JaGan..FF..Forever yours...Updated Part15 page32 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago
Altleas ruthi hui Ganga maan gai leking JaGan ki sweet fighting rokna muskil hin nahi namunkin hai 😳 Shanky start to end the whole ff was so so so beautifull, thanku so much.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tweetie19

This part is also awesome Shanky...👏👏


I really wish one day we get to see Jagya holding his ears in front of Ganga...and Ganga shouting at him...It would be a very cute scene to watch...☺️


tweetie,so sweet of you.Thank you so much for the comment.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Libra123

Shanky..good one.. Please continue..


Rama,thank you,I will definitely continue.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jaiya

Finally our doctorsaa convinced his florence nightangale😉😉todays arguement was beautiful👏i want this kind of scenes in BVwounderful update dear😃actually shanky u move the story very beautifully👍🏼cont soon


Charu,yes,finally he convinced Ganga.But you can say Ganga was ready to get convinced but wanted to punish dactarsa.Thank you dear,it means a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sushiani

this so so so cute 😳 .
jagya will tell mannu that ganga is liar🤣
awesome update shanky ⭐️


These two can only ask for some justice from mannu.Because mannu knows everything.He is very intelligent.I think they both should be scared of mannu.Thanks sush.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Priyamvada

wowww shanky... I so loved ur latest update

its so very jagan.. cute, funny, adorable all at da same time! n emotional too!!

awesomeee work👏


Thank you very much priyam,I am trying to keep all the elements,thank god you liked it.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KiranlovSriti

Altleas ruthi hui Ganga maan gai leking JaGan ki sweet fighting rokna muskil hin nahi namunkin hai 😳 Shanky start to end the whole ff was so so so beautifull, thanku so much.


My update was not more beautiful than the appreciation you all are giving.Thank you Kiran for liking the update and commenting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART ~ 9

They continued arguing...Talking on the same topic...Who is a liar and who was laughing at
whom as if they are kids...Both were enjoying their childish argument...With all their
continuous childish talks and behaviour they finally reached badi haveli walking together
and guess what they were still taunting each other...

When they were going to enter the main road Jagya remembered...

Jagya:Damn,I forgot to bring the jeep.We were walking and talking the whole time,Ganga.How stupid!

Ganga:Oh,yes,we totally forgot about the jeep.

Jagya:Never mind,I will take the motor cycle and bring back the jeep.

Ganga:Dactarsaa,if you are going to bring back the jeep on motorcycle then who will bring back the motorcycle!

Ganga was smiling.Looking at Ganga's smile Jagya also smiled.

Jagya:I don't know whats wrong with me!Anyways,then once again I have to walk.

Ganga:Dactarsa,why are you going!Ask Makhan Kaka,he can bring back the jeep.Or ask someone from the hospital to do that.It will be much more easier.

Jagya:Yes,caught you.You think you are so smart,na!The keys are with me,how come hospital stuff will will start the jeep.

Ganga got embarassed.She shyly said..

Ganga:Ya,I didn't think of that.

Jagya:Its better to walk,you also come with me,we will walk and talk.It will be huge fun

Ganga:No,dactarsa,we have just reached home.I have to help kakisa,how long majisa will take care of mannu,she will be tired...

Jagya:How much time it will take!Half an hour!Plz,come with me.It will be helpful.We will just go and return back.Lets go Ganga.PLEASE.

Ganga was ready to go with Jagya,she felt happy that she will get another chance to spend time,also how can she say no to him.He is almost begging,but is it right!But her mind failed and her heart won.

Ganga:Ok,Dactarsa,lets go.

Jagya was very happy.He likes talking to her,also like listening what she is saying...Once again they started walking...

Jagya:Today I am enjoying every moment.Thanks to you.I thought I have lost the right to smile or live a happy life.But no!I will surely follow what you said to me.I will forgive myself and for my family's happiness I will give myself a chance to live.

Ganga was listening to Jagya.She was amazed that dactarsa is taking her each and every word so seriously.He is giving her words so much respect and will try to follow!She started feeling good about herself.She declared to herself,'You make me feel special,dactarsa,thank you.'

Jagya:Ganga,what happened!You are not listening.

Ganga:No,no,I am listening,dactarsa.

Jagya:Ok.Ganga,I think we should be friends from now on.

Ganga:Friends!

Jagya:Yes,friends.Pakkawala friends.Then I will have the right to say whatever I want to say to you and you will have the same right.

Ganga:Right!But its not needed...Ganga was hesitant...

Jagya:Why not!Look,if we were friends,you know pakkawala friends,then this incident and misunderstanding would not be happened.You could have complained to me with full right like 'ei dactarsa,mujhpe hasa kyun?'(Dactarsa,why you are laughing at me?')

Ganga laughed at jagya the way he was enacting the way of complaining...Jagya was also laughing...When ganga stopped laughing she said...

Ganga:But I have complained,na!

Jagya:Are,baba,after crying,getting irritated and avoiding me for two days,then you complained.If we become good friends you could even slap me if I hurt you,you know.And I can't utter a sentence...

Ganga:Chi,what kind of friendship is that!Why will I need to slap you!I don't what that kind of friendship.

Jagya:Aree,just giving you examples.So what say?Will you be my pakkawala friend!

Jagya made a gesture of shaking hand...Ganga looked confusingly at his hand...

Jagya:Give your hand,we need to shake our hand to start our friendship,don't you watch movies!Jagya asked her jokingly...

Ganga was thinking that she would love to be his friend.But she was naturally a little bit hesitant.Without any name of their relationship dactarsa and his family is doing so much for her.Now when she will be his pakkawala friend,she can easily imagine how much she is going to taken care by dactarsa...She got really happy thinking that...I will say whatever I want,whenever I want and I can even slap him with full right...

Jagya was waiting for her answer...Then he realized they reached the hospital...They both went to the jeep and sat inside...Jagya was about to start the jeep...Ganga spoke with a bid smile...

Ganga:Ok,dactarsa,I am ready to slap you with full right...

After hearing it from Ganga,Jagya returned her a even more bigger smile...Both shaked hands...

Then Jagya started the jeep...

It was a start of their new relationship.Both of them gave a name to their unknown relation.There was no doubt that they were taking care of each other as friends but today they officially accepted each other as pakkawala dost...

Jagya was thinking...He was feeling happy after ages.He is now able to forgive himself.He will now think of others happiness.Anandi was right it feels so good to make others happy.Ganga was right,he should forgive himself and give him another chance...He forgot how mischievous he was.He forgot how to lead life.Everything remained behind just because of his own mistake.He lost everything because of his mistake.But today he was happy,very excited.He has got a new friend in Ganga.He should never do any mistake further.Its his last chance.He is giving him a last chance to live...

They reached badi haveli...

Jagya:Thank you Ganga for making me understand...Also thank you for accepting my friendship...

Ganga was feeling like she will die because of so much happiness...She smiled but couldn't say anything...She got down from the jeep and went inside the haveli...Jagya parked the jeep and went to his room...




N.B. If you want to read all the parts then you can go to the second page and can get all the links of all the chapters together.
Edited by shankythebest - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shanky,pakkavala update 😎 I know the name of their unknown relation 😉 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... shanky i absolutely enjoyed reading it... i wish this was shown instead of what we get to see on BV... 😡

i loved these lines... .
He is almost begging,but is it right!But her mind failed and her heart won.

hmm... pakkawala friends... 😳 cute chp... 😎

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