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Posted: 12 years ago
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A request

Can someone tell me which episode Anandi and Jagya went on a honeymoon? What date did it air on? It would be even better if you can give me the links!!! I started watching this lately. I need those scenes to make this SS a good experience for the readers.

Thanks in advance

Jhan



Part VII


Shiv and Anandi started handing things out while Iravati and Meenu took it out from the bag. They handed it to each person one by one and received their thanks. Anandi handed out the clothes while Shiv handed out the sweets and together they gave both these things to the poor one by one.

Gauri was doing her pradakshinas around the temple when she saw the two ladies from the afternoon supervising the distribution of clothing. They seemed to be supervising a couple. She wondered if this was the same couple that was getting blessed by the Pandit when she entered. She envied them for being surrounded bu so much love and goodwill.


Suddenly a though occurred to Gauri and she checked to see if the girl was wearing that saree she coveted but the girl was not. She was wearing a nice saree but not that one. The color was not the same. Gauri strangely felt happy the girl had not worn it. She hoped that when she wore it, she would not come in front of her. Gauri knew she would feel very unhappy if she saw someone else wearing that saree. She tried hard to see the girl's face but it was kind of hard considering the girl had her pallu on her head and had her back to her. Also her husband and the other two ladies were in the way. All she saw was her hennaed hands (henna=mehendi) and her chooda. Her husband was taking the clothes from one of the ladies and handing them to the girl before taking a box of sweets. Then they gave the clothes and sweets to the poor together. From what she could see he was extremely good looking. Gauri thought she had seen him somewhere before but could not place him. He seemed to be pretty charming too making everyone around him laugh. She could hear the two ladies laughing and it seemed like his wife was laughing too. In fact the poor seemed to be smiling too. She could not remember the last time she and Jagya had laughed together over something.

Gauri caught sight of the girl's chooda again as she took the clothes from her husband and said something to him. He was bending down to hear what she was saying because he was much taller than her. He replied making everyone around him laugh and one of older ladies hit him in jest. Gauri looked at her own chooda and thought about how she and Jagat barely spoke anymore. Instead of bringing them together, the wedding had served to drive them further apart. She knew part of it was her fault but Jagat was at fault too and he would not accept that. She was tired of being the only adult in the relationship. She wanted him to step up and take responsibility for his mistakes too. Every time this came up they would have an almighty row and not speak to each other for days. She was frankly tired of his and needed to know what was going on in his mind.

While Gauri was lost in her thoughts, the couple had finished donating the items and gotten ready to leave. The other two men she had seen before stood at the bottom waiting for the others in front of their car. Gauri hoped to catch a glimpse of the girl's face because she knew she would turn to salute god before they left. The girl turned and at the same time Gauri 's neighbor came and stood in front of her waving her hands in front of her eyes saying "I have been searching for you everywhere. What are you doing here? Darshan is done. Can we please leave? I need to get home." Gauri replied "Just one minute" and moved her neighbor out of the way hoping to catch a glimpse of the girl. Instead she saw back the back of that girl. She and her husband were patiently helping his grandfather into the car. She could see the girl's beautiful long hair. Just then it looked like she would turn and Gauri watched to see her face but the guy came in between to open the car door. He helped her in and then got in himself. The car had tinted glass windows and Gauri could not see anything inside the car. Gauri cursed her neighbor for coming in between and not allowing her to see the girl's face. Meanwhile the neighbor decided she had been ignored long enough. She was insistent she needed to get back to her baby and so they left. Gauri realized she also had to cook and go into work. They flagged down an auto and started for home but Gauri was pensive on the ride home. The neighbor tried to engage her in conversation but Gauri was uncooperative so she started chatting with the auto driver instead.

As they were going home in the auto, the auto stopped at a signal. Gauri looked out and saw Jagya eating bhel puri with some girl. Rather the girl was trying to feed Jagya some bhel. She was shocked and appalled at what she saw. He had not eaten lunch she cooked at home but was busy eating bhel at a roadside stall. She was going to get down and give him a piece of her mind when the signal changed and the auto started again. The traffic was heavy but she still put her head out and watched them till they disappeared from view. Gauri could not believe what she just saw. She had a hard time believing this but she had seen this with her own two eyes. How could she dispute that? She looked to see if her neighbor had seen anything and found her engrossed in a conversation with the auto driver about the rising price of petrol and how the government did not seem to give a damn about the common man. Gauri thought she had bigger problems in her life than the cost of petrol.

She managed to hold her tears until she walked into her flat and locked it. Then the dam broke and she cried bitter tears railing against Jagat. She was so angry with him. It seemed like all her fears were true and Jagat was being unfaithful. Gauri thought of calling her mother and even picked up the phone to do so but realized her mother would only give her more sermons. She could never give her any constructive ideas. She would tell her it is not Jagat's fault and that she should do more things for Jagat. Why? Why should she do any more for a man who was cheating on her? She looked at him staring back at her smilingly from his family photograph. She looked at the smiling Anandi in the photograph who seemed to be looking at her with a smug smile. Bhairon seemed to be enjoying her predicament. Her eyes then fell on Sumitra who seemed to be mocking her. Gauri remembered Sumitra's challenge to her. That was when she lost it. She picked up a vase and threw it at his family photograph. The vase and the photo frame both came crashing to the ground. She sat down and cried curling herself into a ball. She cried until she had no tears left and a headache into the bargain. Her head felt heavy and she knew she could not go to work like this and so she called in sick saying she had food poisoning. Oh she was feeling poisoned all right but just not by the food she ate. She could not wait for Jagat to get home today. She decided to take some medication and go to sleep. She needed to have her wits about her for when Jagat came back. 😡


(Note: I have given you three updates for one day 😳. Ab don't anyone ask for updates 😈...kyunki homework complete karne ke baad hi ab updates milenge 😈 ...cos I need that info to write the story further 😛 😳...kya bole 😡 ...kya homework kahan ka homework 😡 ...homework nahin patha 😡...upar dekho 😡...part VII shuru hone se pehle ...story dekha nahin tho padna shuru aage peeche kuch nahin diktha hai ... 😆 😆 😆...but homework karna zaroor varna update nahin milega 😈...kuch samjhe 😛 🤣)


Just in case you are wondering why I am requesting and dhamkoing in the same post 😛 - uska bhi explanation hai mere paas 😛 😉...arrey nahin I am not a split personality 🤢... the request is made in Anandi's style and the dhamki is made in dadaji's military style 🤣 🤣 🤣

Edited by liv2laugh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Jhan Look for "raat suhagan balika vadhu" in youtube. You will find the honeymoon scenes.

Your writing is so interesting. I promise not to ask you anymore until Monday. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: lavy


Your writing is so interesting. I promise not to ask you anymore until Monday. :)



24 hours ka respite 😭 <=== tears of joy===> 😭...Aho bhagya hamare 😆 😆 😆

It will take longer than that because I have to watch the scenes and write. Plus I go back to work on monday ...spies have reported that my office building is still standing inspite of all the vibration testing 😭
Edited by liv2laugh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok I will be nice and not ask for anymore today but I dont know about tomorrow I might be back with a vengance because I am enjoying your writing so much I am even postponing doing my homework just to read your story instead of a boring law book. 😭 so please dont make me wait until Monday have mercy on me and the rest of us lol
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A quick question what is a "Chooda" just curious
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Jhanaviii !! You cheater !! pehle hi bol diya ki mai next update baad me dungi ! 😆
koi nai.. we will wait patiently...like good kids 😳

P.S. The OS was tooo good ! I loved every part ! 👏
P.S 2 next part monday tak aa jana chahiye nahi to ! 😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: piya_anshian

Jhanaviii
P.S 2 next part monday tak aa jana chahiye nahi to ! 😡



Only I am allowed to give dhamkis 😎
Dhamkaoing me will result in a delay in updates FYI 😉
Number of dhamkis = number of days update is delayed 😈
Hahaha I hold all the cards 😈 😎
Edited by liv2laugh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bidaaifan09

A quick question what is a "Chooda" just curious



Check this out

http://www.maharaniweddings.com/2009/04/chooda/
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome updates!!!!!!!! Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one Jhan ! So, by the end of this SS are we going to see Anandi fall in love finally ?I am going to wait patiently for your OS Jhanavi .But, these updates were supposed to come yesterday itself.. right ? after you got the live update.. So, iske hisab se you have to pay us a penalty and give us atleast one more for tomorrow !!!! 😆

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