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VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ritzi12
😭happy tears

omg i loved every wor of this and i can keep on reading n reading i loved the way u started

omg i can imagine all ansh scene cm as a flash its so beautiful

PS: shiv tum bolte jao i will never get tired

Thank you Ritz... 😳

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Nandita / Tina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

WOW! WOW! AND WOW!! ABS loved your lengthy narrative ❤️

You have succeed in recapturing the magic of ShivRaj Shekhar beautifully.

hehhehee he is still trying to unravel his Ajee but I'm loving every minute of it.

So true he is still pyaar ka maara bhukkad and still a cute casanova of Ajee 😳😆

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aparnauma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: VerboseG

Thanks Appy,

He has a PLAN, but he is still a bechaara, pyaar ka maara😆

The plan is to appear bechara when he is no bechara😆

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VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: 5cents
WOW! WOW! AND WOW!! ABS loved your lengthy narrative ❤️
You have succeed in recapturing the magic of ShivRaj Shekhar beautifully.
hehhehee he is still trying to unravel his Ajee but I'm loving every minute of it.
So true he is still pyaar ka maara bhukkad and still a cute casanova of Ajee 😳😆

He is a heartstealer...

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hooked

@hooked

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Kindly refrain from any kind of kabbadi on this thread.

😆.. Too funny !

I love Shiv's POV. I also love the fact that he realized he was rushing her and backed off when she looked scared. And finally - I also realized why he said 'YES' even though she kept insisting it was only to keep her mom's soul happy !

Thank you Shiv, and Thank you Shiv's pen for sharing all this.

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Peea

@pussycat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Really lovely ...it has refreshed our memory once agn.. We too r eagerly waiting fr A's wholehearted acceptance n embrace..

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Serviana

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome Ginu! As always! Your previous text about Anandi I could read over and over again! Love you!!!

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Nandita / Tina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: VerboseG

He is a heartstealer...

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Hai dil chor 😳

Love is but a matter of choice, how much one is willing to give himself, how much one is willing to lose himself and how much one is willing to destruct himself for it ...there goes Shivu.😳

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Manshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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OMG!... u made me speechless⭐️⭐️⭐️... The observation of Shiv's character bang on dear... I can literally imagine that Shiv actually saying all this... yes its his acid test...
Hats of to u for ur deep thought on Shiv's character... its marvelous... I loved it... great post..👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Thank u... for this...🤗

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VerboseG

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Posted: 12 years ago

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