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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prabha.abha

1000 0f claps to u 👏


thank u..glad u liked it! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maneta

u know what i really like it pls writers llike u must continue as such there is a dearth of os ss n ff in this forum so pls continue dear i really loved it pls write more


thank u so much..glad u liked it!..okay will try to write more.. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bluerobin

dear mona , That temple scene dialogues by shiv broke my heart. Could really imagine shiv telling all the dialogues... there was depth in the whole OS ...loved it yaar . keep writing


really?...thank u sooo much Aparna..it means a lot to me 😳 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: monamie111


really?...thank u sooo much Aparna..it means a lot to me 😳 🤗



seriously the temple scene dialogue especially the one " are you crying because you are feeling bad for hurting me " ... I liked a lot, my heartbeat became faster ... Expecting more OS' from you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ooh i'm ur fan..still have to read part 2 as i'm in office..but will soon read it...👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mona, every time we used to do u shoot me and i shoot you but after reading your OS, I am throwing flowers @ you.

Loved it. Its just awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshBendre

ooh i'm ur fan..still have to read part 2 as i'm in office..but will soon read it...👏👏

Further Mona..i will say...it will definitely rain and u will rock more!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh!!! mona why did you stopp!!!!????
you know what I was thinking, may be they will be stuck in the storm and not reach home LOL
ooo that would have been FUN but then again its good that she reached home, will give less chance for the villagers to speak ill about them ehhe

anywayzzz AWEEESOMEEE is the word for your OS!!! 👏

so now get back to your word program and start writing the next scene.

!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome :) Superb job.
Btw, what does 'OS' mean ? Sorry for my ignorance on this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshBendre

ooh i'm ur fan..still have to read part 2 as i'm in office..but will soon read it...👏👏


what r u saying? 😲..what i have done? 😕
thank u sooo much for liking it dear 😳...it means a lot to me..

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