ANSH...A new LUV story

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Hii folks... I am a very new follower of INDIA FORUMS. though I have been watching balika vadhu since its first episode I never attempted to make it follow through the internet and wen I started going through the internet on it I happened to pass through India Forums and Liked the page very interesting and Now an very ardent follower of Balika vadhu in India Forums. I dont know if its the right way of posting a story but I have tried to do it 😉. Hope U all njoy it and also guide me the right path to go in case I am wrong in doing it. All ur comments both positive and negative are wholeheartedly accepted as it would encourage me to do more and never discourage me..😊
Folks here is my first attempt to write a small story on ANSH..Hope u guys like it and appreciate it, even if it does not all the views would b my ranking and I would b more than happy to accept that. SO here I go with my first post in INDIA FORUMS.

Anandi is 😭 after the divorce remembering all the beautiful moments they spent together since childhood days. Just then Bhairo comes with the box which sumitra asked to give her on this day. Anandi reads it and is sad and missing her a lot. Dadisa watches all this and decides to go and speak with Bhagwati and expresses the same to Bhairo. Bhairo agrees but asks dadisa to inform the same to Anandi, but the later refuses it and says that Anandi is too stubborn like her and will never listen to anyone if she is decided on anything. Dadisa and Bhairon plan to go to meet Bhagvati the next day. Here in the room Anandi is crying remembering all the things that she went through in her life since her childhood, since the days before her marriage and suddenly she remembers Shiv.

Here in Shiv's room, Shiv is sad thinking about Anandi and how helpless he is right now to help Anandi to overcome the situation and in an event shows his frustration of unable to help Anandi by hitting a table and the glass filled with water falls down and in an attempt to pick the broken glass pieces injures himself and is in pain. Right at the very moment when Shiv is hurt and is in pain Anandi realizes something wrong with Shiv and is restless and fights within herself to call him or not to call him, and lastly gives up the battle by deciding to call SHIV… Shiv is least bothered of the wound in his hand and is thinking of Anandi even when he is bleeding badly. Just then Shiv's phone rings and he is 😃 superexcited to see Anandi's name flashed on the screen. Shiv picks up the phone and is more than relieved to hear Anandi's voice.

A: Hello.

S: hii Anandi jee..Kaisi hain Aap..Sab theek hain na.. Kaise yaad kiya humein woh bhi itni raat ko.

A: Jee hum theek hai, bas aapse baat karne kaa maan kiya.

S: (Superexcited on this words from ANandi) Jee bataiyee…kya baat karna chahtee thii aap.

A: Maaf keejiye maine aapko itni raat mein disturb kiya….

S: Nahin Nahin anandi jee, its ok…Main bas kuch bhi nahi kar raha thaa jo aap mujhe disturb kare.

A: Collector sahib, I want to thank u on wat u did the other day. I was desparetly missing Sumitra and at the right time u came in and helped me out. Dhanyavaad jaise shabd kehkar mein aapke iss ehsaan ko chota nahi karna chahti thii, but phir mann nahi maan raha thaa isliye baat kari aur..

S: Aur kya anandi jee

A: Collector sahib aap theek toh hain na..Mera matlab hain aapki tabiyat.

S: jee, par aap aise kyun pooch rahi hoo

A: Woh pata nahin, par mujhe aisa laga shayad aap kisi dard mein the, isliye call kari aapko itni raat mein.

S: Aapko kaise pata chala anandi jee.

A: Kya.

S: Kee mere haath mein choth lagi hain glass ko uthate waqt.

A: Kya aapko chot lagi hain, khoon zyada beh raha hain kya, zyada gehri chot toh nahin hain naa.

S: Anandi jee shaanth ho jaiye.. Sab theek hain, chota saa choth hain, bas theek ho jayegaa.

A: Aap pehle apne choth ko saaf keejiye aur phir haldi lagadeejiye subah tak theek ho jayegaa.

S: jee shukriya.

A; Acha mein abh rakthi hoon. Ghani khamma.

S: Bye gudnite.

👏Shiv is so superexcited after the talk and is relieved that Anandi is back to her normal state and is also happy tat she cares for him and she could realize that he was in pain the moment he was hurt. Shiv realizes that anandi also feels something for him but maybe does not or can be that she feels for me but is unable to express it or is scared to accept anything such at this time of her life where she really had a bad phase.

Anandi in her room is thinking why did she call him and ask him about his health. She has to b angry with him for accepting to marry her just by hearing dadisa's words. Anandi remembers all the events tat she came across with Shiv and also the dream sequence and tries to sleep and she dozes off to sleep thinking about Shiv.

If U guys have liked or did not like my post do comment or complement and I would continue with the rest , the very next moment I am free from my hectic schedule. 😛

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awesome...pls continue...😃
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Thnx for the feedback and also the likes, I would luv to hear more from u guys. Anyways here is the remaining part..DONT FORGET TO COMMENT ALONG WITH UR LIKES PLZZZ...
Its morning and anandi is late in getting up as she is tired with all the crying she had done the last night and suddenly wakes up to realize that its already 8 in the morning and no family member came up to her to wake her up. She suddenly gets up and gets ready and goes down to find dadisa and bhairon get ready to go somewhere. She takes everyones blessing and asks dadisa where they are heading to. Dadisa lies as usual and tells tat they are going out on work basis and asks her to take care of herself and to b happy and start a fresh new start from today. Anandi bides them bye and takes gehna's permission to go to school and also informs that she will be to the temple bfore she leaves to school and gehna agrees. Anandi is in the jeep with makhan kaka and is worried thinking how to face the village after the legal divorce with jaggu. Anandi reaches temple but does not have the courage to face the villagers there. She performs the pooja and wen she is about to leave few villagers come to her and does her aarti and welcomes her by addressing jaitsar ki beti. Anandi is awestruck on listening these words. The villagers say that aaj sahi maanya mein tum jaitsar ki beti ho anandi. Kal tak tum jagya ki beendni thi, iss gaav ki haveli kii beendni thi , par aaj se tum iss poore gaav kii beti hoo. Kabhi iss gaav ko aur humein paraaya mat samjhnaa. Tumhari har mushkil ghadi mein, har faisle mein hum sab tumhare saath hein. Yeh poora gaav aaj side effects tumhara parivaar hain anandi beta. Anandi is so happy hearing these words and expresses her gratitude to each and everyone. Shiv who happens to b there listens to all these and is very happy and looks on anandi with utmost luv and affection. His eyes filled with luv and his face almost showing the expression of hugging anandi and saying I am proud of u my sweet heart. Anandi takes leave of the villagers and starts to leave when she sees Shiv standing at the corner and staring at her. Anandi could not understand nor read his expressions. Shiv was standing firm as a statue and not uttering a single word nor a slightest movement in his body only eyes speaking thousands of words of luv and appreciation for anandi. Anandi came close to him and taps him on his shoulders and asks him abt his health and the wound tat he had last night. SHiv comes back to reality and answers in yes just by giving a nod as he is speechless and spell bound at the site of Anandi. Anandi asks him what happened and Shiv says nothing and then they share a small formal talk. Shiv states that the inspector who was coming for the grant of the school is expected in two days and he will get with her the correct date of his arrival. Anandi thanks him and both goes to their respective places.

Its afternoon and shiv is thinking about Anandi and how the villagers luv her and also feels bad tat a girl like Anandi whom the whole world luvs has been betrayed by a stupid fellow like Jagya. He remembers the scenes that happened in Jaipur, the jail scenes and all and is sad for anandi and has pain in his eyes thinking how Jagya could spoil Anandi's life. At the same time Shiv is thankful to GOD as well as to Jagya tat it was only coz of jagya that he could get a girl like anandi in his life. He thinks that he needs to give Anandi her space and time as she is so emotionally close to Jagya. He thinks that she has to first get rid of jagya's thoughts from her mind and then start of a fresh start of her life and he promises to himself that he will be with her in all aspects of his life till his last breath even if anandi accepts him or not. Shiv states that from this second onwards my life is totally dedicated to U anandi. I luv u so much that I wont let anything happen to u in anyways. No wind can shake my luv for u. U will always remain in my heart as my beloved. I will b with u as a friend or as a collector in front of u and will always support U and will never leave u in the midway. I am sure Anandi tat to get u I will have to face many hurdles from U and everything is fair in luv and war and this is luv and I am fighting with my luv to get my luv. U will not b able to stay away from me for a longer time anandi. U will win me and I will win U.

There dadisa and bhairon see Bhagwati and is shocked to see her present health condition and asks them why they did not inform them about Bhago's ill health. Bhago and Khajan singh say that when their daughter has chosen her inlaws house to b her maika they dint have the courage to speak to them or express what they are going through. Since that time Bhago's health got worse day by day and now doctors have said it as a hopeless case and that she is breathing her last and can pass away any moment. Dadisa and bhairon feel very bad at the situation and asks them to come along with them to jaitsar to which they strongly refuse. Dadisa then says the news of Anandi's divorce to her parents and they are even more shocked hearing this and says that y did they let all this happen. Bhairo say that they are doing all t his for the betterment of their daughter anandi and that they have abandoned their son and have adopted Anandi as their own daughter and not as daughter-in-law. Bhago and Khajan singh are very happy to hear that they luv anandi more than they luv Jagya. Dadisa then shows the photo of shiv and anandi together and ask their opinion on him and also says all about Shiv and how he is interested in Anandi. Bhago states that Anandi wil never agree to this. Dadisa says that it is only u who can let this happen and she will never say no to Bhago. Bhairon and Dadisa plead and request them to come along with them to their daughter's house and stay with them so that they can take care of bhago and her health and also they can make anandi understand wat is life without a perfect partner and can make her think of marrying Shiv and make understand Shiv's luv for her. Both disheartedly agree and prepares to go along with Dadisa and Bhairon.

In the evening around 4 Shiv gets a call from the minister that he will b to jaitsar to visit the school in 2 days and that he has to find it very impressive and worth enough for the grant. Shiv assures him that he will be more than impressed and will surely give the grant. Shiv thinks of giving this news to anandi first through phone but later dejects the idea and says that it is only during these occasions tat he gets a chance to meet his ladylove and that he should never miss these small chances and decides to go and meet her personally and share this news with her. Shiv starts on his way to anandi's school but the moment he reaches there he finds that the school is closed and that everyone has left to home. Shiv thinks of going to haveli and meet anandi and share the news and hence drives directly to the haveli. He reaches haveli and is shocked to see the family members weeping and asks the matter. Dadisa says that they went to visit ANandi's mother and found that her health is worst and since there is no one to look after her over there they brought her parents here and anandi is unable to control herself by looking at her mother and they are unable to control themselves by seeing their darling daughter crying. Bhairo says that they are ready to do anything to get Anandi's smile back. It has been long that they have seen her smiling whole heartedly and their only wish is that she stay happy. Basant also adds that she has done so much for everyone since her childhood days and does not understand why GOD is always punishing Anandi and does not understand y GOD always gives tears to Anandi when she has done only good. Shiv is also very emotional on seeing the family sob and asks them if he can meet anandi's parents. Dadisa agrees and takes him to the room where anandi and her parents are. Shiv's eyes searches for Anandi who is facing his back and the moment she looks at him he is painfully crying from within. He wanted to hug her and wipe her tears and assure her that things will fall in the right place not to worry, but he is unable to. Shiv notices that Anandi is crying very badly and is looking at him without even blinking her eyes as if expecting him to say something to her, as if she is expecting that shiv comes to her and say that everything will b right, but he does not have the courage at this time to go and console her. Shiv goes to anandi's parents and takes their blessings and Khajan sngh and Bhagvati are pleased by looking at Shiv and his culture of taking elders blessings even after being at a high post of a collector. Dadisa introduces Shiv to Anandi's parents and when khajan singh addresses shiv as collector he interrupts and asks him to call him by his name or to address him as beta as they are elder to him and Anandi is impressed at this talk of Shiv and looks at him with affection, but does not understand wat her feelings are for him. Shiv sits near to Bhagvati and holds her hand and puts her hand on his head in the form of giving aashirvaad and bhagvati smiles at shiv though tears filled in her eyes. Shiv also has tears filled in his eyes and holds her hand tight and says that GOD will do things right and he is there to help them in any means and would take it as a privilege to help them in any means and says to dadisa to call him at any point of time for any help required in anyway. He assures dadisa and khajan singh that he is like their son and not a collector and can demand anything to him just the way a mother orders things to a son. Anandi is falling deep down in her heart for him and is fighting with the mixed emotions that she has for him.

Shiv takes the permission to leave but before that says that he needs to speak to Anandi and if she could accompany her to the living room. Anandi agrees and goes with Shiv. Every step they take to the living room felt as if it was taking a lifetime to reach. Anandi could just not take her eyes from Shiv with every step she put forward and Shiv feeling sad for Anandi's present condition, the marriage proposal, the divorce, mother's health, and is worried a lot as he cannot even console her, but determines that he will b with her and help her fight this situation. They reach the living room. Shiv takes a glass of water and gives to Anandi and asks her to drink first which she obeys like a small kid and later shiv takes the glass from Anandi's hand and in this session their hands touch each other's hand and they both share a gaze lost in each other's eyes. Shiv realizes that Anandi is lost in her and he goes ahead with his talk and now anandi comes back to reality. Shiv says that the minister is coming to inspect the school day after tomorrow. He also says that this is not the right time to say but he was not aware of her mother's ill health and hence agreed for the date. Anandi says that she has no problem with it and that she does not want to put the life of the girls of this village at stake by not being there on that day and assures him that she will handle the situation. Shiv states that he is not worried at all as he knows that she can do anything for the benefit of the village and that he has more trust on her than he ever had on him. Anandi is again mesmerized by his words and is lost in his thoughts. Shiv then takes leave and Anandi accompanies him till the jeep. Before getting into the jeep, Shiv says that Anandi (not Anandijee) agar tunhein kissi bhi cheez kee zaroorat yaa madat chahiye toh mujhe bhejijhak bata dena mein tumhari (not aapki) poori madadt karoonga aur yeh mera tumse vaada hain, aur yeh sirf aaj yaa kal ke liye nahi balki poori zindagi ki baat kar raha hoon. Kabhi bhi, kisi bhi mod mein, kisi bhi waqt, kisi bhi pal koi zaroorat ho toh bejhijhak bula dena…I will b there in no time to help u out in any situations at any moment of time throughout my life. Anandi is speechless just nods in affirmative. Shiv smiles and starts the jeep and leaves.

At office shiv is thinking on how to help Anandi's school to get the grant and he thinks of repainting the school and calls the workers and orders them to b finished by today itself and they obey it. He even goes to the market along with Bheemsingh and orders some benches and tables for the school and get tat fixed, some school charts on education purposes and gets everything ready to impress the minister who is coming on an inspection. He himself goes to look the school in the night at around 7 and is pleased by the work and is happy and is imagining how anandi would react to this. Will she b happy or aggressive at this site was a confusion and Shiv determines himself tat he will b ready to face anything tats said by anandi regarding this as right now for him anandi's happiness is his happiness and for her the grant is important and hence it is even important to him and he wont leave any stones unturned to get that done.

Shiv at night calls Anandi and asks about her health as well as her mother's health. She states that she is fine, but her mother's health is very bad and LalSingh says that she is at her last stage of her life and tat nothing is possible to cure now and anandi cries very loudly while speaking to Shiv. Shiv asks her not to worry and that he is with her always in every phase of life. Anandi then asks the reason for his call and he states that he took the step to repainting the school and furnishing it without her permission and he is sorry for doing it wihtout informing her. Anandi states that as far as it is for the development of the village she has no problem of his interferance in her work and that she trusts him completely that he wont do anything bad for the village. Shiv is superglad on hearing this and states that he will meet her tomorrow. Anandi states that she is not sure if she would be able to meet him or not as she does not want to leave her at this stage even for a moment. Shiv states that he understands and also states, "maine kaha main tumse miloonga, yeh nahin kaha ki tum mujhse milo." Anandi does not know wat to say and Shiv states tat zyada pareshaan mat ho aur zyada mat socho, bas yeh socho kee jo ho raha hain humari bhalayee ke liye ho raha hain and then wishes her gudnite and disconnects the call. Anandi has a small curve of smile on her lips and a twinkle in her eyes. Bhagvathi and khajan singh notices this and asks her whether it was Shiv's call and she nods in yes and states that he had a small modification done to the school and called her to inform the same. Anandi's parents are happy. Bhagvathi wanted to start the topic of her marriage with Shiv, but Khajan Singh stops her from doing it at this moment.

Anandi bids adieu to her parents and goes to her room to sleep. She is asking her kanhajee y she gave such a life to her if he had to give only pain in her life. She is crying very badly and Shiv is able to feel the pain of Anandi in him. He thinks tat now Anandi might be in her room and might b crying. He is desparate to go and meet her, but he does not know wat to do and wat not to do. He gains courage to call her and calls her. Anandi stops crying and picks the call. Jee collector sahib kaise call kiye. Shiv is very sad on hearing her voice as he was correct in his thoughts that she was crying.

S: Anandi tum ro rahi thii.

A: Nahin toh.

S: Mujhe aap itna bewakoof mat samjhiye, abh main aapko itna jaan chukka hoon, kee aapko bina dekhe bhi mein aapke haal pad saktha hoo. Shayad tum bhool gayi maine tumse kahaaa tha naa main hoo tumhare saath har pal, phir yeh aason kyun anandi. Chaliye aasoo pochiye aur bataiye kya baat hai.

A: jee kuch nahi collector sahib bas maa keliye main kuch nahi kar paa rahi hoon, yehi soch kar roo padi.

S: rone se kuch nahin hoga anandi and u r a brave girl, u r the courage of the family. They need u at this time. Wat will happen to the family if u break down like this.

A: thak gayi hoon Shivjee (not collector) and (apna Shiv is so happy that she addressed him by his name and not by his designation). Anandi continues: Maaf keejiye who mein behkaave mein aapka naam leleee.

S: Koi baat nahi anandi waise aapke mooh se mera naam sunkar mujhe mera naam aur acche lagne lagaa hai…ek request thee aap se.

A: Jee kahiye.

S: I will b more than happy if u address me with my name and not collector sahib.

A: Jee woh main, theek hain mein poori koshish karoongi.

S: toh aap kuch keh rahi thii.

A: Kuch nahee… Raat bahut ho gayi hain, abh sojaayeiye.

S: Anandi agar tumne abhi phone mein nahin batayaa toh mein ghar aajaoonga aur tumhari dil kee saari baatein jaan loonga..

A: Raat bahut ho gayi hain, its time to sleep. Gudnite. (A cuts the call)

Shiv is happy and also sad that she din speak her heart out, she was about to speak, but he interrupted and she cut the call.

There in the room anandi is thinking how could she call him by her name and how could she losen herself so much with a man whom she only knew since few months and how did it happen that she became so weak when he was speaking that she was about to open her heart out. Y is all this happening and wat is it tats happening.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...very detailed and apt😊
keep it up👍🏼
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Firstly thanks for such a long update😃😃...lambe lambe FFs padhne me bohot maza aata he😃
Loved your FF very much...its very good👏...pls do update soon with long parts😉
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Thanx a lot one and all for the comments tat u gave. I was a bit greedy on getting more comments but since this is my first attempt I am happy. can anyone guide me am I doing the right way in posting the second part as I dint know where to post it I just posted in the POST REPLY column. If I am wrong plz guide me correctly. A friend in need is a friend indeed hain naa folks.. SO guide me and help me in bringing more long FFs.

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Thnx for all the updates. Guys I actually expected more comments... Agar kuch comments nahii sooj rahe toh gaaliyaan hee detee kuch toh milta mujhe padne ke liye mere mehnat ka nateeja samajh kar khush ho jaate...Anyways I am back to bore u guys with the final part of my story.. here it goes...
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After about half an hour she hears a knock on the door and is surprised who could it be at this time in the night. Bhairo and Basant along with dadisa enter into the living room and anandi opens the door and is surprised and also shocked to see SHIV at the door. Anandi asks him aaap. The same quest is asked by every family member and dadisa is concerned if everything is alright. He first seeks the permission to come in which anandi forgot by obstructing his way and holding his hands at the door without giving him space to enter. Anandi excuses herself and asks him to come in. Dadisa asks him if everything is okay and Shiv says that all is well. He came here to speak to anandi regarding some issues with the canal project and also the school as things have to b done by tomorrow and also since she is busy and concerned abt her mother's health so dint want her to get into all this and hence decided to come home and clear all the pending work. Bhairo and Basant along with dadisa are happy to hear about his concern regarding anandi and permits him to discuss the issues whenever and wherever he is comfortable. Anandi is still not in a state to speak and is still standing at the door. Dadisa and bhairo both ask anandi to take shiv to her room so that they can discuss the things there and since the computer is also in her room they can use tat for any reference purpose and Shiv agrees happily and Anandi agrees hesitatingly. Shiv and Anandi enter into her room.

Gehna comes with a flask of tea and some snacks for them to chew on and Shiv thnx her and she leaves.

Anandi is still dumbstruck at his visit and asks him the need to come home this late. Shiv states that shayad tum mujhe abhi nahii jaanti hoo. Maine kaha tha naa if u don't tell me on phone I will come to ur home and I kept my word. Anandi smiles on hearing this and Shiv notices this. He takes his steps close to Anandi and lsot in her smile states that she has the most beautiful smile in this world and she looks more pretty wen she smiles and wen u smile I feel the world around me is also smiling. Anandi is lost in the honesty of his eyes when he said those words. Shiv also does not leave a chance of drooling into Anandi's eyes. Suddenly a cool breeze flows in and disturbs their gaze. Anandi and Shiv both take away their looks from each other and Shiv smiles from within but does not show it to Anandi. Anandi asks her y he came and he starts with the official start of the canal project and the school and both exchange some ideas and finish their talk on the work basis. Shiv then speaks to Anandi a bit personally.

S: anandi tum kya keh rahi thi phone mein. Tum kab tak apne aap se iss tarah ladogi. Jab ses main aaya hoon jaitsar main maine dekha hain kee tum gumsum rahthi hoo, sabka khayal rakthi ho par khud kaa khayal ke bare mein sochthi bhi nahii. Yeh theek nahin hain na. Tum mujhse apne dil ki saari baatein share kar sakti hoo…ek dost maan sakthi ho naa.

A: collector sahib aap. SHIV FROWNS IN ANGER. Anandi realizes that she called him collector sahib, so she corrects herself saying.. SHIV jee aap mujhse itni humdardi kyun jata rahe hoo. Main jaise bhi hoon theek hoo, khush hoon, nahin chahiye mujhe kissiki sahare kee. Apni zindagi akele jee loongi.

Shiv interrupts and says chup, bilkool chup. Bahut sun liya tumhari humdardi waali baatein, abh aur nahii…. Ek baat batao anandi main tumhein humdardi kyun jataongaa.

Anandi dares to speak saying tat isliye kyun kee main ek balika vadhu hoon, isliye kyun kee mere pati ne mujhe chod kar doosre ladki ke saath rahtha hain, isliye kyun kee mujhe mere pati ne thukraya hain. Isliye kyun kee main talak shuda hoon.

Shiv looks at her with pain filled in his eyes and says hogaya tumhara bhashan…abh meri baari…chup chaap suno..main tum par koi ehsaan nahi kar raha hoon nahee koi humdardi dikha raha hoo. Main tumhein apna dosth manta hoon. Ek sacha dosth jo zindagi bhar saath de such mein aur dukh mein bhi. Ek tum ho jisne mujhe iss gaav mein samjha, mujhe har mushkil se bachayaa, mujhe mere kaam par aane waali saari baadhaoon se bachaya toh kya mein tumhari madat nahi kar saktha hoon. Anandi tries to speak but shiv again says Chup bilkool chup and he keeps his index finger on anandi's lips and they both look at each other lost in their world and then shiv realizes wat he did and goes ahead iwth this statement…abhi khatam nahii kiya hain maine. He then speaks out tat haa maine tumse shaadi karne ke liye haan kiya tha but woh tum par taras khaa kar yaa tum par koi ehsaan yaa humdardi nahii jataa raha thaa. Anandi asks phir kyun. Shiv states kaash tum uss kaash kaa wajah khud dhoondh paate aur khud jaan paate. Phikar mat karna anandi mein tum par koi zor nahi daal raha hoo, bas tumhara dosth hone ke naate dosti kaa haat badhana chahtha hoon aur tumhari saari pareshanyian share karna chahte hoon. Ek dosth kaa har farz poora karna chahtha hoon. Main tumse waada karta hoon anandi chahe humari zindagi kuch bhi mod kyun naa le tum mujhe hameshaa tumhari aage hee khada paaoge, tumhari raksha ke liye, tumhari saath ke liye, isliye nahii ki tum kamzoor hoo balki isliye kyun kee main nahi chahta hoon ki ek hawa kaa jhoka bhi tumhari ek bhi baal baanka naa kar de. tum par koi moosibat aaye yaa koi vipati yaa baadhaa aaye pehle mujhse guzarnaa hoga aur phit tum tak.

Anandi is so happy hearing these words coz other than phooli nobody else had spoken to her in this way and now since phooli is staying far away and is busy with her kid she is unable to meet her and anandi lastly decides to shake hands of friendship with SHIV. Anandi's eyes are filled with tears of happiness and is in dilemma how to proceed with the friendship, how can i shake hands with him. if anything wrong goes btwn us just like my relation with jaggu, I cant tolerate it anymore. Shiv sees that she is lost and looks at her keenly and asks her with his head kya huaa, anandi shakes her head saying no and shiv proceeds his hands first for a shake and anandi also does at the same time.

Shiv and Anandi shake their hands of friendship and shiv is more than happy and talks to him inside that this is my first win to get my luv. Afterall friendship is the first step of luv and now the day is not very far when u wll accept my luv just like u accepted my friendship.

Anandi sits on the bed and Shiv on the chair and Shiv asks her wat is the matter. Y is she so sad. And forces her to throw all her frustrations and her anger on him and also to be open to him and to express whatever she is feeling in her heart be it good or bad, new or old memories and to set herself free from all the things that is worrying her. Anandi takes courage and starts speaking all her sorrows and all that she is facing trouble with. Anandi starts crying very loudly the moment she speaks about Jaggu. Shiv is equally worried and gets up from the chair and goes to the bed where Anandi is sitting and kneels down and holds her hand to give her courage. Anandi is shocked at this but does not feel like pulling the hands out in fact she holds him even tighter and she too sits down along with him and speaks all the worries tat she has been going through. With every statement tat she is saying she is crying very heavily from deep within her heart as if taking all the pains of her life with great difficulty. She talks abt her marriage with jaggu, how dadisa tortured her for reading, jaggu's second marriage as a child, how he left to Mumbai, how anandi took the bullet, how he went to Mumbai for studying, how he left her all alone, how heth singh tortured her and how the guruji of aasha tortured her and blamed her and everything until her divorce. Unknowingly it even happens that she hugs Shiv in pain while crying and she also holds her tight in his arms just like holding a baby and tries to console her. Anandi says tat she is tired and vexed with this life. At this point wen things were beginning to b clear another problem arouse. She has never seen happiness in her life and does not want to live any more as she is all alone in this big world. Shiv consoles her stating that he is there for her always at every step that she puts forward and asks her to stop crying. Anandi rests herself in Shiv's arms for sometime and Shiv holds her tightly giving her the assurance that he will b there with her always. There is pindrop silence in the room for sometime and both r in each others arms. Anandi suddenly realizes tat she is held by someone and tries to break the hold and gets up shocked. Shiv also gets up but is not shocked as he himself wanted to console Anandi and make her free from all her worries. Anandi says sorry to shiv and says tat woh mein behek gayi thi aur pata nahii kaise hua…humein maaf kardeejiye. Shiv walks to anandi, holds her shoulders and states tat main tumhara dosth hoon, dushman nahii, aur mujhe khushi hai tumne mujhe apna dosth samajh kar apne dil kee saari baatein mujhe bataa dee. Abh tum azaad ho gayi tumhari pareshaniyon se. Abh koi gham nahiii. Tumhare saare gam abh mere hogaye haii aur mein ek dosth ka farz zaroor nibhaoongaa anandi. Tumhein fikar karne kiii koi zaroorat nahii. Acha raat bahut ho gayi hain abh mein chaltha hoon. Tum bhi so jaao aur kuch mat socho.. tumhari maa kaa ilaaj hum sab milkar karvayenge, yahaan nahi toh videsh lekar jayenge par tum chintha mat karna aur theek se so jaana. Jab tum kal mujhse milogi toh mujhe ek hasti muskuraati chulbuli anandi chahiye ROTLU anandi nahii.. samjhi…anandi gives a flash of smile to Shiv and shiv in return smiles back and holds her cheeks and says tats like my good girl and wishes her gudnite and leaves. Anandi also wishes him back gudnite and both go to their respective places. Shiv is sad at hearing anandi's story and happy tat she has accepted him in his life though not as a partner but atleast as a friend. Here anandi is in a dilemma how this happened how could she be so weak infront of shiv and also scolds herself for hugging Shiv. She also states to herself tat she is feeling light and happy from within though her mother's illness is troubling her the rest of the pain is vanished and she thanks Shiv for being patient enough to listen to her.

Next day morning, Shiv goes to anandi's school and gives the girls a pair of uniform and asks them to wear this from tomoro and also prepares them with certain topics and essays to impress the minister. The girls are very happy and quickly learns whatever Shiv has taught them and he stays with the girls till noon and is also thinking y anandi din turn up till now. Then he pauses and then thinks that maybe she wants to b with her mother. shiv asks gulli to take care of the school and to leave on time safely. At haveli bhago speaks to anandi regarding Shiv and says that she will have a peaceful death if she would marry SHIV. Anandi is in a dilemma as she does not know wat to say. She is scared of all the mixed feelings that she has been fighting with in herself since many days. She thinks that she has been numb all these years, though she was married she lived a life of an unmarried woman and wen she started to realize wat luv is her husband deserted her and she hated manhood and now Shiv's entry in her life as a friend, though she knows that he luvs her very deeply she is scared tat wen she luvs her maybe he would also desert her and walk away from her life. Anandi is fighting very badly with herself thinking about bhago and her health, her last wish, thinking abt SHIV, how he helped her out from the badtimes since he was here in jetsar, how he came yesterday and made her open up all the sorrows that she had and made her feel light. All the scenes were just happening in front of her once again and not knowing wat to do she locks herself in the room and stays inside the room.

Its 7 o'clock in the night and Dadisa is worried as anandi had locked herself in the room since morning and is worried at this state of Anandi and decides to call Shiv for help. Shiv is shocked on hearing wat dadisa said and he does not know wat to do and dares to go to haveli and speak to her. Shiv forces anandi to open the door but in vain, the whole family is worried and the 4 men, bhairo, basanth, Khajan Singh, and shiv decide to break open the door and they do it and they find Anandi lying unconscious on the floor with a very high temperature. Lal singh is called and he says that due to stress anandi had loss of consciousness and gives her an injection and an IV. When lalsingh injects anandi shiv expresses the pain on his face and holds her hands tightly and even kisses her hand which is noticed by all the family members, but shiv was least bothered of who is watching and who is not, he is just worried of his ladyluv's health. After sometime anandi starts gaining consciousness and shiv was the first to notice this as he was the only person in the room waiting since a long time holding her hands. When he sees that anandi has gained consciousness he scolds anandi and hearing him scold the rest of the family members come there and they r also wondering about his scolding to anandi. He asks her y did not she take care of her health. Wat on this earth made her to take so much stress. It was only in the last night he said her tat he will take care of her and her problems and be by her side and asks her y she dnt trust him. Dadisa comes near to shiv and holds his shoulders. Shiv realizes that he was being possessive and was expressing it in front of all. He wipes his tears and says that he will come after sometime and leaves the place. He was about to leave wen anandi holds his hand and asks can I talk to u personally now. He says s. the family members leave the luv birds together. Anandi tries to get up and shiv helps her in getting up and makes her sit on the bed. He first requests Gehna to get some juice for anandi before she speaks. Gehna comes with the juice and gives to shiv and leaves the place. Shiv makes anandi drink the juice and then wipes her lips after she drank it. Anandi starts speaking before tat shiv apologizes for his behavior few mnutes back wen she gained consciousness. Anandi says Kyun shivjee aapne aisa kyun kiya. Shiv is shocked not knowing wat she is talking abt. Anandi asks him aap mujhse shaadi kyun karna chahte hain, mujhe behosh dekh kar aap kyun rone lage, mere hosh mein aate hee mujhe daantnaa, kyun shivjee. Shiv is silent he wants to scream and tell her that all this is coz he luvs her from the bottom of his heart and was scared of any scratch happening to her, but stays dumb. Anandi holds Shiv's hands tightly and asks aap kyun mujhse itna pyaar karte hain, shiv is surprised and shocked on hearing these words and says nothing through his mouth but his eyes filled with luv and tears filled in his eyes just looks at anandi without saying anything. Anandi keeps on asking him kyun shivjee kyun and hugs him tightly and says that …main chahthi hoon kee aap kal kee tarah zindagi bhar ke liye mujhe apne bahoon mein liptakar rakhe. aapke pyaar ne iss pathar dil ko pigla diya hain shivjee,,,,main aapse kabhi bhi door nahii jaana chahthi hoon shivjee. Shiv is more than happy hearing all these and responds to her hug by hugging her tightly and even kisses her forehead and states that she has made his day and his life too. Anandi is equally happy both hug for sometime and then gets up to go downstairs. The whole family is happy on seeing both of them happy and comes to them and both take the blessings of all together. Gehna understands the situations and brings sweets from the kitchen and gives to both and then distributes to the rest of the family members who does not understand the need of sweet now, but is later revealed by gehna tat iss ghar kee beti abh Udaipur kee bahu banegii,,, and anandi runs to her room shyly. Shiv states that he will call his parents tomorrow for the rest of the proceedings and the family agrees. Shiv then remembers that there is an inspection in school tomorrow which is important to both him and anandi and tells that he will call home and inform them the day after tomoro and the family agrees. Bhago is happy to hear this. The next day at school the inspector is very happy with the way the school and the girls are doing and sanctions the grant and both the lovebirds are more than happy and congratulate each other on their combined success. They share some sweet romantic gaze at school and then leaves to home. The parents come and the wedding is scheduled in a week. In the meantime, Bhago was checked by a famous doctor of Delhi who happens to b shiv's best friend and is feeling better by the day of marriage, though she is resting in bed appears healthy and better. The marriage is covered by the media and jag and gauri who are in Mumbai watch this and are more than jealous on this happy occasion. Gauri is jealous that anandi trapped a man who is more wealthier and in a good designated post than jagya is and jagya is super angry on how could she marry another person in less than a month of divorce. Anandi and Shiv both get married and move to their home after taking bidaai from the haveli and start a fresh new and romantic life with only happiness everywhere.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow beautiful writing.loved each parts.they r so detailed.even i lyk reading long parts.u hv created really a wonderful story

plz do write more stories lyk dis
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
thats very nice and detailed... keep it up:)wellcome to IF join AnSh Appreciation Thread too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#10
Very well written...loved it😃

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