The prince and the pauper: completed! :)

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anonee

@anonee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesome - beauty in prose!!

Thanks. Please continue.

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hooked

@hooked

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Aww Suchi 🤗!!

Such a lovely Once upon a time tale... I am a complete sucker for fairy tales and you do spin such a lovely yarn. Kudos !! Beautiful expressions, fantastic illustration and expressions that leave me short of words to describe them 👍🏼👏.

We have all the wisdom in all our nursery tales and we never think they are real. Yet see - how that cunning princess with a heart of stone and a beautiful face but ice-cold eyes is trying to drive a poisoned spear into the prince's heart so he can turn against his own family !!

But thankfully - we know that the poisoned apple did not really kill SnowWhite, it just stayed stuck in her throat and made her look dead - till the time she recieved a jerk and it can come out and she opens her eyes again.

Our Jagya too - like Snow-white was poisoned by the cold evil maiden and he too will spit out the poison and become his own clean self. I can see fate (read CV's) doing that in the very near future as I gaze into my crystal ball.

Am awaiting your next installment. btw, I love the new stranger who helped the princess and went his way. Really want to see how you will make him meet our lovely princess again .😳❤️

Will you make them fall in love ? Will her wayward husband spit out the poisoned apple before she marries another young man with a heart of gold ? Will she go back to the old fellow or move ahead with the new charming stranger ?

Oooh ! I just can't wait ...

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Khusi

@khusi_*

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

suchiii

its just too good!!

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sreevask

@sreevask

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

ThanQ 4 creating the wonderland...When will prince (Shiv) enter?as the prince-1 is the pauper...
Eagerly awaiting AnSh track of magic land n the charm of the prince Shiv...
Love my Anandi in princess with sword...marvellous!

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Omg Suchi, now I am in la la land...dreaming about Prince Shiv and Princess Anandi! I loved it to bits yaar! ❤️ Very beautifully written...do continue soon! 👏 👏 😳