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250 pages...

congrats...🥳
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Fevicol se chipki hui hun... tabhi toh main hamesha yehi dikhti hoon...aur apne aanewale bachhe ko sikhati hoon ki mujhse story ki umeed na kare sidha isi home par chale aaye...😆

I won't say anything now because my imagination is wild as it is after reading this FF. 😆
Bechara baby, abhi se kaila marta hoga. 😆
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Originally posted by: riya_ss9

Fevicol se chipki hui hun... tabhi toh main hamesha yehi dikhti hoon...aur apne aanewale bachhe ko sikhati hoon ki mujhse story ki umeed na kare sidha isi home par chale aaye...😆


I won't say anything now because my imagination is wild as it is after reading this FF. 😆
Bechara baby, abhi se kaila marta hoga. 😆
🤣Arrey mujhe bolne ki zaroorat nahi hogi usey yeh batane ke liye romance kaise karein... uske liye toh itne achhe story teller hain yahaan jo usey full training de denge ...😆
Edited by pussycat - 12 years ago
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Chapter 24

It was an idyllic time, with Sid and Prats lost in a world of sensory delights. The days rushed by in a blur of work-filled mornings, laughter-filled moments, and pleasure-filled nights. As the duo became freer with each other, their open affection became increasingly apparent. Their shared looks, a tendency to complete each other's statements, a lingering of their touches was a giveaway, even for the most casual of observers. The local people started looking at the twosome in a different way " some with affection, and some with disapproval.

One early morning, as Sid lay locked in Prats arms, the phone rang. It was Bhoomiji. Sitting up quickly, almost pushing Prats off him, Sid fumbled into the phone, "Good morning, Bhoomiji..." "Good morning, Siddhant. I needed to talk to you about something." Cringing inside, Sid had a feeling that he knew what it was. "Siddhant, I hope you know that people have been gossiping about you and Prats. I don't like this at all. It is the worst thing that could have happened for Prats."

Fumbling for words, Sid looked dumbfounded at Prats, who had sat up, adjusting the sheet around herself. "Sir, my intentions are honorable." "And has Pratishtha agreed?" Bhoomiji asked in surprise. "Well, no, Sir..." Sid mumbled on a whisper. "So, then? What do I tell people? That the boy asked, but my daughter refused?" roared Bhoomiji! Wincing, Sid started pacing up and down, running his hand through his hair. Grabbing the phone from Sid's hand, Prats said, "Babusa, I'm sorry but we really shouldn't bother about what people are saying..."

As tears trickled down her eyes at the invective that flowed down the phone, Sid took custody of the phone again. "Sir, you tell us what we should do." "Well, son, what's done is done. All I want is that Pratistha returns to her home and you to yours. This gallivanting around the countryside has to stop." Swallowing hard, Sid muttered, "As you say, Sir."

Turning to console a silently sobbing Prats, Sid hugged her to him tight. "Piyu, we have to separate, at least till your father calms down. And we have been irresponsible, that's for sure. You live in a society where all this is frowned upon..." Throwing her arms tight around his neck, Prats moaned, "But what will we do, Sid? I can't live without you..." Sid smiled, "So you know what to do, Piyu... marry me, marry me today." Prats drew back in shock. "Marriage? No, Sid. I can't. But I can't let you go now, Sid. I want these last few days with you, all alone, in our own world." Smiling sadly, Sid said, "Then we can't do anything about this, Piyu. I have given my word to your father. But, I promise you we will meet, and meet as often as possible. I will come to Jaitsar (or wherever you are) every weekend or you came come to meet me in Jaipur. It's not the best solution, but it'll have to do."

Sobbing deeper, Prats wrapped her arms around his neck, pulling him down into the deepest embrace possible, trying to absorb him into her body and soul. As his arms hardened around her, she grew wild with desire, biting and gnawing at him, as if punishing him for his decision. Losing control of himself, Sid tossed her onto the bed, following her down on it, trying to make up for all the time they would soon lose. In the most passionate display of unknown emotions, they lost all track of time, making love again and again until they fell into a deep sleep, cradled like two lost children in each others' arms.

Prats woke up to find Sid quietly gathering his things together. He smiled wryly, "God know how much junk I have accumulated in these 3 weeks. I'll need a truck, I think." Pulling her nightshirt on, Prats said, "I'll drop you to Jaipur, darling." As he demurred, she gave him a slight peck on his cheek, "Don't you want me to see where you live? I need to know where to find you when I want you, don't I?" Hugging briefly, the two got ready silently, only the language of their eyes expressing their deep sadness at what had happened to them.

Drawing up in front of a palatial, modern bungalow in Jaipur, Sid came around to hold Prats door open for her, "Come in for a while, sweetheart." "No, Sid, I can't be alone with you right now. It'll make parting all the more difficult," she said sadly. Patting Sultan on the head, Sid leaned in to drop a brief kiss on her forehead. Looking deep into the liquid brown eyes, he murmured, "Call me as soon as you reach Jaitsar, sweetie. And keep safe. We'll meet in exactly 4 days time..."

Not looking back in the mirror, Prats drove off, ignoring the despondent Sultan, who kept peering out off the car to look at the man who had started playing such an important role in their lives. As a single tear rolled down her cheek, she whispered, "Goodbye, my love. Let's see how long this long-distance relationship will last..."

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Me furst 😆
Wow and lets see how Prats going to take this separation. Sid sounds so confident that P will agree to marry 😆
Ginu it was so short, but what emotions, as if I am watching a movie, each words, each emotions are so beautiful.
Thank you.
Edited by riya_ss9 - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pussycat

Fevicol se chipki hui hun... tabhi toh main hamesha yehi dikhti hoon...aur apne aanewale bachhe ko sikhati hoon ki mujhse story ki umeed na kare sidha isi home par chale aaye...😆


LOL

Don't direct your baccha here... some of this is meant for adults 😆
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Originally posted by: HemaG

250 pages...


congrats...🥳


Thank you! 😊
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oh...bhoomi...why did u do that to those 2 love birds...😭
sid..why did u agree to his decision..stupid...why did u leave her alone...😡

ginaji...pls make them meet so soon..waiting for the next one eagerly...

reading this from office and my seniors are looking as if what happened to the girl suddenly...🤣

continue soon...

and me second this time...🥳
Edited by HemaG - 12 years ago
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''Haye yeh lamha judai ka' is really so much heart rending for this twosome awesome and also for us too...😭...looking forward to the update when Pratz will conquer her glass ceiling that she created for herself..and how Sid makes her overcome this cruel barrier of trust and commitment phobia...Thanks Gina for giving us a lovely weekend update...👏
Edited by pussycat - 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pussycat

🤣Arrey mujhe bolne ki zaroorat nahi hogi usey yeh batane ke liye romance kaise karein... uske liye toh itne achhe story teller hain yahaan jo usey full training de denge ...😆


Wait till he/she is at least 18 😊
Edited by VerboseG - 12 years ago

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