My take on Shiv's thougts-chaan se jo pg22 - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago

i hate wolfs isliye use banaya hai... 🤣🤣
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Ash tum kaha ho yaar? Miss you.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: elasingh

Ash tum kaha ho yaar? Miss you.

hi elasingh..thanks for the gesture dear... i am soo sorry..busy with too much office work :( after all we are anandi fans so we must be dedicated to our work just like her naa.. ;)

Will come back soon ..sorry for the delay :(

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AshBendre

hi elasingh..thanks for the gesture dear... i am soo sorry..busy with too much office work :( after all we are anandi fans so we must be dedicated to our work just like her naa.. ;)

Will come back soon ..sorry for the delay :(

I was wondering what happened to you and this thread! Looking forward to reading more from you soon 😊 I know how it can be with office work and all...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb Ash.

I was so much missing your take on Shiv's thoughts and so glad to see you are gonna continue updating.😃

Eagerly waiting for your take on B'day and Anandi blasting Shiv incidences.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnaks surabhi :)
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😆pls pls continue, one his reaction on anadis entracne , the propasal and yesterdays anadis bashan , i knw sounding like a greedy fat kid but love the way u emote his thoughts, it is so good i wish cvs also show us a lil bit of his turmoil too, esp the coming week mei i wld be really wanting to read ur say as it is pretty emotianl for shiv ,- getting a ropsal, getting refused, hearing a can nver give any place, fight with j, finding he is the huibby, insecureity of j and a
cant wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi all i will surely try to do it tonight.. so watch this space..
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Originally posted by: AshBendre

Hi all i will surely try to do it tonight.. so watch this space..

wow looking forward for your update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello friends..sorry for the delay..still am caught up in the middle of lot of things...

Shiv's Happy "Birdie"

Shiv in his office sitting and thinking about the streamer in anandi's hair.. n smiling alone...sudddenly her hear's someone coming..he sees basant coming..

Shiv arey basnt ji? how come he is in my office at this tym? he must have some urgent work or mayb some emergency has come up in haveli...😲

Basant hastily says that shiv needs to come with him ..shiv is confused and worried at the same tym...

Basant takes him to the haveli gates..its very dark every where.. shiv whats wrong? everything seems so quite no movement? no lights one? i am sure ther is something wrong in their..

what could it be? terrorist attack? omg hope anandi is fine...oh please god..dont let anandi get hurt..

Shiv u r being too drastic..why would terrorists attack the haveli? the prime minister of india is not living in there..kuch bhi shiv..these days ever since you have started staring at streamers you have gone totally mad..

Then whats the reason for the black out? oh yea no electricity mayb...oh thats why basant ji wanted me..but i am just a collector not an electrician..what can i do? chalo i can atleast check if the fuse has blown up...

oh as a collector of the district i should make sure there r not many such power cuts in the area...
i will write a letter to the rajasthan electricity board tomorrow...

in the mean while i hope anandi does not fall in the dark...😲

Shiv enters in he sees little lights coming towards him..oh good idea the haveli people are smart they have lit candles..but why are all of them walking in straight lines holding the candles towards me? strange😕 i feel they will shout anytime "aakraman"..i should stand close to the door..just in case i have to run..

Then anandi shows up in the middle..

what ? whoa!! anandi..carrying lights..right in the center..loking very beautiful in the flame of light.. anandi walking towards me..wow her walk is soo graceful..n her face lights up , the whole room ..we dont even need candles...her the smile on her face gives me the warmth that i need..but what is all this?

suddenly the lights go on and evryone shouts HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! n shiv sees everyone.. Anandi does the aarti for him... his eyes keep going back to anandi...her face, her smile..ooh she is lookin so stunning today..never saw her in a saree..she looks so pretty...her jewellery and hairstyle compliments her so much...

Then Shib sees the rest of the lot..the school girls, the villagers, bheem singh ..hmm now i knw how everyone came to knw abt my birthday.. bheem singh is the ultimate chugli khor..But i am still overwhelmed by the immense love these people gave me...i feel like crying right here..oh god..bless these people all the happiness in the world...

Shiv thanks everyone..

Anandi says its all dadisa's idea.shiv starts searching for her..but anandi says that she is gone out and will be back soon..

Shiv looks again at the beautiful face of anandi...n keeps blushing..

then he sees all the decorations..the music..then suddenyl the school girls come and start talking to him..suddenly the school girls start talking about anandi.. n her looks..

Shiv- oh teri! yeh sab meri dil ki baatien mujhse bulwa rahi hai... indeed i agree anandi is the pretiest girl i have ever seen...i mean it..as she is not just pretty from outside but very very and far more beautiful frm inside..

then the girls request shiv to dance.. shiv - dance oh no i never dance..then bhairav requests shiv to beat the drum.. shiv - oh yes sure..

Shiv start beating the drums...he thinks - oh this is exactly how my heart is sounding right now...suddnely he sees dadisa next to him..she seems a bit haaried..Shiv- dadisa is trying to tell something ut i cant hear..what? is it about the drum? or is it about my shirt? what?

dadisa pulls the drumstick away frm shiv n asks.."Mhaari anandi se byaah karego"?

Shiv- oh teriki! whta? how did she know ? am i blushing too much? is it too obvious? does anandi knw ? did she tell dadisa to ask because she is shy? in all these thoughts shiv was really silent..n dadis thought he is not intersted...and starts saying things like she is mad dokri to think abt this..etc etc..shiv in his thoughts- arey dadisa no you are not mad...wait please..let me explain...u r getting me wrong..arey maataji mujhe bolne toh dijiye..arey rukiye toh..

dadisa sa goes away in a corner..shiv - let me go to her..n clear things out that i like anandi..in fact i have started loving her..i want to marry her and keep her happy...

Shiv tells this to dadisa.. shiv - oh look at the mixture of surprise n happiness in dadisa's eyes..wow she looks really happy.dadisa then asks shiv whether he is ok with anadi's past life and the fact that she is a divorcee..Shiv - oh dadisa comes up with such silly doubts..why will i have a problem with anandi's past? its over right and never coming back then why to bother about that? shiv thinks - .does ananid know abt all this? let me ask...
dadisa says no anandi is not aware...okk.. daidsa calls him my ladesar..shiv - oh no one has called me ladesar ever since i was a little boy..i so like this feeling...he look at anandi n thinks..look at her she looks so happy..dancing away..mayb somewhere she likes me too..wow soon we would get married..i cant wait until that day..i will finalise things quickly after consulting my mother and family... oh soon anandi would be my wife..and would with me forever 😊😍

Shiv alone - Can't wait to tell this to aashi..she would be soo happy that she was always right that anandi would be my perfect wife..first i will talk to aashi n then to my mom...

Next day at shiv's office, shiv thinks about informing ashima not to tell anything yet to anandi...he calls ashima n speaks to her but...

Suddenly someone comes in shouting..shiv- who is shouting like this? why is anandi shouting my name?

anandi gives bhashan abotu why he accepted dadis'a proposla fo marrying her?
Shiv cleaned bowled..

OMG how did she know? dadisa would be angry now...

but whats wrong in accepting a proposal? i really like her, i want to love her even more...

but anandi not ready to listen to anything. 😡 shiv - she is not even giving me a chance to speak up, to explain my side, my feelings, my love..she doesnt knwo how much i love her ..please understand anandi..

but anandi keeps going on abt how he is doing a favour to her by marrying her etc..

favor? what favor is she talking abt? oh my god..she is getting me all wrong...please anandi please understand me..😭😭😭😭

Then anandi starts giving bhashan about how shiv has hurt ashima?

Shiv- arey why is she dragging ashima in all this? we are just friends and ashima know it..i never gave ashima any false signals..did I? oh anandi please calm down n listen to me...

Shiv tells anandi about ashim is just his friend.. bu ananid says a evry hurting sentence that shiv has such a hard heart that he doesnt even relaise the feelings of people close to him..
Shiv - anandi wait..but anandi goes away...shiv distraught...he is on the verge of crying...

Why god did this to me..i had just started njoying the feeling of love...but why was it all taken away from me like this so immediately?

then he realises ashima is on the phone...

shiv - i should apologize ashima for hurting her feelings...i need her more as friend now than before..i feel so lonely now..i had evrything in thw orld and suddenly there is nothing left...i dont think i will ever get anandi in my life again..😭😭😭

Shiv sitting alone - Background music Chhan se jo toote koi sapna Jag suna suna laage (from movie om shanti om)


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