amar's minds the thought that she could only be after his money. Amar as of right now was sitting in his room in Usman's house thinking. He had to come up with a decision because Divya was the reason he was staying in this house and he couldn't stay longer. He thought about going home but what if Divya was still here lost? He finally after thinking through came up with a decision. He was walking downstairs to tell everyone of his decision.

Amar: Uncle… Everyone stood up.

Amar: Bohut sochne ke bad mene ye fasla kia hai ke mein wapas New York ja ra hoon. Ab mere liye yahan par kuch nahi bacha. Bohut din mene Divya ko talash kia leken uska koi ata pata nahi hai. Iske matlab yehi ho sakta hai ke shaid jo baten police ne kaha woh sach hai. Isle mein wapas New York ja ra hoon. Saying that he walks upstairs and picks up his suitcase placing it on the bed. He just picks up a few of clothes that were not in the suitcase to place them in. When he opens the suitcase he sees all of Divya's clothes. He smiles and sits down touching them and holding them to his heart. He remembers his last meeting with Divya. His last kiss with Divya. It then strucks him. If Divya didn't leave with any clothes or money except his credi card then surely she must of bought something. He quickly takes out his cell phone and calls the credit card company.

Amar: Hello I'm Amar Ali. I'd like to know when the last transaction was made on my Visa Card.

Operator: The last transaction made was Wednesday 12 p.m. He them remembers that is around the time Divya left.

Amar: Thank you. He shuts his phone and puts his clothes back in the suitcase and closes it. He grabs the suitcase and runs downstairs.

Amar: Marium! Marium looks at him s tartled.

Marium: Kya huwa Amar?

Amar: Marium on Wednesday what time did you go to eat or what time was Divya missing?

Marium: Around 1 o clock. Amar feels so happy hearing this.

Amar: I knew it!

Usman: Kyun? What happened?

Amar: Mene Divya ko apna credit card dia tah.

Usman: And?

Amar: And I just called the credit card company and they said that the last purchase made was on Wednesday at 12 o clock. Marium then thinks.

Marium: Oh yea. We were in a store and Divya chose a suit for you. That's what she bought.

Amar: Exactly!

Usman: But what does this mean?

Amar: Ok look. When Divya left the house she had no money on her except my credit card. Her purse was empty besides her phone and my credit card. As far as Marium told me when Divya went missing she left everything she bought. Right? He looks at Marium.

Marium: Right.

Amar: Ok so then if per say as the police said she went missing purposely to kill me and take my money then wouldn't she have bought something? Usman thinks.

Usman: I get what you're saying.

Amar: So this totally proves that Divya didn't run away infact she was taken away.

Marium: So you're saying that Divya was kidnapped?

Amar: Yes.

Marium: But by who?

Amar: The person who wants to kill me.

Usman and Marium: What?!

Amar: Yes. Can't you see? The person knew that the police told me not to leave the house so it became difficult for him or her to kill me. And I would only leave the house if it was an emergency hence Divya being missing. I left the house looking for her but obviously they don't know where I am so they pranked called me telling me something happened to he and gave me a specific location to be so they could attack. And then they took Divya's stuff and placed it there making it look like she killed me but the truth was I didn't see one girl around that area for miles. Infact as you said Usman all MEN surrounded me. So this is a whole plot of my so called murderer. Usman and Marium just had their jaws drop and their eyes wide.

Amar: Why are you guys staring at me like that? They became normal.

Usman: Wow Amar you're so smart. Now with your smartness we can find Divya.

Amar: No.

Marium: What why?

Amar: So far the murderer thinks I believe the proof. So we have to think he's won otherwise he'll harm Divya. And this is the only way to get closer to him and find out about Divya. He has to think I left town so it he'll be careless with her. I've decided to move into an apartment near by because everyone in this town knows I am staying with you guys. I'll call you if I find out anything and you guys can call me.

Usman: Smart idea. Do you need any help finding an apartment?

Amar: Actually I saw one for rent nearby the mall.

Marium: You mean that apartment building?

Amar: Yea.

Marium: They seem nice. You better hurry.

Amar: Yea I'm going right now. I'll pay whatever it takes to stay there. Bye guys.

Both: Bye. Amar leaves and gets in his car. He drives to the building and goes to the main desk.

Amar: Hi.

Manager: Hi. He begins talking whislt Muddassar is entering the building! He walks right pass Amar not noticing him as Amar's back is to him. He walks into the elevator and goes on the fifth floor. He walks to the corner apartment and unlocks the door making sure no one is looking. He steps in and sees his men chilling out and drinking.

Muddassar: Where's Divya?

Man: Like you left her. In that room tied up and crying. All of them laugh.

Man: By the way when are you inacting your other plan?

Muddassar: Soon. I juse got word that Amar left Divya's house.

Man: And that means? The other man hits him on the head.

Man 2: That means he gave up and went back home because he has nothing better to do in Canada. Right?

Muddassar: Right. Now let me tell Divya the great news. They all smirk. The man throws Muddassar the keys to the room and Muddassar opens the door and walks in. He smiles as he sees Divya lying on the loor tied up with black and blue marks all over her. He walks up to her and splashes water on her face. Divya quickly opens her eyes.

Muddassar: Uto! Divya scared sits up after much difficulty since her body hurts. Muddassar bends down to her. Divya seems scared and doesn't make eye contact. She looks really weak too.

Muddassar: Tumhare liye aik buri kabar hai. Divya looks down.

Muddassar: Jab mein tumse baat karoon toh meri taraf deko. He said it with a harsh tone. Divya scared looked at him.

Muddassar: Anyways bad news ye hai ke tumhara Amar is bat par yakeen karta hai ke tumne use marni ki koshish ki hai aur ilse woh tume chor kar chale gya. Divya looks up scared.

Muddassar: He's given up and went back home. Divya has tears in her eyes. Muddassar laughs and leaves locking the door behind. He walks in to the living room and sits with the guys enjoying drinks. Meanwhile Amar is in the elevator coming up to the fifth floor as he got the apartment. He gets out of the elevator and walks towards Muddassar's apartmen and he opens the one right across of it. All of sudden both Amar and Divya feel as if they are very close to each other. Amar turns around and looks at Muddassars apartment. He doesn't know why but he walks forward and is close to looking through the peep hole which inside can give you the exact view of Muddassar. He walks closer and closer to the peep hole. And…

Precap: Amar and Muddassar are standing back to back.

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow...awesome update....😳 my son in law has a brain 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

wow...awesome update....😳 my son in law has a brain 😆

Thanks! 😃 Yep he has brains alright. 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update! wow amar is so smart! smarter then the one in the show. i hope he figures out that divya is in the room across his.
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Posted: 17 years ago
amzing update moomoo!!! i am in love w/ ur ff!!! i really wish that the actual amar had a brain too!! lol😆😆
and i cant wait to see what happens next!! he's in da apartment rite across from mudassar!! woo!!!!!
please please please update soon!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow! I hope Amar can save her soon! great update!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

awesome update! wow amar is so smart! smarter then the one in the show. i hope he figures out that divya is in the room across his.

Thanks! 😃 Yep my Amar is way smarter! Why do u think i put amar in the room across divya..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sharad+divz4evr

amzing update moomoo!!! i am in love w/ ur ff!!! i really wish that the actual amar had a brain too!! lol😆😆

and i cant wait to see what happens next!! he's in da apartment rite across from mudassar!! woo!!!!!
please please please update soon!!

Thanks! Aww u love my ff.. 😳 Thanks! I wish the actual Amar was like that too..but arhg.. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mushtari

loved it..continue soon

Thanks Mush! 😃

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