SY FF: The Ride of a Lifetime - Chapter 29, page 143 - Page 55

Originally posted by: VerboseG

😃 OK, I will let you faint then 😆

Originally posted by: sladjana333

Gina,😛

Originally posted by: alisa112

It's OK... Whenever you have the time... 😊

Originally posted by: VerboseG

Naazo 🤗

AWW... shubh shurvaat <auspicious beginning>

BTW, did you read the last few chapters? 🤔

Originally posted by: lilydana

😉 So, to ascertain the subject matter: 😆

(CH19) In that smoky, intoxicating atmosphere ,

Sid somehow lost himself (just happened before that 'intoxication' : ...splashing cold water over and over again on his face<What's going to become of you, Sid?>...),

Pratishta- too big temptation for him ☯️ 😆, although 😵:'...he watched in amusement😲 😡 😎 as she pulled the nozzle to her, trying to get the last bit of goodness in her.'... (just love those tiny details in your story👏)

and he starts his -free fallin-, did he?

And - I don't withdraw those red roses for CH20

Originally posted by: VerboseG

Naazo 🤗

AWW... shubh shurvaat <auspicious beginning>

BTW, did you read the last few chapters? 🤔

Originally posted by: SiriuslySujal

I did!!! Sorry I haven't been commenting. Bura mat maano! 🤗 I had a fairly busy weekend. But I've been reading your updates and enjoying them a lot 😊 👍🏼 And I'm so glad you got to the point of the story I was impatiently waiting for! 😳

*is somewhere in between the sensualists and the romantics* 😛 😆

Originally posted by: TheImbecile

Sorry! Late on the commenting!

Ch 19- You are such a tease LOL I love it! So Siddy now realizes he is in love and spills the beans, huh?

Ch 20 - Nice buildup. lol. ON a more serious note, your descriptive words throughout these updates have been lovely, they show us the story, a much needed talent for an author. Beautifully executed GJ!

Originally posted by: SiriuslySujal

I did!!! Sorry I haven't been commenting. Bura mat maano! 🤗 I had a fairly busy weekend. But I've been reading your updates and enjoying them a lot 😊 👍🏼 And I'm so glad you got to the point of the story I was impatiently waiting for! 😳

*is somewhere in between the sensualists and the romantics* 😛 😆