FF: Final Episode.. and Note on Page 80.. - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago

Glad you all liking it..

@Sheela- i haven't forgetten your idea.. I will incorprate it into my FF... Just keep reading..
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Chapter 3

Santu pleased with herself looks over at the empty desk infront confused as to why DM still hasn't come to the cabin..
She sends a quick text message on DM's mobile..
Where r u??..
DM who is busy with some employees reads the text and gets angry... The employees look at him and he leaves to join Santu..
DM:Why did you text??
Santu:I didn't know where you were!! You hadn't been to the cabin all morning..
DM: Some of us have work to do...
Santu: And I don't.. Thats what you always say!!
DM: Cut the moaning and tell me what you want to eat??
Santu: Im not hungry..
DM: How's Pizza Hut sound??
Santu looks at DM, confused, angry and frustrated.. She knows DM dislikes Pizza or any non indian food and him suggesting it is just to please her..
Santu:I told you.. Im not hungry...
The rest of the day DM and Santu sit in silence not speaking to one another.. DM tries to distract Santu but she doesn't give in..
He throws paper balls and airoplanes at her but she just gets more annoyed..
Without saying anything he gets up and heads out of the office...
Some hours later he sends Santu a text message..
Im out..Some important work has come up.. Go home and don't wait up for me..I'll be late..xx
More annoyed she puts the phone down and carries on working...
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Posted: 15 years ago
I'm sorry LED-I just read both parts--Amazing..
Keep writing......
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Posted: 15 years ago
No sorry No thank you Kiwee... Remember..
Glad you liked the new FF..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Acha!!!!!!!LED
As soon as my exams get over I shall see that I read all your parts on time...
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Posted: 15 years ago
You have to wait for the next chapter Sheela..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice one,Sanju!👏 DM doesnt lyk Pizza yet he's ready 2 hav it 4 Santu's sake,how sweeeettttt!😊
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Glad you liked it Apara.. DM is trying to keep this ghusa ka packet Santu happy..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sanju loved this one more than the previous one - cos i know what its going to lead upto - hehe
love it when DM gets angry 😍
good 1👏
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Sapna glad you liked it and yes alot more is to come..

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