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Rabiya

@rby_edit

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#61

Hellooooooooo Friends I come back , maine apne kaam se thoda sa waqt nikalkar Aapki farmaish par ek naya episode likh diya hai

so gus please read my episode give the comments and suggestions

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Shahara

@Shahara3

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

rby_edit, just read ALL your posts, wow this is exactly how I want the Birwa track to come out. You read my mind. DM is going to get it out Santu some way or another and you chose the way I wanted DM to find out. Just hope DM forgives Santu and they sort out their marriage and not keep secrets from one another. Excellent stuff, look forward to reading you nxt ff⭐️.

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rianicia

@rianicia

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#63

Rabiya, I read all your scenes. I must say outstanding!! mindblowing!! Lajawaab! Aapki tarref ke liye shabd kam hai. Love they way how your story unfolds.....

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Ayushi

@Ayushi_01

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#64

Hey Rabiyea...........just read your recent post.........kya batayoo kamaal kar diya hai aapne...............bahut acha likha hai...............DM aur us ka dard bahut ache se dikhayea hai................i dont think i can suggest you anything because you are creative yourself and your ideas are amazing..............so please continue soon.............👏

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crystal30

@crystal30

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Hi Rabiya...u hav showcased Dm's feelin in an amazing manner..too gud😊 I was worried as u hadn't posted ur epi. for a while.. Aap pls likhna mat chodiye..hamari request hai. Pls do post the next soon