SY FF: The Ride of a Lifetime - Chapter 29, page 143 - Page 80

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saviani

Awww... Ginu, such an emotional update written so beautifully... you are a sweetheart 🤗
For a change, I am loving Bhoomiji here...
The much needed separation for them...
Good way of protraying the difference between the then broken love and now... 👏 👏
Don't worry Piyu... This longdistance relationship will last forever as our Sid babu is in love with you...


From your mouth to Gods ears ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing part loved it wish Piyu agrees soon to get married and please don't keep them away for tooo long cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: onlinebuddy75

Emotional lovely update.

Bravo bhoomiji , i think this was required, I know it is sad but very much needed to test the love depth.

I have a feeling piyu is already in love , but she did not realize or want to test Sid commitment my POV and my khayali pulav.

More eagerly awaiting next update.


Thanks Buddy 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lilydana

😃Yesterday (when I was 'off') smth interesting happened, like 'hear, hear' on the occasion of small, home views-exchange, as in any happily-marriage family, where lady ❤️of the house remained distanced from children sulks. No yelling, no slapping, just a new delicious dish from oven.

Left a bad weather in the forest, a storm in the pond out of home:
❤️
but today is a new day: sunlight back again


Found Sid's dream and expectations

👏credit and praise to, (although rare FB cover), admin&maker👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


All family members are here: busy ones😊, and busy ones:


Let's try the dish😃
(I know what it tastes like😉 ⭐️)


Thanks Lilidana 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Short but a painful and a touching update .Can feel the pain the duo going through by every word very well written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh NOOO...Separation!!! Nahiii !!!! Its so painful :'( waiting Ginu I'm waiting eagerly for the reunion :(
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: VerboseG

A poem by Mirza Ghalib comes to mind when I think of SY. I wanted to save it for the end of this FF, but now seems to be a good time :)

Ye Na Thee Hamaree Qismat

By Mirza Ghalib
(Translated by Ayesha Kaljuvee)

ye na thee hamaree qismat ke wisaal-e-yaar hota

it was not in my fate to meet my lover

agar aur jeete rehte yahee intezaar hota
had I lived longer, this would still be my only desire

tere waade par jiye ham to ye jaan jhoot jaanaa
to live on your promise is to make my life a lie

ke khushee se mar na jaate agar 'eitabaar hota
would I not have died of happiness if i trusted it

teree naazukee se jaana ke bandha tha 'ehed_booda
from your frailty I learnt that the promise was delicate

kabhee too na tor sakta agar oostuwaar hota
it would not stand broken had you been determined

koee mere dil se pooche tere teer-e-neemkash ko
someone ask me about your half-drawn arrow

ye khalish kahaan se hotee jo jigar ke paar hota
would i even feel this pain if it had pierced my heart

ye kahaan ki dostee hai ke bane hain dost naaseh
what kind of friendship is this, that friends are now advisers

koee chaarasaaz hota, koee ghamgusaar hota
someone should ease my pain, someone sympathize with me

rag-e-sang se tapakta wo lahoo ki phir na thamta
from every nerve drips blood without restraint

jise gham samajh rahe ho, ye agar sharaar hota
as if that which you think is anguish is but a spark

gham agarche jaan_gulis hai, per kahaan bachain ke dil hai
threatening as love is, there is no deliverance from the heart

gham-e-ishq gar na hota, gham-e-rozgaar hota
if not the torment of love, it would be the torment of life

kahoon kis se main ke kya hai, shab-e-gham buree bala hai
whom shall I narrate the pangs of these evenings of sorrow

mujhe kya bura tha marna agar ek baar hota
i would have not resented this death, had it come only once

hue mar ke ham jo ruswa, hue kyon na gharq-e-dariya
that I died and was disgraced, why was I not just drowned

na kabhee janaaza uthata, na kaheen mazaar hota
never was there a funeral, no where was a tomb erected

usay kaun dekh sakta ke yagaana hai wo yaktaa
who can see him since his Oneness is without peer

jo dooee ki boo bhee hotee to kaheen do chaar hota
even the scent of his duality would be an introduction

ye masaail-e-tasawwuf, ye tera bayaan 'Ghalib'!
this mysticism, these statements of yours, Ghalib

tujhe ham walee samajhate, jo na baada_khwaar hota
you would be a saint, if only you were not inebriated


❤️Thanks @verboseG, thanks for a deep love, and continuous romance as basics of solid and strong building of a future life



(somehow G😳MTA)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow amazing part loved it wish Piyu agrees soon to get married and please don't keep them away for tooo long cont soon


Thanks Jyothi😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update Gina, we all kind of expected that 😊

I mean that
" gallivanting around the countryside...could not go on forever, right😉

So, people start to gossip...


"Babusa, I'm sorry but we really shouldn't bother about what people are saying..." Completely agree with that 😊

"In the most passionate display of unknown emotions, they lost all track of time, making love again and again until they fell into a deep sleep, cradled like two lost children in each others' arms.
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Hugging briefly, the two got ready silently, only the language of their eyes expressing their deep sadness at what had happened to them.People graphics



Looking deep into the liquid brown eyes, he murmured, "Call me as soon as you reach Jaitsar, sweetie. And keep safe. We'll meet in exactly 4 days time..." So, they say goodbye People graphics😭

And they separated 😔
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, "Goodbye, my love. Let's see how long this long-distance relationship will last..."...but we all know that...😳 People graphics😛

Edited by loveansh - 12 years ago

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