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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its awesome!
Btw what shud we call you???

Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome updates!!!!👏👏 I loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This Jagdish does not have any thing else to do other than running away all the time...😡😆
Nice update...Do continue..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!! It's amazing, plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Serviana

Awesome updates!!!!👏👏 I loved it!



I totally agree with above. I loved your story and thanks for so many beautiful updates. It really makes this Sunday anshlicious😳, and you are such a talented and creative writer.

I loved Anandi and Mahi conversation, loved how he brought out her realization of her love for Shiv. I would like so much that something like that happen in real BV and that asap but knowing how Cvs mind works (all about drama, tears and TRPs) I do not have big hopes.

Loved the way how Anandi open up to Shiv, how she decided to put Sings on hold, and decided that nobody will come between Shiv and herself, and that his happiness and well-being will be her priority. I know one of this days it will happen in BV as well, but until than we are eagerly waiting for your new updates.

Thank you for such a beautiful story.👏

I Love AnSh.❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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My update below is how I ,and judging from the posts, most Anshians ,wish Anandi would behave.BV is not going anywhere in that direction.So thought at least let it happen in our dreams.To all Anshians who await the realisation of love by Anandi...


PART 6

Shiv's grip slackened.He cursed his ill luck inwardly .She had just gotten to come near him and fate was yet again conspiring to take her away from him.He mentally readied himself to get ready to go to the Badi haveli.Much as he was grateful to dadiji for bringing Anandi into his life,he really wished that they would stop plaguing her with their problems.On one hand ,theytold her to move on ,but on the other they constantly surrounded her with their problems.

"Why dadisa?What happened/did somebody say something? Did Rattan Singh pose a problem yet again?I thought he would not, not after Shiv has threatened him.I though Jagya was happy now that Ganga has custody of her child and she has started studying once again."

"No chori,it is not Ganga..Jagdish has gone to Mumbai searching for Gauri.He has found out that she was pregnant when he left her and he wants to do right by the child.But she is not in Mumbai and nobody knows where she has gone."

' But why are you worried,dadisa?He has told you where he is going,hasn't he?"As Anandi conversed,she felt cold.Shiv had broken contact and was standing facing the window with his hands in his pockets.She could see him clenching his jaw muscles and fisting his hands.She realized for the first time that this was how it must have been for him everytime'.how much pain he must have felt,but how careful he had been to cover it and concentrate on lessening her grief.Her heart wrenched in her chest.

"chori,are you listening at all?I want you to come over right now so that we can think how to find him and bring him home once again."

At that moment,Anandi took a decision.It was probably one of the boldest'it would, probably with time ,have far reaching consequences.But she never once hesitated nor was she regretful.Today,she knew that it was the right thing to be done'.that which she should have a very long time ago.Some might think her selfish,but she was fed up being a mahaan.She wanted to be a normal woman leading a normal life with her husband.

She smiled at her husband."Please forgive me,dadisa.But I cannot come over now.Shiv has just returned and he is very tired after a hard day's work. I really think it is not correct to trouble Shiv over this.And,personally I am very angry with Jagya.For all his talks of repentance,I feel deep down he is still the shallow ,callous and selfish person he always was.Even today,he puts his needs ,his so called atonement before his old grandmother's happiness.He knows very well how much you miss him when he is away.Yet he does the same mistake again and again.And we are doing an injustice by Shiv asking him to search for Jagya everytime he goes missing.Today,I will tell you,Jagya does not want to stay at Jaitser'he never did.His talks of changing were all false.Let him go dadisa.Learn to live without him.Our lives are better off without him being a part of it.He has given us only heartache and shame.Let him go.If he comes back,take him in ,if not,hen know he never did care for you'think of happier times spent with him and let him be a fond memory.It is really late dadisa. Shiv is waiting.I will see you tomorrow.Ghanikhamma"

Shiv was flabbergasted.Was this Anandi speaking? Anandi ,putting him over her family and her first love.He kept staring.Anandi came closer.She wrapped her arms around him and hugged him tight."Never again,Shiv ,will anyone be more important than you to me.You are the essence of my life and I want to spend all my life enveloping you with my love and happiness."

"But,Anandi,are you sure about this?Do you not think dadisa will feel bad?"Shiv questioned.

"I know,Shiv.But someone had to tell her the bitter truth and who better than me.It was time for them also to move on and unless they moved on,they would never let me move on too.She does not do it purposely ,Shiv ,but her love for her grandson dulls her senses and does not make her think rationally.As for me,I was truly done with Jagya the day he abandoned them.This ,despite me handing over the responsibility of taking care of them in my absence.Once again he turned away from his duties.

In an effort to lighten the moment,Anandhi looked up at Shiv"Now CS,if you keep talking about Jagya ,I will get worried.Here your wife has just proclaimed her love for you ,but you don't seem to be giving her the right response"A mischievous look entered Shiv's eyes."Oho! Anandhiji.So this is what you think.Hmmm'.maybe you are right.Maybe your husband needs more convincing about your love for him." So saying,shiv bent his head."Wait",said anandi."Oh ! what is it now?',cried shiv,"Anandi you really know how to punish a person." Anandi reached out and switched off both their phones.'Now ,it's only us ,Shiv.Nobody can disturb us.I want this moment to be so special that it exceeds even those expectations you have in your dreams."She walked willingly back into the comfort of his arms.And finally after so much waiting,their lips met.It was an explosion of senses .Both had not been prepared for such feelings nor such joy.They were unwilling to break away for fear that the magic would wear off.But finally had to do so for want of air."Vow",said Shiv."Anandi,I never thought in my wildest dreams that it would be anywhere close to this."Anandi closed her eyes and buried her face in Shiv's chest.Shiv broke contact.He lifted her and placed her on the bed as gently as one would place a flower.

The night reverberated with their cries of passion .The warm glow of their love emanated from them and engulfed the entire house.As the breeze gently parted the curtains,the moonlight shone through.But neither the moon nor the candles could match the brilliance of their love.It outshone all others burning away any residual negativity lighting a path that promised peace and harmony.In the night sky as the stars twinkled,one star outshone all others in pride and happiness.

They were no longer Anandi and Shiv ..from now on they were one in both spirit and body ..they had truly become ANSH!!!!!

THE END

Edited by bhaironnath - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really nice last part...loved Anandi wish they could show somehig as such
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the full ss was a very nice one...👏...i am just wising that the Bv makers should read it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Read the whole SS together. Its awsome👏 I soo loved Anandi's reply for dadisa. And AnSh😳
loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Very very beautiful !

I love the role of Mahi. He will have to be the love Guru just like he has had to be their cupid thru out. So perfect - thankyou !

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