SS: Too Little Too Late(Updated: on Pg.6)

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

awesome dear...i loved the way you brought out what he has lost...rarely we see anything written from an antognist's POV and this I guess lent this OS an uniqueness...

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...Hanna...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Wow dat was awsum wonderfull

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Nazneen

@SiriuslySujal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Excellent! A beautiful and fitting end. Great writing! 👏 I hope they actually do something like this in the serial!

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SujaK

@SujaK

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Absolutely amazing!! just brilliant. 👏👏👏👏

What else I can say !!?!? Hats off to you Vedo!!

Keep writing..

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Suchi-

@Suchi-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

veryyy nicee!!!!

:)))👏

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Soumya

@AbhiAni

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

really awesome...please continue...waiting for the next part😳

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the_Rij

@the_Rij

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Loved it. Your writing style is awesome. Loved the last part...

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Very nicely written.

It highlights what we want to see happen eventually.

You brought out the relationship between Anandi and Shiv very well.

Glad to see Shiv was least bothered about Jagya and he is the type who would not be unless he sees Jagya as a threat. In this case clearly Jagya cannot be a threat so he is civil to him 😆

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mbloves

@mbloves

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

wow! vedo..👏👏 well written ,but i liked "princess ANSHI's kick"🤣

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Hey guys 😃, I just want to say Thank you to everyone who read & liked/commented on my scribblings!! Thanks for all your encouragement, love & support!! You all are awesome!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

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