That first night -OS

_symphony thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 7
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
Guys this OS is super short as for a record i typed it from my phn.An os frm phn I cnt believe my desperation l.pls bear with typos.

------------------
That First Night

A deep sigh escaped Anandi's lips as she glanced at her surreal husband sleeping blissfully on his side of their bed.Their bed...her heart skipped a beat at the thought.She couldn't forget a single word he confessed to her just a few moments ago.The way he took her hand into his and understood all her fears all her confusions without her needing to say a word left her in a warmth she had never felt before.Suddenly it felt as if he had conquered a terrain of her concious no one else ever tried to even explore.No one had ever made her feel so peaceful and content.A silent tear escaped the corner of her eye as she remembered how he was ready to shift himself on the couch to make her comfortable but didnt when she requested him to stay as she wont be able to let him sleep on the minuscule couch.But somewhere it ws her own selfish reason to stop him.She didnt want to be left alone tonight...she was at a totally new place away from her safe haven.And he again understood her fear without any verbals.And thus now he was here sleeping peacefully by her side with a beatific smile tugging the corner of his lips.It was so strange he had no idea what had he done for her.Done something she never thought anyone could do for her.He filled the void of her lonely nights...made her feel the warm pleasure of someone sleeping by her side.She never said it but nights used to be the most silent part of her life.The erriness of being all alone every night left her heart with unhealable scars.But tonight was different.She was no longer alone ...no longer on her single bed that reminded her of her loneliness.He was there.There to hold her if she felt scared.wiping the tears that snuggled the corner of her eyes she nestled herself into her blanket.Looking spellboundedly at him and taking in his features she gently closed her eyes into a world of new dreams.It felt beautiful to be his wife.
Edited by Malika - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

22

Views

7.8k

Users

22

Likes

80

Frequent Posters

...Hanna... thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
heya malika 🤗

aww...so beautifull..I luv it.😊
Vishakha_Sakhi thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Partner, that was absolutely positively BEAUTIFUL!!!
Made me feel all senti! 😭 I love you! 🤗
Edited by Vedo - 12 years ago
roberoi thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Malika-e-kalam 👏

U r awesome...kaise kaise jazbaat paint kar dete ho yaar...one can see the whole picture...I am overwhelmed
5cents thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Mallika-a-azam abs loved it. Beautiful !!! 👏
Bidaaifan09 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Absolutely wonderful. The words you used expresses so much emotion tat I smiled while reading it pleas keep writing.
QuagMyred thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
"It felt beautiful to be his wife."

INDEED!!!
Loved it Malika-e-Kalam!!!😳
*happy tears*
Bul3 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
it was BEAUTIFUL Malika👏
umam thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
Malika - I had tears in my eyes when I read it --and reminded me of the angst that she felt when she was blasting the balvivah supporter journalist on how a girl needs the sense of security more than anything else in a marriage. You brought this out so beautifully --
A realizing what S means to her
Mithi_vani thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
Wow!...Its beautiful...U show A's feeling amazingly...its very touchy nd sweet... Great...very nice os Malika... 👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".