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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Lahari.

Thanks!
Click search on any of my posts and that should lead you to my other threads. None of them are completed under this account, so you will just have to hang in there.

Lahari...

I got hold of your 2 other stories...

One into Magical realm...the other one a beautiful love story - "Istanbul'...

Hope you will surely keep updating these 2...too.

Pls do continue those...

I know., am' asking rather too much., in asking you to keep updating 3 stories simultaneously...but can't help it...have got rather addicted to your writing style and your creations..😊

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tistaa

@tistaa

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Lahari

I am really speechless by your writing style...it's very much unique and trust me I loved it so much

I am literally look forward for your update and thanx for the PM bcoz nowdays forum is flooded by awsome stories so it's really very tough to follow them and your PM helped me to follow the story so again thanx 😳

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SinSin

@SinSin

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Lahari,

I read all 5 parts at once and what I say is great 👏👏👏 Please continue with writing

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Lahari.
Thank you all for showing up! Keep doing that...

For now, I'm looking for some AnSh VMs to find inspiration and finish my update. Anyone up for helping me find them? Can't seem to find the VM thread.

Go thru' first page of any AT...where you will find most of the VM's compiled..

Else., you can also peep into Vedo's & GoldenDew's creations...

They are amazing...

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ruchshah

@ruchshah

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Thanks a ton for sending a PM on your new work!! Me love reading Anandi-Shiv works, just a tad bit uncomfortable following the show!I read all the updates so far😃...n i loved it so far!!Intresting plot; Anandi going to stay with Shiv parents n Saanchi needing a positive role model😉Looking forward to your updates! Update soon, Appreciate the PM's!!

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Pragya

@Siya_

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

This is really interesting! 😊 I don't read a lot of stories that deviate dramatically from the in-show storylines, but I really love the idea of Anandi going to college. This is also very nicely written, and conveys Shiv and Anandi's chemistry really well.

Edited by Shivandi - 12 years ago

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640638

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Caught up till chapter 2 so far.

I am not a BV viewer so watched the last episode to put faces on them. They are and not at the same time who you have written so far. I am glad for that. I like that you always have a slant away from the characters that are on TV. It makes for an interesting mix of the known and unknown.

Your Anandi seems to be a more mature, aware and independent person. I like the way she can speak her mind. There is awareness tingling in her towards Shiv.

I am liking Shiv a lot here. He seems to be an intelligent supportive and maybe slightly in love character.

Story is about Shiv-Anandi as I can see so far which is perhaps different from the show. Will post more as I catch up to the rest of it.

Thanks for a new story...

As always, love to read everything you write.🤗

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AlmondCat

@AlmondCat

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Thanks a ton for the PM Lahari!!! I missed last 3 updates and was able to catch up with all of them!

You have amazing flow with the words...It felt like a very subtle poem...cant wait for the next part!😊

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vasanthi.m

@vasanthimrao

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Read all the parts together😃

Its simply superb dear👏. The way u've brought Anandi's emotions, the way u're penning the story every thing is just superb, like a slow flow of water😳.

Loved it and waiting for the next part🤗

Edited by vasanthimrao - 12 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Hey... I started reading all the parts again, as I couldn't exactly place the whole story in one whole... But Now I guess somethings have started falling into place. I see that you've made some changes in part 3: Expose... Hmm, Interesting.😉

Part 4: Wow!!! 👏 You managed to sweep me again into your very magical, mystical & different realm of writing world. The whole scene so well written that I could actually picturise it happenning the way it was... even down to the minutest detail as nothing was left out, for that matter even the haze a dream usually causes one to remmeber while recollecting... It so serenely & effortlessly depicted how one's inner demons when not dealt with become your own frightenning nightmares... Her angst to break away from her own self- made boundaries & her self made ghosts beautifully put forward through that whole dream scene. Well written with all the emotions, unreal yet realistic feel to it, the mystical symbolism - a depiction of her own repressed conscious into subconscious. Then that hard hitting realisation at the end that leaves her with finally confronting the truth that she somewhere due to the facades & mask put by self, family & society were being supressed or being hidden away into the closet of her heart & mind. 🤗 Loved it...

P.S : I love it when you reveal the story in first person POV... Somehow I'm reminded of earlier version of NYT... (not that I can ever forget it...😊) ...

Will now read the next part & then comment.

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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