Taste of reality(A short scene)

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

awesome superb fabulous scene

loved it

will u plz continue this

Edited by aamirkhanfan - 13 years ago

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Madhuban Sen

@madhubansen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

superb...but please continue dis short scene of urs...& i wsh shiv wud cum 2 know about jagya-anandi...& den we can have anoder understanding session...

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woman11

@woman11

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

loved loved loved it, keep writing more 👏

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easyandbusy

@easyandbusy

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

wow amazng!!

had so much fun reading and visualizing this one :D

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wizsug

@wizsug

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

superb...while reading all i though was it should go longer without ending

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A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Brilliant OS. Loved the treatment J & G got. Thanks for writting it.

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Michelle Dantis

@michelle281194

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

i loved this fanfic so so much! u write really well, especially dialogues

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Missesha

@Missesha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

PrincessYashika, such a nice sequence... I wish they show something like this.

Ur dialogues for G & J are so perfect. Ye dono aisehi baat karte hai

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

loved it completely.

will love to read a part 2 as well where Shiv realises who Jagya and Gauri are. Maybe Jagya-Gauri finds Anandi alone and tries to rebuke her again for using Shiv and being shameless etc and Shiv giving them a complete dose of reality