SS: The Missing World-SidYusha as AnSh Pt 4 Pg 13

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lishu_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Aah.. What a treat man..!
IF is still a pleasant experience...thanks to the writers and creators here! 😳

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ananhita

@ananhita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Thanks Malika for a great start...sounds interesting, now two stories to look forward to everyday...this can t get any better!!!

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doka1709

@doka1709

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Wooow 👏!!! At last IF looks appealing again thanks to your and Neha's stories 🥳!!! Enjoying every bit of your wonderful story!!! I've read in someones post that if we were offered to choose a new invention it should be the one to transform FFs into movies I would die for that one right now 😳 to see our lovely SY meeting again after three years ❤️!!! Waiting happily for an update

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lifelessons

@lifelessons

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Malika 🤗 thanks

First of all, I love the name ...The missing world... it is indeed a missing world that only comes alive in our minds😊

I love the start...even though the 3 years separation made me a little sad but it will surely have made Anandi realize how much she missed Shiv and they were definitely not just business associates no matter how much she tries to tell her self that. Waiting eagerly for the story to unfold😃

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708922

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Malika, I am not a FF/SS reader whatsoever by any means, but you and Neha have convinced me to be otherwise. I didn't want anything to do with SY/AnSh for quite sometime bc everything about them just hurt.

Now, it doesn't really hurt, it's just a bittersweet memory. With such a thought, I was finally able to read Neha's story AND now your SS! was excited to see Neha's modern twist on SY and now am even more excited to see you rewrite history the way it was MEANT to be for AnSh so that I can erase the bad memories of what was. Thanks for doing this Malika! And also you are a lovely writer, a joy to read your work! 👏

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anshul

@milindrose

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

"Yeah everything is fine"

"Is he…" shiv's heart sank "I mean is Jagdeesh fine?"

Anandi froze hearing Shiv's question. She didn't know what to say. Tears welled up in her eyes as the memories of the past flooded her mind. Trying to look away she stifled a sob.

"We are not living together Collector Sahab…we never got married!!"

Her words left Shiv in a whirlpool of emotions. He stood glued to his spot as she walked away confessing the truth of her life.

thnx malika these emotions are real like for us becoz we have seen our sy such n really it reminds n rolls back the time we aere with sy love ur emotional pick up very much thnx 👏

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Nandita

@Nandita_Siddian

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

nice to see you back malika...🤗

Awesome start as usual...⭐️

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love.sid

@love.sid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

I like the way you capture emotions, good start, waiting for more

UPDATE SOON

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cygnet9

@cygnet9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

I am happy to come into this forum, read the stories and comment on them. SidYusha are really blessed to get inspired by many of writers like you. Keep going. By the way good story.