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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have written an imaginary future track (in parts) which I posted separately in another topic also...Now posting it here...Pls see the following posts... 😊
Edited by rittu_deep - 14 years ago
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PART 1
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DS accepting Jagya-Gauri after having a talk with Gauri about Jagya's happiness and seeing how much Jagya-Gauri did for her when she suffered heart attack...She will accept them on the condition that Jagya-Gauri will stay in the Haveli with her which others will object initially but will be quite afterwards due to Dadisa's health...
Initially Dadisa will be sympathetic to Anandi...But later the love for her ladesar and his 'new' preferred Bheendhni will overcome her thinking capability and she will insult Anandi for something related to Gauri for which Bhairon & Co will keep quite and will not oppose DS considering her health...
At that time, Anandi's parents(while visiting Haveli) will witness the whole thing and pressurize Anandi to come with them👏...Bhairon & Co will try to stop Anandi but this time, she will not listen...Anandi will give a big lecture on how she gave so many years of her life to all of them without expecting anything back in return but now onwards she will only live for her and for those who genuinely cares for her...then she will go away...👏

Leap of 8-10 months:
Anandi has got admission to the best medical college in India (co-incidentally in Mumbai) after giving medical entrance examination...Apart from her parents, she has kept relations only with Shyam and Sugna's families...Shyam is funding her studies👏...Sugna has broken all ties with her family after seeing what happened to Anandi...Bhairon, Sumitra, Genha and Basant always remember Anandi and how they could not do anything for her...DS also slowly getting realisation that Gauri cannot be like Anandi👍🏼...DS will ask for parpota from Jagya-Gauri but Gauri will not agree to become mother so early... Gauri frustrated with living in the village and staying in Haveli as traditional Bheendhni, will force Jagya to move back to Mumbai...Jagya under pressure will agree and once again fight with family to go to Mumbai with Gauri🤢...Jagya-Gauri will go back to Mumbai and DS will realize Anandi's actual worth where she sacrificed her happiness and stayed back in haveli to serve her in-laws...

Leap of 6 years:
Jagya-Gauri are still struggling in Mumbai and with no contact with Jagya's family...They have own full-time clinic but it is not running well...So they will be having financial problems everytime...Everyday they are having clashes because of clinic's responsibility and household work...Jagya, as a loser😡, will expect Gauri to do every household work alone as she is a woman, apart from clinic work whereas Gauri will emphasize on Jagya's help in household work as she is also working in clinic...
Plus Jagya wants a child to grow family for which Gauri is still not ready..
Unfortunately they will have to shut down the clinic because they will be unable to pay the rent for many months...They will apply for positions in hospitals but since their experiences are not impressive (as they wasted their time in clinic), they will not be able to get the jobs they deserve due to their experience...

The biggest/best hospital in mumbai will offer them jobs but that will be of lower level in comparison to their experience...They will reluctantly accept the offers due to urgent need of money...In hospital, they will be asked to report to Dr.Singh who is very strict but one of the best doctors in Mumbai...They will be shocked to discover that Dr. Singh is Anandi...Dr. Anandi Singh...👏👏👏

Dr. Anandi Singh will also be shocked to see Jagya-Gauri working under her but she will be cold, indifferent towards them, especially Jagya...👏...Jagya will be everytime getting flashbacks of all those great dialogues he said to Anandi regarding her manners and educational status when she was in village...👏
Dr. Anandi Singh will have a hate-hate relationship with the young, dashing CEO of the hospital but his mother(the hospital owner) is appreciative of Anandi...
PART 2
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Dr. Anandi Singh will have a hate-hate relationship with the young, dashing, short-tempered CEO of the hospital but his mother(the actual hospital owner) is appreciative of Anandi...
Here in jetsar, DS will keep regreting over the incident when she insulted Anandi for Gauri...Bhairon & Co. will try to get information about Anandi from Shyam as they know only Shyam knows the whereabouts of Anandi and her parents...But Sugna will stop Shyam to reveal anything...
DS and family will be heartbroken...Later DS will be having some paralytic attack as detected by the local doctor and he will advise Bhairon & Co to get DS to a bigger hospital...
Meanwhile, in Mumbai, Jagya-Gauri will be working under Dr. Anandi Singh...Gauri will be irritated to see Anandi as her superior but will be helpless because of her need for the job & money...
On the other hand, jagya will be embarassed and keep recollecting all those events continously for small things when he insulted Anandi for her manners and educational status😡...Now he will see how much respect Anandi is getting from everyone...👍🏼
Gauri on seeing Jagya's soft corner for Anandi, will get more insecure and it will cause friction between jagya-gauri even more...🤢
jagya will start comparing Gauri with Anandi (like the loser used to do vice-versa mentally earlier) and it will irk Gauri more...
She will turn negative and try to sabotage Anandi's career by doing something in hospital thinking that blame will go to Anandi...😡
The young CEO of the hospital will try to sack Anandi because he doesn't like Anandi but by god's grace, the whole hospital staff (ofcourse except Jagya-Gauri) and all patients will stand in support for Anandi...The CEO for the first time, will realize the real good nature of Anandi and he will investigate...Although he not be able to get Gauri's name as culprit but Anandi will be proved innocent...😊
Then later the CEO will witness another incident when she will give a soild dose of lecture to an educated patient who is continously yelling on his less-educated/illiterate wife inspite of her doing so much 'seva' for him without saying anything...Dr. Anandi will make him realise his mistake and his wife's worth...This incident will also be witnessed by jagya who will be genuinely ashamed on how he ill-treated Anandi when she was less educated than him...
The CEO will start having soft corner for Anandi and gradually he will fall in love with her☺️...He will share his feelings with his mother who also likes Anandi...One day, Anandi will get an award for her contribution towards medicine⭐️...Her parents will keep a pooja where they will invite many people including the CEO and his mother...At the same time, Jagya will go to Anandi's house to get some urgent hospital papers signed...Anandi's parents will be shocked to see Jagya and come to know that he is working under Anandi...Anandi's father will indirectly insult Jagya and deliberately make him wait for hours for Anandi outside the house...
After the paperwork is done by Anandi, Jagya will leave...Then Anandi's parents will blast her for not telling the truth that jagya-gauri are also working in the same hospital, that too under Anandi...Anandi will tell them that she is not moved by Jagya's comeback into her life and for her, Jagya's chapter is closed forever...👏
Here the CEO will plan to propose Anandi after the pooja upon getting encoragement from his mother😳...But Anandi will leave the pooja immediately after getting a call for emergency...
Shyam and Sugna will come to Mumbai to get their son treated...Anandi will treat him and he will start recovering slowly...Jagya will be again be ashamed🥱 to see what Anandi did for his sister which he could not and never thought of also...Shyam & Sugna will be shocked to see Jagya-Gauri in hospital but Sugna will ignore them...Shyam-Sugna will advise Anandi to remarry and move on with her life which will be supported by Anandi's parents also...
Here, in TV, Gehna will see the news of Dr.Anandi being awarded for her contribution👏 and then Bhairon & Co will come to know that Anandi is working in Mumbai...They will also plan to take DS to Mumbai to get her treated...In the hospital, they all will meet Anandi as well as Shyam-Sugna and Jagya-Gauri...
Anandi will start treating DS and later on, Sugna will make DS realize that how she used to taunt Anandi for her interest in studies and now the same Anandi, as doctor, cured her great-grandson (Sugna's son) and is now treating her, which her own grandson (Jagya) could not...DS will get complete realization and she will give Jagya the "Royal snub" when he will come to meet her in hospital...Gauri will not even bother to meet DS or Jagya's family which will irk Jagya...He will leave Gauri and come to stay with his family after seeking their forgiveness...🤢


PART 3 coming soon...Please click 'Like' button for if you really like Part 1 and Part 2...😳
Edited by rittu_deep - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
rittu_deep i loved those parts. waiting eagerly for part 3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 3
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Jagya will leave Gauri and come to stay with his family after seeking their forgiveness🤢...Earlier Bhairon will not approve of Jagya staying with them but later others will persuade him to allow Jagya back...Jagya will repent on his behaviour towards Anandi before the leap🤢...Gauri will go back to her parents place and there her parents will try to knock some sense in her by telling her that even if India has become so modern and girls are educated, society still sees a separated woman in a different way🤔...Then later her bade papa will make her realise that Anandi also went through the same thing which she is going through now...Gauri will feel guilty and she will decide not to come in between Jagya and Anandi this time...Here the CEO guy will plan to propose Anandi once again😳...This time he will call Anandi to a restaurant with the excuse of some work and book the whole restaurant just for two of them...He will propose Anandi in a romantic style☺️ and Anandi will be shocked to know about his feelings towards her...She will refuse his proposal and he will be heartbroken...But he will not lose hope and try to woo her several times like a true romantic☺️...But Anandi will be unmoved...Gradually by his efforts, Anandi will also start getting some feelings for him but she will be in denial mode😳...Later due to some incident, Anandi will accidentally make him aware of her child-marriage and separation past...He will be devastated and decides to stay away from Anandi always as she was someone's wife although separated...He will confide the truth to his mother and then she will make him realise that how child-marriage can break home👏 as she (the mother) herself was a victim of child-marriage...Her parents married her off when she was 15 and her son (the CEO) was born when she was 18...Her husband went to city to do labour job leaving her in village with in-laws and never came back...Later she heard that her husband got married to another woman and settled in city😭..Then her in-laws kicked her out as they wanted to choose their son and not DIL...With the help of her parents and relatives, she educated herself and settled in city..Then afterwards she started a small business and later opened this hospital...But she hid the truth of his father from her son (the CEO) by telling that his father is dead as she did not want him to suffer mentally...👏
Hearing his mother's story, the CEO will decide to marry Anandi inspite of her past as now he knows that Anandi cannot be blamed for her past and above all, he loves her...👏👏👏
Jagya with his family has come to Anandi's house to seek forgiveness from Anandi for all his actions and want her to be back in his life...At that time, Anandi will not be at home...Initially Anandi's parents will be angry on them for saying such things but later they will think that it is good for Anandi's future as since she is a divorced woman so no one else will marry her and if her husband wants her back, then it is good for her otherwise she will stay single all her life...😡

Same time the CEO and his mother will go to Anandi's house to talk about marriage proposal but they will be shocked to see Jagya and his family there...The CEO will come to know that Jagya is Anandi's ex-husband and he has come to take Anandi back in his life...The CEO and his mother will see Anandi's parents agreeing and will think that Anandi has also agreed...So they will go away without saying anything😭😭...At that time, Anandi will also reach home and will be shocked to see Jagya and his family...Anandi's parents will tell her everything but this time Anandi will tell them off on deciding about her life without asking her just like they did her child-marriage👏...Jagya and family will leave...Anandi's parents will ask her to think about it and then decide...Anandi will be uneasy as she doesnt want to be back with Jagya neither because she is now independent nor because she has different feelings for someone else (the CEO) but she doesnt want Gauri to go through the emotional turmoil now because of another woman in life which she herself went through earlier👏...Anandi will go to Gauri's place and will confront Gauri...Initially Gauri will deliberately talk rudely with Anandi to make her feel that Gauri now doesnt care about Jagya but later Anandi will find out that Gauri is Pregnant with Jagya's child and she will hiding it from all...So Anandi will take Gauri with her back to Mumbai to reunite her with Jagya so the child will get the rightful place...👏👏👏


PART 4 Coming Soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Now a days me liking story anyway the CVs take it.😆.. all actors doing good job 👍🏼and me loving taking sides with anyone I want.👏..So don't want to predict any story...Loving what BV CVs offer in their soiled plates😆
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But I really love to read all the stories you guys come with👍🏼👏...I fail to understand why none of the serial CVs think rationally😭...continue the good work guys..its such a treat to read👏👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: big_vikrant_fan

rittu_deep i loved those parts. waiting eagerly for part 3

Done...Pls check earlier post...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
I am enjoyin the present and lovin Anandi totally
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
rittu_deep loved all three parts, waiting for 4th. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
climax acc to me😊
I think in d last gauri will destroy her own relation wid jagat wid continuous blames
and dirty allegations on Jagat-Anandi relation!!
she will always have shaq dat dey talk on phone and meet each other as Anandi is alsp practising in Mumbai.
One day she will see the honeymoon pics of Jagat and Anandi on d mail id of J she will turn furious she will have a big fight wid Jagat!!
one day she will meet Anandi in d hpspital Anandi is very happy serving patients
she asked gauri how z jagat
gauri was JJ she said he is ok
Suddenly a handsome doctor came near A
A told G ye mere mangetar hai
Now G is shocked n feels guilty dat she had put so much allegations on J
and destroyed her relation wid J
G takes d car at full speed!!
she will have a big accident!!
due to which she will be unconscious
in very filmy style when G is gonna die J and Garima (deir daughter)will come dere
G will say I m sorry J
due to my shaqqi nature i ruined our beautiful relation and d future of our daughter!!
u should marry A dis is my last wish coz A can only take care of our 5 yr old daughter like a mom.
after d death of G
J becomes devdas
one day A finds him in a very pitiful condition near a gutter J is drunk
A takes J home treats him she calls sumitra in Mumbai so dat she may help J to recover
A introduces he mangetar to J!!
J is jealous
due to urgent surgery A's fiance goes to London for 1month in a surgery team.
Sumitra is back home as now J's bad habit of drinking is recovered due to d help of A.
Garima decides dat she will fulfill her mom's last wish. After meeting A she also loved A. And thought her mom was right. She always puts a bahna to go meet A wid J.
Now J realizes he still has soft corner for A
A comes to J's house regularly to meet him n his lil daughter.
she loved his daughter like a mother.
One day 3 of dem were going to d beach
Garima went to eat icecreams n was playing wid children
now J told A abt d last wish of G
A was quite
J held d hand of A and asked her kya hum beete batein bhula kar fir se pati patni ban sakte hai
Garima ko tumhari zaroorat hai aur shyad... mujhe bhi!!
A took her hand away A said J tu ye kya keh raha
A shows d ring to J n said dis ring is given to me by my fiance i cant betray him
he is d one who supported me when i was in very bad situation
Now its not possible!!
I can love ur daughter now also as ur frd!!
A stood up n was going.
A is moving on J wid his daughter is seeing her !!
STORY ENDED
DO U LIKE DIS?😊
share ur own climax here
Edited by vivacious_priya - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Anandi did the right thing.Jagya got what he deserved .
It's a very nice climax.😊.Can you mail this to the writer of Balika Vadhu?😆
Edited by A-HELPING-HAND - 14 years ago

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