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Posted: 15 years ago

#581

Nice epi samarpreet...u luvd ur maulik...birwa wit karan...maulik knw the truth...luvd it dear,keep up the gud work

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kichwamaji

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Posted: 15 years ago

#582

Sanju....very nice.... I wish the creatives were even a fraction of your talent, girlfriend....keep it up!!!👍🏼

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--Magnificent--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#583

It was a super epi... ....keep going Sanju.... 👍🏼

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Shahara

@Shahara3

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Posted: 15 years ago

#584

Super Sanju, loved the new characters all good for the Mfamily. Moulik has his wife to be who will guide him in the right direction and Birwa has her hubby who in the end was her boss 😆 Look forward to you nxt post my dear 😃

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-SilverFlames-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#585

Episode 30

Santu didn't know what to say to Maulik.. His eyes were red, he had been crying.
As Santu placed her hand upon Maulik's shoulder he looked around to face her but his eyes could not meet hers.

Maulik: Why Maa? Such a big sacrifice? I remember coming to the jail knowing that you didn't kill Arjan and calling you a fool for taking the blame' but Birwa? How? I mean she was so young..

Santu tells Maulik everything about the murder.. He feels guilty and holds Santu's hand..

Maulik: You know Maa, It was my fault that you went to jail, if I had realised all this hatred would only ruin my happiness I would never have been so selfish..
It was me who killed Arjan, it was me who separated you from this house, it was me who instigated Arjan and made him into an animal.. I am to fault for Khemi's behaviour today.

Santu: It's destiny.. Whatever fate had in store for us we had to accept and there is no point in bringing up the past and causing more pain..

Maulik: I did wrong for not understanding you at an earlier stage, had I none of this would have happened.
It was me who caused all the problems so it will be me who clears all the mess once and for all.

Saying this Maulik walked out of the room with a determined face.

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Hours after Maulik had found out the truth, he was sat in the living room, HiRal came and so did all the other members including DM and Santu.

Maulik: I am glad everyone is here, there is some things that you should all know.
I have phoned Shashank Jiju and he will be bringing the others.

Khemi: We don't have time to waste here, I need to go to the office and sort out the consignment.

Maulik: That all has to wait. This is an important matter that has to be resolved and until it isn't no one will leave.

Just then Champa came in and informed everyone that Baa and Bapuji had come.

Baa walked in with Shanky holding onto his arm and Kaddu followed with Babuji, Birwa, Karan and Nandini.

Seeing Nandini, Krishna smiled and ran to greet his cousin..

Baa sat down and Babuji stood near Maulik and asked why he has called everyone..

Maulik: I want to tell you all something..

Santu worried and scared looked at Birwa and again at Maulik..

Maulik: Well.. As you all know tomorrow is Hiten bhai and Toral bhabi's 12th Wedding Anniversary and I want to celebrate with dhoom daam..
I want the family to be one again, even if it is for a few hours..

Hiten stormed off into his room and Toral followed him..

Toral: What is wrong? Why have you come here for? He is trying to bridge the differences and you?

Hiten: That's exactly it.. I am ashamed that what I couldn't do in years, he did with one conversation' But why?

Toral: Because life has it's way of playing with us.. I mean maybe Maulik wants to whole family together again.. Maybe it is time we stopped acting like sulking 10 year olds and realize that there is no guarantee of life and that we have to be the bigger person and let bygones be bygones. Money, riches.. Everyting stays here when we are dead.. Arjan tried to attack Dad for money and ended up dead.. But did he take anything with him? Nothing right.. So why are we being silly and arguing for material sake..
Understanding what Toral was saying Hiten hugged his wife for the first time after many years..

Hiten: I want to apologise to you.. I know I have been a money making machine lately and it has been days, even years since we spoke properly. Please forgive me..

Toral looked at Hiten hugged him tightly..

The couple returned downstairs and looked at Maulik..

Maulik and Hiten stood face to face.

Maulik: I-

Hiten: I am sorry.. So what time are we having the party?

Maulik smiled and embraced his brother' Santu was happy that one relationship had been rebuilt and slowly all the relations would sorted.. She was worried however as she had expected something else.. But this better that what she had feared.

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The Next Day.. Evening..

The day went by very quickly and all the guests started to arrive, the party was in full swing and was done without any troubles..

Santu looked at her family happy that everyone was together again and watched everyone laughing and smiling.

Nanaji and Monghi too had joined..

As the guest disappeared and the night came to end only leaving the M-family, Nanaji, Monghi, Virat and Surekha.

Maulik: I want everyone's attention please..

Hiten: Ab kya Maulik, another big surprise.. He said smiling..

Maulik: Yes.. A very big surprise.. In fact it is something that will blow everyone away'

A short button nosed boy with specs peeped out and smiled.. Toral shrieked with joy and everyone else looked at Toral and understood instantly that it was HiRal's son Aarav.

Aarav walked over and stood by Toral and threw his arms around her waist..

Aarav: Hey Mom

Toral: Hello beta..

Aarav: How have you beeen? Good?

He broke away from a teary Toral and looked at his father..

Aarav: Hey Dad..

Shaking his hand and then hugging him.. 'Let go now Dad, this is so uncool' Aarav whispered loudly

Santu was happy.. Her family was finally complete..

Edited by SanRajDeewani - 15 years ago

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-SilverFlames-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#586

Episode 31

Santu was about to walk away but Maulik grabbed her arm..

Maulik: Wait Maa…

Santu: Not now.. Let me go..!!

Maulik: Not today.. Don't stop me.

By now the whole family were watching SanLik and didn't understand what was happening.

Maulik: I have something else that you all must know, something that you should have been told years ago. Something that changed our family again.

Santu: Please..

Maulik: Not today.. Today I will speak and everyone will listen..

DM stepped forward, he wanted to know what was happening.. His heart was beating fast.. It was something that he had been waiting to hear… and he knew the time had come.

Maulik: Many years ago.. A storm came and shook the foundations of our house.. Our home became a place of arguments and not the Mandir that Santu Maa had made it..

Khemi: She only did bad for this family.. She only caused suffering and is the root of all evil in our house..

Moti: Exactly, we all know what she did.. The plate that she ate from she spitted in the same.. This choti aurat.. Her and her low thinking took away our chirag

Hiten: why are we discussing something we already know… We know that Santu killed Arjan and made disgusting accusation against me and Khemi

Birwa: BAS..!! Just stop.. Everyone stop..

Breaking down Birwa fell to the ground and cried loudly.. Khemi and Moti ran to help her up but Birwa shrugged them away..

Birwa: No one touch me.. Stay away..

Khemi: What's wrong..???

Birwa: The woman who you are accusing didn't do anything.. Nothing.. It was Me..

Khemi moved back..

Birwa: I killed Arjan Bhai..It was me.. I killed him..

Khemi grabbed Birwa and shook her.. 'Why' she screeched loudly..!!

'WHY??' Khemi sobbed..

Birwa narrated the story of the night.. It was still as though it was yesterday and no matter how hard she had tried she could not get the images out.. Her marriage helped but could not remove the guilt.. Maybe it was this day that would help.. Maybe finally Birwa could move on..
Birwa explained the way Arjan said disgusting words against Hiten, Khemi, Santu and DM.. How he was totally drunk and how he attacked DM was about to kill him when Birwa killed him..

Khemi didn't speak.. Tears just fell out of her eyes.. Her husband whom she had avenged for day and night had such low thoughts of her?

DM stood listening, no words no expressions.. Nothing.. Maulik and Suraj helped Birwa up and took her to the sofa..

Hiten: Wait..

Everyone looked at him.. What could be left to be said now? What could Hiten possibly have felt?

Hiten: Maulik, Taru phuii.. Please come here..

Taru didn't understand what was happening, she looked at teary Maulik who also had no idea what was happening..

Hiten speaking to Taru: Do you remember when Maulik had that accident and Kanji phuphar disappeared?

Maulik: That was years ago.. Why are you discussing that now?

Hiten: There is something that you should know.. Something that I should have told you both years ago..
Out of his pocket he pulled out a ruffled letter.. Taru grabbed it and read it loudly.. After reading or so she stopped.. She couldn't bear to read anymore..

The letter dropped and she cried out..

Baa: What is happening?? Will somebody tell me?

Babuji: Please Hiten? What is wrong?

Moti: It's Arjan..!!

Khemi: What happened to Arjan?

Moti: He was my son.. Mine and Kanji's son..

DM still not speaking.. The shock of Santu's sacrifice had shaken him so much that he couldn't speak or hear anything..

Baa: What?

Maulik: But why? How?

Maulik read the letter and looked at Hiten who lowered his gaze. Toral put her hand on his arm..

Maulik turned to face Santu who was on the seated on the first step of the staircase..
'Maa' He called her..

Santu shook her head.. Getting up she took Maulik's hand and walked over to Moti..

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-SilverFlames-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#587

Episode 32

Moti didn't look at Santu or Maulik..

Santu: Maulik was and always will be your son.. Always..

Maulik looked at Santu and smiled..

Santu turned to walk away..

Moti: Eh Santudi.. All your married life I have been bad to you, treated you like a slave, inflicted pain on you. I even fell low enough to have Champakali strip search you..

Everyone shocked..

Moti continues: So much pain, suffering.. Every word I gave you was evil and cruel yet you still don't bend? What are you made from? Are you for real?
I did the most heinous crimes against you but you are still here trying to put a smile upon my face? How can you be so nice?

Santu: I am not nice, it is your view.. Saying this Santu placed her hand upon Moti's.. and for the first time ever Moti didn't mind..

DM walked away.. He went into his room and locked himself.. Santu followed him.. It was time they talked.

Meanwhile…***********

Khemi walked out and no one noticed until Krishna asked for her..

Hiten: she must be here somewhere..

Toral: I hope she is okay.. I mean.. after everything today..

Champakali: Everyone please come.. Khemi bhabhi is leaving the house..

Moti: Khemi.!! What are you doing??

Khemi: No Maa.. I can not stay here.. I have done to many bad things.. Santu was my sister, my blood but I couldn't recognise her.. I fell in my own esteem.. How can I look at anyone..
I lost my husband.. I lost everything.. I have no right to stay here..

Moti: I lost my son.. Our loss is the same.. I need you more now than ever and you are leaving? But why? Am I nothing to you now? Are rights over you nothing? Don't go.. If you really are regretful for what you have done then we will prashyatap together..
But don't go..

Khemi hugged Moti and they both cried to their hearts out..

Precap: Last episode..

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Jasmin

@Jaz1990

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Posted: 15 years ago

#588

LOVEDD IT ....BRILLIANTTTT WRITING!!!! 😃

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anna

@anna44

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Posted: 15 years ago

#589

Beautiful Sanju...

BRAVO 👏👏👏👏

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Shahara

@Shahara3

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#590

Sanju lil sis, that was lovely and everything came out in the open and you know i was actually glad Moulik let it all out & Birwa finally confessing 👍🏼

Waiting last post to see sanraj confrontation how they console eachother. Can't wait 😊

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