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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: AryaS

My heart skipped a beat when I read this line -
"I was thanking you for telling me about you."

Do I need to say...I love Shiv-Anandi 😳

Thanks! I had to change the line you had quoted for subtlety. Hoping it doesn't matter as much.

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SinSin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#202

I like your storeline 👏👏 please continue soon

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AroraN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Nice update 👏

Love the bond b/w shiv anandi 😊

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UNICORN75

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Read all the updates in one go...Wonderful story...So refreshing with various emotions put into.A subtle mention of one of my fav SS-Mrs Khurana and Mr Iyer..count me in when if you decide to continue that SS

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umam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#205

Brilliant and what a conversation both had --They both talking about Prithvi and M-- but in reality talking about themselves?? Aaaw-- why do I have the feeling that in making Anandi meet Prithvi, Shiv wants Anandi to know him better!!!!

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: umam
They both talking about Prithvi and M-- but in reality talking about themselves??

They were talking about Prithvi and Mitra...Certainly, there had been a part about Shiv that had come out too, but there wasn't anything about Anandi. Unless, you count that her eager questions gave something away.

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-Mitra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

I cannot stress on the importance comments. We are on FF forum and the thread is nothing short of being dead, which means we have been buried by 100 under threads. Your engagement in the thread is making me think if FF forum is the right place at all for this thread.

Thoughts?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

nice update lahari,,,,cant wait to next part ,,,plzz update soon..😊

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Tyro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

I really dont have any words to say abt this part...

it seems as if he needs to be arnd her to keep in check with his sanity...to c her content ...so that he can feel that too,,...

as for shiv n anandi...well...things r shaping up a little...a part here n there is always better than none at all...

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Onir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#210

I loved the part... but can't frame my words coherently at the present moment.

Two things for which I so feel like giving you a big hug..🤗:

For such a big part after such a long time... Really NYT days . It also has its own pros & cons... One being it has so much that one read just doesn't suffice & feel like reading it again to be sure I have'nt left out on anything there... Also It leads the story to such different levels. Thanks for it & hoping such long parts do feature not frequently but once in few parts...😊
Next being for bringing here Maan & Geethika, eventhough it was just a small mention. My lovely Mr. Iyer & Mrs. Khuranna.😳 Hayee. ( But you stated that Prithvi was with him in university at Delhi but as far as I can recollect it was supposedly in Chennai...) Anyways loved this tiny miny inclusion here... 😊

Now will comment on the actual part after I get my words back to express what I felt & my own weird analysis...😆