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Vandna_

@Vandna_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Another lovely one from you Malika ... short , simple and beautiful . 😳

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dixie123

@dixie123

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awww Malika.. Awesome.. 👏 How do you come up with such nice expressions of emotions ?

"It felt beautiful to be his wife. "... 😳 Haaye when will this day come in BV.

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VerboseG

@VerboseG

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Wonderfully expressed, as usual Muku! But, ye dil maange more...

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dlip

@dlip

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Malika

Awesome, even though it is short!

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Missesha

@Missesha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Very sweet Indeed...

Guys who are gentle in nature, have the best ability to win hearts of their lady love. And this love in a woman keeps growing for ever. Glad Shiv is so gentle and Anandi is finally fortunate.

Thanks for a beautifully described thought.

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sarah88

@sarah88

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Good one Mallika..though short but perfect👏loved it

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anshurg5

@anshurg5

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

malika it was beautiful,😛

short but perfect.👍🏼

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malika

@_symphony

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Thanks so much guys for the lovely words 😳...really didnt think it was good.This was quite instinctive...I still cant beleive I wrote something using my phone.It was just an emotion and I wanted to pen it down.Thanks to all of u for liking it ...🤗