FF: Final Episode.. and Note on Page 80.. - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago
LED, u made me to 😭 with ur writing 👏
Hope Ektha would have showed some thing like this to us instead of this stupid tracks 😍
Now i am 100% sure that Ektha Maaaaaaa and her dufford CV's are running behind the ideas. Sry we shd not call them as CV's👎🏼
If Ektha show some thing like this in her bandini then i am sure that Bandini TRP's will reach 10
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aaaaw Sapz and Vidu.. 🤗 My sweeties thank you for your lovely words of encouragement!

@Sapz.. All is not as it seems so watch out for what's coming cos its all going to change very soon..

@Vidu, you making me blush.. Im not that good but yes i agree Ekta and her DV's are lost for ideas therefore they are showing faltu tracks..

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Posted: 15 years ago
omg sanju............wah kya baat hai...........I simply loved your edition of santu back from jail..................superb..............👏..............DM's heartwrenching romatic dialogs.............simply too good...............waiting for your next episode...............good job🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
quite dreamy indeed! 😃

Those people have to learn from writers here.Shame on them.

So,dear,you kept your promise.

Thaaaaank You! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Ayushi.. Thank you dear for liking my scene.. DM is romantic so he's easily adaptable..

@Di.. Aaaw glad you liked it! Much more planned so keep reading..👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
I could feel DM's pain😭how much he missed her chan chan payal..her smell and his little dufford maalkin😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
The pain is felt by all us viewers but the stupid dufford Santu always sees his so called 'nafrat'.. She has such a darling pati.. I wonder when she will realise..😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOOOW....dat waz great...siimpleyyy awesome!!! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
I could visualize all the scenes that you have written! Very well potrayed feelings of DM👏

⭐️ ⭐️ All you creative people are simply the jewels of this forum. ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
Episode 14

Santu got up and looked at DM.. She told him that this time we have to be very careful as what I have planned can get very complicated but I know that with your help we will be able to pass everything.. DM looked shocked at what Santu was proposing and it seemed so impossible but with her willpower and his brain they could easily win over the children.. He approved of her plan and told her he would support her.

DM: Suraj and Maulik are coming back tonight, actually when you came I thought it was them.. It will harder with them here.. We should tell them what's happening?

Santu: No, Maalik.. Not yet.. I don't want our plan to fail.. We have to keep Suraj and Maulik in the dark for the time being as I don't want them to be involved..

DM: That's fine, but how will we act in front of them?

Santu: I want to see if I can trust them! I need them to prove that they will be able to go along with what I want.. I will tell them but not yet..

Santu looked strong and held her head high.. DM was proud to see her in this new roop..

Santu bent down and took DM's aashirwad and he placed his hand upon her head blessing her.. She got up and told him that it was her first day at work and would have to go, though DM was pained at the thought of her going he knew that now she was back they would spend more time together..

DM: How will you get out of the house now??

Santu: (a little confused) Ermm.. The same way I came😆 😆.. Wait Maalik call Champakali..

DM: Champakali!!

Champakali came quickly after hearing DM's voice.. She knew that he and Santu must be together..

Champakali: Ji Maalik??

Santu: Champa.. I need to get out but no-one should see me going as I don't want anyone to know I was here..

Champa: Don't worry Maalkin, Benbaa is in the shower and Hitenbhai left a couple of minutes ago..

Santu: And what about Baa and Babuji??

Champa didn't know what to say.. She looked at DM and looked back at Santu..
Santu: I asked about Baa and Babuji..

DM: They don't live here..

Santu: WHAT!!

DM: Actually after Khemi and Motibehen took over they left with Kaddu.. It has been about three years now.. Even Birwa doesn't live here..

Santu completely shooked at what she was hearing..She looked at DM with disappointment..

Santu: And you never stopped them?!?

DM: I wasn't here to stop them.. They didn't want to stay with Khemi and I couldn't do anything to bring them back!

Infuriated at Khemi, Santu looked at DM hopelessly and smiled.. She felt let down that her husband had let things get so bad but he wasn't alone to be blamed.. She had walked out and everyone had taken whatever decisions but determined she knew now she was back she would set things straight..

Champakali walked down the stairs and told Santu to hurry.. DM gave Santu a small peck on the cheek and held her close not knowing when he would be able to do that again..

She let go as DM watched her walk away..

Santu turned back and winked at DM😉.. He smiled at her..

Santu: Things will back to normal soon.. I promise..
DM: I know..

Saying this she disappeared through the doors and DM returned to his room with a feeling of satisfaction..

Part 2..

Santu arrived at the office five minutes late and found Karan waiting at her desk.. She looked at him scared of what he would say.. He looked at his watch and then at her..

Karan: Come to my office..
Santu: Ji, Sir..

Karan sat down and told Santu to sit down.. She was panicking about what he would say and whether she would get in to trouble..

Karan: Late! On your first day..
Santu: I'm sorry sir..
Karan: Sir? I told you before..
Santu: Sorry Karan..

Karan smiled at Santu and told her not to worry he would let her go this time as he was in a good mood.. His wife was coming back from holiday.. Santu looked shocked as she hadn't thought that Karan was married..

Karan sent Santu back to her desk with numerous files and told if she needed his help to come and seek him at any time.
Santu sat down happy that things were moving swiftly for her..

The day went by rather quickly and Santu made some new friends.. All praised Karan and told her stories about the business and Karan's wife and what a lovely couple they were, but it was Karan's wife was younger by many years to him but Santu smiled as she knew age was no barrier between true love..

At the end of her working hours Santu knew that she needed to go back to Gayu's to pick up her stuff so that she could return to M-Mansion.. She knew Gayu would understand but Aman?? She got in the car and told him to drive to Gayu's house..

Precap: Santu tells Aman, that she is married and her full name is Mrs Santu Dharamraj Mayavanshi! Aman takes Santu back to M-Mansion!!

Enjoy..x


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