FF-Chup Chup Ke Pyar Hogya(3)Last Update pg 54 - Page 37

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtd11

Thanks! 😃 Yep he has brains alright. 😳

wonder wer he got the brains from 😛 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

wonder wer he got the brains from 😛 😆

Hmm... Probably from learning in oxfor university. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtd11

Hmm... Probably from learning in oxfor university. 😆

haha...u need brains to get into there 😉
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~Part 155~

Recap: Amar figures out that the murdered has kidnapped Divya. He also rents and apartment right across the apartment where Muddassar has held Divya captive. He is about to look through the peep hole.

He was about to when he saw the door knob turning. Afraid his cover might be blown he runs back into the apartment. Muddassar steps out. He closes the door behind and then his phone rings. He stands there talking on the phone. Meanwhile Amar realizes he dropped his car keys outside and walks out of the apartment. When he steps outside Muddassar's back is to him so he doesn't know it's him. He just stands with his back to Muddassar reaching down to get his keys. He picks up his keys and stands up. Muddassar begins yelling and then Amar feels as if his voice seems familiar. But when Amar turns around Muddassar has already left. Amar shrugs it off and enters his apartment. Thankfully his apartment camed fully furnished. He was pretty tired and it was almost evening time. He walked into the bedroom to unpack his suitcase. He placed the suitcase on his bed and unpacked his clothes but then noticed Divya's clothes. Tears began rolling down his eyes. He wiped them and gently with the outer most care hung them in the closet. He then placed his clothes in the closet beside hers. As he was closing the closet he noticed Divya's pink lehenga which she wore that night they had an intimate night. He smiled remembering every moment. He moved closer to the lehenga and placed a kiss on it. Meanwhile Divya felt as if she felt the kiss and she breath in.

Divya: Amar… Amar quickly turned around thinking he heard Divya but sadly nobody was there. He sighed and closed the closet door. He then realized he needed food so he grabbed his wallet and car keys and headed for the door to go grocery shopping. Meanwhile one of the men in the apartment is getting bored so decides to go bother Divya. He walks into the room but leaves the door open because the other guy is outside and there aren't chances of her running away. So per say if Divya screams her voice can be heard now. The man walks in slightly drunk. Divya is leaning against the wall thinking of moments of her and Amar. She's lost in her thoughts so she doesn't see the man. He walks up to her. (Point to be noted: They've stopped tying Divya's hands together and they just tie Divya's foot to the wall) He pulls her up. Divya looks at him and notices he is drunk. But her smart eyes catch the door open. They guys moves forward about to kiss her neck when she pushes him back and yells.

Divya: Bachao! Save me! Meanwhile Amar hears her yell.

Divya: Bachao! Amar stops in his track. He doesn't recognize the voice but he knows it's a girl. He puts his ear against the door. Divya yells again.

Divya: Bachao! Someone save me! Your probably wondering why the guys haven't done anything yet. Well the drunk dude fainted on the floor and the other doesn't realize the door is open. Stupid boys. Hehehe… Meanwhile Amar sees an old lady passing by so he decides to inquire her about the sound.

Amar: Excuse me maam.

Lady: Yes.

Amar: Who lives in this apartment?

Lady: I don't know. Three men moved in on Tuesday.

Amar: Oh.

Lady: But I must say weird stuff is going on in there.

Amar: Yea I know. I just heard some girl scream.

Lady: You should probably check. God forbid somebody needs our help.

Amar: Yes. Hold on. He rings the bell on the apartment. The man looks at the door and then realizes the room is open and Divya is yelling. He quickly locks the door so Divya's screams can't be heard. Then he runs to open the door. Amar looks at ma wide eyed.

Amar: We just heard a girl scream.

Man: And?

Amar: The noise was coming from your apartment.

Man: So. That could mean a lot of things.

Amar: Like?

Man: Like I was watching a movie and the volume was really loud. Pish you people come out of nowhere medling in other people's personal business. Get lost! He slams the door on his face. Amar steps back. The man sighs in relief. Amar just ignores it and goes grocery shopping. He's in the supermarket and was going down an aisle. And shockingly Muddassar was hanging outside that supermarket. Amar finally got what he needed and stepped outside. His eyes bursted out when he saw Muddassar getting into a car. Muddassar drove away.

Amar: What's Muddassar doing in Canada? He noticed the guy Muddassar was talking to and walked up to him.

Amar: Hey who was that guy you were talking to?

Man: Muddassar. He owns a small store here.

Amar: Oh. Amar just walks away thinking it's no big deal. (Dude it's a big deal! He has your wife captive and is trying to kill you! Men… they never learn. )Amar is in his apartment making soup. He then realizes he has no pepper. Desparate he decides to ask the people across the hall and also apologize for the mishap earlier. (Note: Those two men for some strange reason never saw Amar. LoL.) Amar slowly walks out of the apartment. He sees that old lady again. He decides to ask her first. The lady is about to go into her apartment and he runs up to her.

Amar: Excuse me miss! She turns and sees him.

Lady: Oh hi son.

Amar: Hi.

Lady: How may I help you?

Amar: Maam do you happen to have some pepper?

Lady: Oh another bachelor cooking I see.

Amar: No maam I'm not a bachelor.

Lady: Oh show your wife sent you to get pepper.

Amar: No maam my wife is not with me.

Lady: Why what happened? Amar looks down sadly.

Lady: She left you? Amar quickly looks up.

Amar: No never. Actually she's been missing for a few days. I'm really worried.

Lady: Oh wow. Well I hope you find her soon.

Amar: Thanks. Aah maam pepper?

Lady: Oh I am so sorry hun. I'll check right now.

Amar: Thank you.

Lady: You can come in if you like.

Amar: No thank you. The lady comes out after a while.

Lady: Sorry son. I'm all out.

Amar(thinks): Well that was a waist of time.

Amar: It's ok then. Thanks anyways.

Lady: You're welcome. Amar walks to Muddassar's apartment. He very cautiously rings the bell. The man opens the door.

Man: What do you want now?

Amar: I wanted to apologize for what happened earlier.

Man: Oh. Well it's ok.

Amar: Oh and do you have some pepper?

Man: Yea I'll get some. He walked into the apartment. Something pulled Amar into walking in there. He stepped in meanwhile the other man was walking out after putting Divya to sleep. When he saw Amar he quickly closed the door and locked it. Amar noticed he was worried.

Amar: Why did you lock the door? He became more worried.

Man: Why would you ask that?

Amar: Because it's your apartment and there is no need to lock your own room. Meanwhile the other man comes back.

Man: Here's your pepper.

Amar: Thanks. Amar leaves giving the other man a "I know ur up to something" look. Amar walks back into his apartment.

Amar: something is going on in that apartment. I need to figure it out because something tells me that someone is in danger.

Precap: Amar walks in to Muddassar's apartment. He opens the door to Divya's room and sees her in there.

narmz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww...moomoo awesome update and wickeddd precap 😊 update quick
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: narmz

aww...moomoo awesome update and wickeddd precap 😊 update quick

Thanks! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG.....CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE...CONTINUE ASAP MOOMOO DEAR..LOL I LOVED IT
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMGG YES!!! finally...this amar is not a fatoo!!! he has put it sense to some use!!! hopefully he'll kick some mudassar butt and save divya!!!! i loved it!!! awesome wicked...omg i am running outta words but ur ff is just omgg!!!! cont. soon...i cant wait to find out what happens next!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mushtari

OMG.....CANT WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE...CONTINUE ASAP MOOMOO DEAR..LOL I LOVED IT

Thanks! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ramsha1990

OMGG YES!!! finally...this amar is not a fatoo!!! he has put it sense to some use!!! hopefully he'll kick some mudassar butt and save divya!!!! i loved it!!! awesome wicked...omg i am running outta words but ur ff is just omgg!!!! cont. soon...i cant wait to find out what happens next!

LoL. Thanks! Hmm kick some muddassar butt..yep just wait.. 😆

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