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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dm shouts at santu becoz of office tension.santu starts crying and sleeps in guest room.After relief,dm searches her.He finds her in guest room.He says 2 her that I am sorry my dear & carries her into their room.Santu stil sleeps.He kises her & he also sleeps next 2 her.At morning,santu wakes up & she remembers the previous ni8 incident & wonders how she was here.Then she finds a rose with a card(with some words "sorry my dear,i luv u") in bathroom,cupboard,dresing table.She searches 4 who done tis & she fails 2 find.With frustration,she comes back 2 room and she was shocked.The bed was decorated with roses & jasmine.Jas spreads al over the bed & ros was decorated as a heart with arow(luv symbol).Inside heart,same words are written.Then she feels DM's hand around her waist.DM with his knees down and gives a rose and says i luv u.she starts crying & hugs him tightly.Their .... happens.In tis scene,al the other members go 4 picnic.only sanraj. Vidya akka,if u like tis scene,then u shud include tis with <?xml:namespace prefix = st1 ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:smarttags" /><st1:place w:st="on"><st1:City w:st="on">ur</st1:City></st1:place> imagination & romance.<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p>

<o:p>sorry</o:p>

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DM working hared and things come in once as all the problems could not found time at all except this time ……..DM have been in the office from the morning and now it is lunch time……<o:p></o:p>

Santo waiting for DM but no one came so she try to call him as the number of the office was written in paper for santo by DM ……. <o:p></o:p>

DM picks up the phone and santo just say ……Malik…….<o:p></o:p>

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DM: offf what u want ….I am busy right now ….can't talk with u ….u daffoed never call me at all here …u understand ….and DM close the phone in her face……tears come down as she keep looking at the phone<o:p></o:p>

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Santo feel lonely in the house bec all the family members go to the picnic and there is no one at all even champakli went to see her dadi ……..<o:p></o:p>

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Santo cry in very sadness way ……..she covers the food…….and sit on the stairs that face the door …..Waiting for any one or maybe DM ………. <o:p></o:p>

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DM …..Santo say to her self ….no I will not sitting her waiting for him after all what he say to me ……and the tears start again fall in santo cheeks……<o:p></o:p>

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Santo go upstairs to there room and when she reach the door ……<o:p></o:p>

Santo:no I will not stay with him in the same room .I think a bout him and he always yell at me …..<o:p></o:p>

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Then santo go to other room and she keeps crying …….the time just goes and suddenly it is the midnight ……..<o:p></o:p>

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DM came back in that late time from the first step in the home …….DM feel badly …..Silence is all what welcome DM ……..his eyes search for her ….where is santo? Asking him self ………his eyes catch the covers food …….then DM go to there room and open the door quietly as he expect to found santo sleeping …….but no no one there ……..<o:p></o:p>

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DM: Santo not here …where is she?<o:p></o:p>

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DM keep searching from place to place until he found her sleeping in other room with tears on her eyes as she slept while she crying…DM can't stand santo sadness his heart is crashed for her….with his hand he remove the remained tears on her cheek…….. slowly he kiss her on her forehead and in a soft way he carry her as small baby to there room with his eyes looking on her face …….a small lovely smile appear to change the sad face to happy warm one…..<o:p></o:p>

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DM but santo on the bed and he just lie beside her …..His eyes look deeply on her beauty ……..and the guilty keep growing on him<o:p></o:p>

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In the next morning santo wake up to found her self sleeping in there room on there bed ………..why I am here? How I came to this room?...santo ask her self<o:p></o:p>

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Then Santo just enter to the bathroom to found sentences written on the mirror …..<o:p></o:p>

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Good morning …….your eyes keep looking to found who is the stupid one write on the mirror……just keep smiling as long as the rain keep fall as wide as the sea is as faith keep u going as the faith in kady armm……she read it slowly as she learn how to read and write from DM<o:p></o:p>

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But santo could not understand who is the person who wrote that …….not if is ….hummmmm<o:p></o:p>

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Santo ignore what is in the mirror and when she enters the room …….there is a surprised waiting for her …..The room is decorated with flower and the bed is full with the kind of roses she loved…..jasmine one…….<o:p></o:p>

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And in the middle there is a big card in heart shape……. slowly as she can't believe the changing of the room santo came closer to the bed and pick up the card ….<o:p></o:p>

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She open it to found ………sorry …….written in a big size……tears come again to attack santo eyes but not from the sadness but from the joy in her chest ……<o:p></o:p>

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Slowly a red flower rise from the bottom and a soft voice whisper in her ear ……..my byary daffoed I am very sorry …….and ….I love u …<o:p></o:p>

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Santo turn in a fast and hug DM tightly ………in love there is no sorry …..santo told him <o:p></o:p>

<o:p> </o:p>

She kisses him on every part of his face …….and they lost in each other <o:p></o:p>

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Edited by love2211 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
that is for u dishum04
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Nice one Sara,

Liked it a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

love2211 - absouletly loved it! i have always wanted some one to make scene like this - where DM angry and shouts at her - and thne they make up - love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

🤗👏


hope you can do more of these!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
oh thank u ...........i will try to make others



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dishum04

Thanx sara 4 fulfiling my wish




u are welcom
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
Superb work sara.In luv,there is no sorry.Wow super sara.I like it so much.Super,gud,the best,marvelous,wonderful,fantastic,fabulous,excellent sara
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
I hav another idea sara.I wil send it later.U wil make sanraj scene romanticaly
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dishum04

Superb work sara.In luv,there is no sorry.Wow super sara.I like it so much.Super,gud,the best,marvelous,wonderful,fantastic,fabulous,excellent sara



your idea is the awsome i change it a little hope it not make different😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: dishum04

I hav another idea sara.I wil send it later.U wil make sanraj scene romanticaly



ok waiting for u😛

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