AnSh Mini SS: HumSafar Thread #1 - Page 104

hmm teaser sounds interesting paapa ka brave beti ki actions bahut acha tha and her parent's care for her is also nice seems sab kuch teek hogaya thono ki beech bed ki neeche monsters, chor, bathroom se bhoo bhoo ye bacche bhi na kya kya karvathe hai maa, paapa se update soon just like yesterday

Originally posted by: Chahanya

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Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

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ananya chahe kitni bhi chalak kyun na ho, hai to wo bachi hi, dar lagta hai use

aur shiv, wo apni beti ko khush dekhna chata hai, is liye wo bhi uski khushi ke liye sab locks check karta hai ❤️

lekin she's so cute (and clever😉)... i love how she used shiv as an excuse to get him to check for monsters under her bed, by saying that she's brave but she's only doing it for shiv's satisfaction ... sooo sweet 😃

shiv put his arm around anandi's waist and she rested her head on his shoulders! yay!! finally, i think they've confessed their love and every confusion and misunderstanding and worry and whatever else has been cleared 😃

can't wait for chapter seven (which i hope makes it's way onto thread 2 😉 )

First i thought to check whether you have unressed your comment or no

Yes it is unressed

Yup The last chapter has to be Happy Ending because if the end is not happy then socho ki kahaani khatam nahi hui 😉

Thread 2 par chalo I will get that much more time to write the update

Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

haan haan kar rahi hoon... ab achha sa comment chahiye to wait to karna padega na

You unressed and i read too

Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Dono ka fusion karlo if possible

Why not use both giving two song sequences???

Happy teaser 😊

Waiting or the last chapter .

Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

unres'd my comment for chapter 6 on page 136 ... this time its really big, to compensate for last time... patna kitni der lagi mujhe to comment, i went through each and every part, and commented... at one point, my dad said he needed my computer, aur maine galti se bina comment ko save kiye tab close kar diya, then i typed it all again 😛

Thank you for unressing and tat too long comment 🤗

Itni mehnat for the comment; the last part I have gone through it I save my update every 2 minutes

Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

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arre waah itni jaldi update kar diya? thanks!

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arre yaar is anandi ka ex husband bhi na... arre koi game me bhi aisa karta hai, ki hamesha us hi ko jeetna hai...

anyway, use chhoro , on to ansh 😉

shiv is such a good father, ek to wo aap dara huya hia, lekin he's worried that ananya would be scarred for life... i think he thinks this way because he too was quite scarred in a way 😔... lekin ananya sirf teen saal ki hai na? they say taht chaar saal ke pehle ki life yaad nahi rehti, lekin i guess ananya, the child prodigy, ke case mein different hoga , which isn't good

yeh shiv aur anandi baby steps le rahe hain, aur this time they took another step , they shared the bed for the first time

He put his arms protectively around her ... shiv, the saviour 😃

Shiv is so considerate, he knows that anandi just needs to get her story out, so he makes her feel safe and then cry her heart out... ❤️

he was wiping her tears too... kitna dard hota hai na shiv ko anandi ko takleef me dekh kar ❤️

I realized that anandi doesn't take her ex-husband's name... it really emphasizes the fact that she is still scared of him, so scared that even taking his name is not possible for her ...

ok so anandi's story, you explained it really really well... and the way you described her ex-husband, us se pata chalta tha ki kyun anandi aaj tak chhoti chhoti cheezon se darti hai, like the racket

the words he used for anandi, aisa koi achha admi apni patni ko kya, kisi ko nahi kehta , kitna bura tha wo ...

arre yaar belt wala part parha to i was on the verge of crying, so evil ...

and how anandi's mother reacted when she told her about what he was doing, unexpected... i mean i know mothers say that.. ki koi baat nahi wo tera pati hai, aise nahi karte, etc, etc... lekin yaar agar maar peet kar raha hai wo to fir to aisa nahi kehte na... kaisi ma hai... ya fir anandi ne pura sach nahi bataya hoga, as you said later that she had only shared this with shiv...

anandi kitni buri situation me thi... us janwar ke saath rehti rahi, i'm sure only for her parents... waise jahan tak maine dekha hai to har ladki ke saath aise hota hai, apne parents ke liye she has to bear everything. completely unfair 😡

lekin yaar kitni achhi ma thi (aur hai) anandi... apni baar kuchh nahi kaha, chup chap uske sare tortures sehti rahi ... lekin apni beti ki baar chup nahi rahi, usse threaten kiya.. aisi honi chahiye har ma 👏

sumitra to the rescue.. finally uski help se anandi got justice, warna uske khud ke parents to lagta kabhi nahi help karte anandi is honestly so sweet, khud ki baad mein, pehle yeh soch rahi thi ki wo dusri car ke log theek honge ya nahi , so caring 😊

anandi and shiv go way back... unka rishta to us raat se hi hai ❤️

so happy that anandi has gotten rid of all the things that worried her 😊

i love that she finds the sound of shiv's heartbeat sweet ❤️

and the cute mangalsutra scene 😃

anandi is so caring towards shiv... she wants to know his past and help him out the way he helped her...

aur she takes care that she does not drop water on him... she has noticed even the little things that indicate that he's scared of and is bothered by water... dono hi kehte rehte hain ki they only married for ananya, lekin agar aisa hota to ek dusre ke bare mein itna care to nahi karte na... they really love each other, they just haven't completely realized it...

lekin anandi wants and needs shiv's love, yay !!

shiv is going to keep his secrets just to make sure anandi stays happy, usse pata hai ki agar bata diya to she will feel guilty, and as well all know shiv anandi ko takleef mein nahi dekh sakta ❤️

ananya bahut bolti hai na (referring to the phone convo with shiv)... i'm sure she asked a million questions, and shiv probably answered them very patiently and happily 😊

i love shiv and ananya's father-daughter bond, aisa lagta hi nahi hai ki wo dono step daughter aur father hain, bilkul genuine father-daughter relationship hai ...

anandi's convo with ira ❤️ .. she wants a place in his heart, but totally understands ( or perhaps misunderstands) how he actually feels

it's great that shiv overheard the convo, because without knowing what they feel about each other, wo aage nahi bhar sakte, at least one person had to know how the other actually feels...

it seemed like it would take him a lot longer to let go of ashima, lekin he did it, finally... and i feel that it was important to completely let go of ashima in every way in order to actually move on, otherwise it would be nearly impossible to do so , i'm very happy with shiv's decision 😊

he saw his wife and daughter playing in the garden 😃

and finally anandi thinks about shiv as her husband... ab to dono ne ek dusre ko dil se accept kar liya hai, they just have to tell each other how they feel, which i'm sure will happen soon 😉

rain = monster : perfect description ... jaise koi bacha "monster" dekh kar dar jaata hai aur rota hai, waise hi shiv bhi karta hai, baarish ko dekh kar...

shiv's mask is finally falling off, slowly...

anandi is an angel for shiv, sent just for him, to help him come out of his past and enjoy his present and future ❤️

anandi is very soft just like shiv, she wants to help him, and she knows how to handle him, to get him to speak his heart...

i loved the way shiv grabbed on to anandi and cried like a little kid, very emotional, i was going to cry too , soo cute...

aur shiv ne bas chhoti si kahani batayi, even though he is in pain remembering his past, he still remembers that he cannot tell anandi the whole truth because it would make her guilty and upset 👍🏼

anandi realized her love first .. although she questions it for a moment, she reassures herself that she really does love shiv ❤️

ananya kitni understanding hai, bas ek baar samjhaya anandi ne aur wo samajh gayi, aur maan gayi apni dadi ke paas sone ke liye... aur i love the way she said that her dadi tells better stories than anandi, usse lagta hai ki anandi would be jealous... i think anandi is actually happy, like any mother would actually be, that her daughter is connecting with her grandmother as well😊

chup chup ke dekhta hai shiv anandi ko , how cute .. usse kya pata ki anandi feels the same way about him, but just hasn't said anything ...

the convo that shiv and anandi had after waking up was also very cute 👍🏼

ira thank you sooo much for telling anandi the story , kyunki shiv to kabhi batane nahi wala tha 👏

anandi understands why shiv did not want her to know the truth about how he lost ashima, and so decides to pretend not to know just to keep him satisfied... dono hi apni taraf se sacrifice karne ki koshish kar rahe hain 😛

the ira-shiv scene when he cried was so emotional... larke hamesha jatate rehte hain ki wo bahut tiugh hain, lekin i love the emotional bonding between mother and son... my brother is the same way, jab bhi apne dosto ke samne hota hai to ma ko kehta hai ki aap jaiye ab, lekin agar ma kisi takleef me hoti hai, to sab se zyada dard usi ko hota hai aur rota bhi wo sabse zyada hai 😛

shiv and anandi spoke to each otehr in silence, i love moments like that ❤️

shiv has his heaven on earth because of anandi and ananya , soo cute

yeh ananya hi sab kuchh realize karwati hai na anandi aur shiv ko, like the fact that anandi always sleeps with ananya and not with shiv... ananya bahut hi cute hai, honestly ❤️

anandi finally went in the rain (again, ananya ke kaaran sab kuchh hota hia, agar wo na hoti, to yeh story na hoti, thanks ananya !) ... aur shiv, instead of getting lost in his past in the rain, he's sitting there admiring anandi 😃 ... and im sure ab wo bhi baarish me bheege ga , yay!

wonderful update... and as you can tell from the amount of hearts in my comment , i loved it ❤️

On reading the comment I am

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Oh your praises making me

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Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

i also unres'd my comment for teaser (page 140) ...

can't wait for chapter seven... 😊

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Originally posted by: PreetiSJ

mujhe yeh to pata chal hi chuka hai ki what got into you... you want to finish before scond thread needs to be started 😛

honestly though, you always say that you haven't edited so it's not good.. but you didn't go throught this one right?, yet it was soo good, everything was perfect, is liye aage se edit karne ki chinta nahi karni, just post the way it is 😊

Honestly preeti I just typed whatever was coming to me and then posted it without even reading it once

I still don't remember the Shiv Ira scene I will have to read my own story to know what i wrote 😳