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roberoi

@roberoi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hi Uma...agar epi mein time hota to I am sure S ke yahi thoughts dikhate CVs

Lovely OS...dil ko raahat mili, thandak mili...S aisa hi hai...will think, analyse and now act...aur hum sab ke dil ki murad poori karega 😳

Ek bhool to maaf hoti hi hai...good she knows he is human not farishta and she needs to take care of him tenderly as well...duniya bhar ke bare mein sochti hai aur hamare Sjee ke liye nahin and he is shown to be as sensitive as u hv depicted ... Kudos to you 👏

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svkworld2

@svkworld2

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

OMG...that was one of the beautiful OS I have read in a while.

You have captured the thought process of Sjee so well.

I am sure every one were in sync with Ajee's pain not Sjee's and this OS shows exactly what Shiv might be thinking.

Take a bow, Darling :))

👏

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Myraa Khan

@QuagMyred

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

What was that Uma???

Truly awesome!!!

I am sure you are a hell of an understanding lady...Ur children must be so lucky!!!

Lowe ya for this!!! BRILLIANT!!!

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Khusi

@khusi_*

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

And what ate him most was that he was letting it happen. He was letting her walk away from him.

these two lines i loved the most adi

superb OS👏

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melliflous

@melliflous

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Uma

It was beautiful 😊 loved it!
Especially the last line had so much impact to it..

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Uma

@adi2512

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: QuagMyred
What was that Uma???
Truly awesome!!!
I am sure you are a hell of an understanding lady...Ur children must be so lucky!!!
Lowe ya for this!!! BRILLIANT!!!

Thank You...Myra..

And pls...I'am not Pro Shiv or Pro Anandi...

Am' Pro AnSh...

And after 2 days of torture...I could connect with AnSh today...the way CV's have potrayed them...