Bemused (DM's story)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bemused

This poem is for DM and the elusive games that love has played with him for a long time. Initially i thought of waiting till he actually said sorry! But now seeing him so mellow and ready to keep Santu happy, i shall give the poem to DM.

He stood at the window, watching the raindrops

meander softly down the glass panes,

A whisper from yesterday floats past his ear,

Was it just yesterday? But hasn't she gone?

He stood at the window, craving for yesterday

to creep from the shadows out into the sunlight,

A chime from an anklet finds his ear,

Is that today? Who is she?

He stood at the window, hoping for today

to dance from his dreams out into the rain,

A smile reluctantly tugs at his lips,

Is that now? Is it her?

He stands at the window, waiting for now,

She walks into his heart with measured steps,

A soft kiss brushes his forehead,

It's her! It's now!

He stands at the window, in the hinterland,

She wraps herself around his heart,

If yesterday is history, and now a dream,

Why did he seek to blend now with yesterday?

HE stands at the window; SHE stands with him, NOW!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chalia, I really love it dear.😃 It's fantabulous👏 It describes DM exactly and his emotions! You are too good. Thanks for gifting all of us before you go on your holiday😃
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Thanks malli, cant wait for the much deserved holiday. Going to get away from the concrete jungle and breathe some fresh air. Yoo hoo! so very peaceful! And with the whole brood too!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mallika113

Chalia, I really love it dear.😃 It's fantabulous👏 It describes DM exactly and his emotions! You are too good. Thanks for gifting all of us before you go on your holiday😃

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Very kind of you malli.
I still have to keep the promise made to Chechi mol. that one is for a rainy day. Sigh the medication is making me blabber around like a baboon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chalia

Thanks malli, cant wait for the much deserved holiday. Going to get away from the concrete jungle and breathe some fresh air. Yoo hoo! so very peaceful! And with the whole brood too!

Enjoy your fresh air and come back refreshed😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chalia

Bemused

This poem is for DM and the elusive games that love has played with him for a long time. Initially i thought of waiting till he actually said sorry! But now seeing him so mellow and ready to keep Santu happy, i shall give the poem to DM.

He stood at the window, watching the raindrops

meander softly down the glass panes,

A whisper from yesterday floats past his ear,

Was it just yesterday? But hasn't she gone?

He stood at the window, craving for yesterday

to creep from the shadows out into the sunlight,

A chime from an anklet finds his ear,

Is that today? Who is she?

He stood at the window, hoping for today

to dance from his dreams out into the rain,

A smile reluctantly tugs at his lips,

Is that now? Is it her?

He stands at the window, waiting for now,

She walks into his heart with measured steps,

A soft kiss brushes his forehead,

It's her! It's now!

He stands at the window, in the hinterland,

She wraps herself around his heart,

If yesterday is history, and now a dream,

Why did he seek to blend now with yesterday?

HE stands at the window; SHE stands with him, NOW!

WOHAAAAAAAA...The best till date for me..DM..and teh window..just that thought excits me..because he once saw chori chipe his Santudi..drying her hair once earlier & then he waited that semi SR night near teh window so majestically also one day he saw Santudi dancing in teh rain..from window..SO I LOVE WINDOWS these days..i swear...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mallika113

Enjoy your fresh air and come back refreshed😃

MALLIKA..PLEASE HELP ME PUT THAT SIGGY SNAPS OF SM & SANTU FASHION SHOW SNAPS YAAR ..I dont know how to do it..I will give you my pass word..please do it OK..I will PM you later..awww..I WANT IT...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏👏 Chalia.... 🤗 You madfe me see DM mere aankhon ke saamney😳 Thank you soooooooooo much cho chweeeeeet...
Have a great holidays.. mmmmmwwaahh
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow chalia....so amazing and beautifully written...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It's nicely written but Is I still think Hades has a lot of work to do to make up for lost time with santu.

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