Of polarities and promises! (updated page 20)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Dharamraj Mahiyavanshi is setting his financial affairs in order. However, he is beginning to "see" how gullible and good hearted his wife actually is. His heart goes out to her and he is wondering how he can strengthen her shoulders.
Toral: Good morning pappa. I have come to take your blessings. Today i begin my life as your eldest daughter in law.
DM: Have a long and prosperous life my dear! You are the only educated DIL in the house at present. I hope i can expect that you help your friend Santu to manage the family and home. You can help with the business too if you are inclined to.
Toral: Pappa, Santu is my friend first and then my MIL. I will always look out for her welfare. If you do not mistake me, i would like to share my opinion about a few things with you.
DM: Dont hesitate my dear. Speak freely and frankly.
Toral: You have given Santu the title of maalkin by virtue of her being your wife pappa. Do you know when Santu will actually become completely empowered as the mistress of this house?
DM: When she learns to make some decisions herself rather than look up to me for everything.
Toral: No pappa. When you love someone, you must let them know. With that comes trust, respect and empowerment. I can see you do love Santu pappa, but have you ever told her?
DM: Look here girl, i am no spring chicken. I have been married before............
Toral: Pappa, it is hard to completely surrender your heart. You are feeling vulnerable. But, try it once pappa and see how Santu grows to wear and absorb her mantle as maalkin.
Toral takes DM's blessings and leaves him pondering about their conversation.
DM (to himself) here i am trying not to make Sanntuudi too emotionally dependent on me and ........ If she is too emotionally attached to me, will she be able to pick up the pieces of her life when i am not around anymore? Why am i assailed by such morbid thoughts these days? This younger generation is too full of open conversations. Some things are understood.
Santu (comes to DM with tea): Malik chai. What are you muttering about malik?
DM looks at Santu and sees her heart in her eyes. He sees himself clearly in her eyes, her lover, her husband and messiah. DM sighs deeply. Was Toral right in assuming that Santu needed his verbal affirmation to understand herself? Santu sits by DM and puts her hand on his palm.
Santu: See how easily and comfortably my palm fits into yours malik. It is preordained!
DM: Eh Santtuddi! Thenk you haan!
Santu looks at DM questioningly.
DM: For loving me, for telling me and for just being yourself. You do realize that i love you very much dont you? I may not tell you but if you look into my eyes rather than at my kurta buttons or my toes, you will know. (DM smiles)
Santu looks DM in the eye and then gets up. Santu sees herself in DM's eyes, petite but wrapped completely around his heart. She walks away with measured steps. DM sees Santu walking with her head held high, spine straight and with a spring in her step. He gets up, follows her and then mischieviously sings out her
"Kya khoob lagti ho, badi sundar dikhti ho,
Tum pyar se pyari ho, tum jaan hamari ho"
Santu turns around, smiles and skips down the stairs.
Unknown to both DM and Santu, Toral is watching from a corner and slowly smiles to herself thinking "pappa, now you see what miracles i am going to work on your wife and my friend".
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chalia It's tooooooooooooooooo gud
we will hope for the same or atleast similar kind of scence from bandini CV's (I am pretty sure that they can't give a scence better than this)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chalia,,,,,,
It is amazing and wish CV will use some of yours and Rakhie's idea and spice up sanraj romance.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks guys,
Thanks Sri_nidhi. I see that you always silently appreciate my posts. Would love to see you interacting freely with us on the forum. Its all in good fun on Bandini.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's really nice one 👍🏼 , how much time u took to write this 😆 😆 just kidding
seriously, the Creative team needs to take some ideas of yours. then it will be fun 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyank82

It's really nice one 👍🏼 , how much time u took to write this 😆 😆 just kidding

seriously, the Creative team needs to take some ideas of yours. then it will be fun 😳

It doesnt very long to "write" priyank82. The time taken is in the thinking about "what" to write. I hope you get what i said; "just kidding".
I dont really write for the CVs to take my ideas. I write because i love to write and want to write.😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Doc so nicely written.
I can't wait for Toral to give it to Khemi coz by ranking she is Bade Bahu n Khemi is Chote Bahu.
It wld rocking if she rubs it into Moti's face too.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: fuzzyface

Doc so nicely written.

I can't wait for Toral to give it to Khemi coz by ranking she is Bade Bahu n Khemi is Chote Bahu.
It wld rocking if she rubs it into Moti's face too.

Quite right fuzz, i know Toral is a good kid but i hope she pulls rank on Khemi and Moti. Cant stand the pair now.
And i agree with you that something is brewing in the cauldron fuzz. There have been querulous demands from us about wanting competition for DM.
Hope they dont bump the existent one and get a younger looking humshakal (some phoren returned high flying lawyer or some competitor for the Mahiyavanshi diamond works)😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chalia

There have been querulous demands from us about wanting competition for DM.

Hope they dont bump the existent one and get a younger looking humshakal (some phoren returned high flying lawyer or some competitor for the Mahiyavanshi diamond works)😉


Yeah, but the demands were for a competition to make DM jealous so he values Santu more, thats all.....not to bump him off to be replaced by a younger version who I am sure won't be able to hold a candle to DM.....DM cannot be replaced, he is irreplaceable and Santu-DM belong to each other, no third person can or should lay claim.......I would hate the CVs forever if they twist our words to suit their twisted minds.....can't stand the thought of either Santu or DM with someone else......if they did it, it would come back to bite them like the Ana track, CVs should have learnt a lesson by now that we cannot see our favorite pair with other people, even fake ones. CVs, learn something from your past mistakes!!!!!😡
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i totally agree with you Shalu.
I am just worried about Bandini land a little these days.
Kanji is non-existent, DM is constantly talking about death, property matters, Meghna and Rasik no show (i mean wont Kaddu's inlaws come for her brother's wedding?)
But,
without Sanraj there is no Bandini. The CVs better remember that!

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