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Posted: 13 years ago
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god antara nice way to present
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ooohh good one..really enjoyed reading..you made it just like the old fairytales/esop's fable's or the panchatantra tales 👏 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful piece of writing...u are truely gifted...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice. It really was quite meaningful and apt to the show... 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinoo

the best ending to this would be the eventual revelation that the beast was none other than gauri's mummy 🤣

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Waoo!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: avantikasharma1

👏 Wow, comparing tree with a Anandi! What an analogy. Anatara I am mighty impressed. I love your posts. you have a gift of writing. Haven't you tried writing stories? I wish you were in humanities, a reasearcher, then we would see many nice research papers on human philosphy, life etc. Amazing! the best part is that you hit the point and write it very precisely. I never miss reading your posts. You put things in better perspective.

loads of love and best wishes Avantika



Thank you Avantika. Yes I do try my hands at creative writing sometimes, but I feel too shy to share them,😳 and yes I am indeed a researcher in Humanities 😛 You got it right 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tinoo

the best ending to this would be the eventual revelation that the beast was none other than gauri's mummy 🤣



Lol, that gives a complete new turn to the story🤣. But Antaryami mummyji will not be content only by casting shadows, she also dips her feet into the pot whenever she can🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome ... once again !

Loved it totally Antara ... you are certainly gifted !

I'm so glad you chose to share your creative works with us ... a treat no less !

Plz dont shy away from writing / sharing more !

And I agree with Avantika ... you should take up writing ... if you haven't so already !


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Posted: 13 years ago
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antara...(i hope i can call u by dat name..😊)...i just loved d symbolism u used...from d golden pot...d shadow of d tree...& d couple washing dere feet wth it...its not just a witty play of words...but shows a deeper emotional connect...dat plunges thru d biases dat we have character wise...plain awesome...

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