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hamini_yash

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

hiii,
oh i am sooo glad ur here. Truly speaking i was more eager for u than the ffs itself(u r that rare). Il not say hot chocolate as it is summer here, but mmm ok i feel like drinking tender coconut. 😃
n nw about the update, what can i write that has not yet written! It was refreshin. Sometimes, just bcoz something is not right in life of a person about whome u care , everything in ur life is disturbed.i want 2 write so much more but no time, so il just say u depicted what is so strange, so well. Keep going.
P.S. Dont disappear

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Hey... I'm glad you're back. The updates are back on this thread. I so missed all your stories. The depth, the feel & the world you create around each character that I'm compelled to experience it all.. 👏

Now coming to the update... I guess it will take time for me to let Shiv's caharcter to sink in. But liked his entry, A subtle one with quite an impact.

A birthday celebration & its memories I guess is next on cards. I loved how you depicted the awareness & efectes the two are having on each other. Th echase has really begun.

Also can't leave out on the minuscle mention on Prithvi... 😳 I liked how his angst & all the trance he goes in is perceieved by Anandi. Want to know what is the actual dynamics of P-M story & how much of it that is revealed is true.

Also want more sneak peaks into the 'Paheli' ... more about the story within the story. 😊

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Thank You, Onir, honeygrape and hamini!

I wouldn't call this Shiv's entry, but technically it appears so - can't help it. He was there in the first few updates and then also showed up sparsely during their phone conversations.

A birthday celebration & its memories I guess is next on cards - Mark this for now :)

Paheli will be ended at the right time.

Edited by Lahari. - 12 years ago

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

Yes I agree that Shiv did come in the first starting parts... & also in some convos... But then for me Prithvi became so dominant that somewhere Shiv was in the shadows needing entry. 😊

Interesting part ahead... I suppose with the celebrations...

Will walit for revelation of the Paheli... 😉

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

I don't know if I should be welcoming you or your words back. It's been such a long time. 😆Thank you for the new chapter. There was so much said, both about Shiv, and Anandi in the way they interacted with each other. I swear every time I intend to get around to writing up my impressions, I get hit by inspiration best when I'm mentally exhausted or nursing a headache😳 Hopefully tomorrow.🤓

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HemaG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

a nice update afer a very long wait

nice to see shiv back in ur story

please update soon

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rdjha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

thanks first for updating the story!! and thanks for bringing back Shiv...please update soon, and reveal some suspense...and when is Shiv anandi story starting?

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Vandna_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Thanks for the update ...
I am loving the secrecy :) 😛
pls continue soon 😳😳😳

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

What is the suspense and the mystery you folks are talking about? 😕

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debbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#600

Thanks for the update Lahri, I was expecting this 2 months back though 😆

Hmmm...So Shiv is stung with the J factor(jealousy 🤓) now...as he himself admitted he used to be jealous towards Prithvi since childhood...I hope that acts as an accelarator in revealing his feelings towards Aji. But he has to keep his pace under control or else...ummm u never know Ajee's reaction. We all are eagerly waiting for the kiss scene 😛

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