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Indira Makkuni

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Posted: 15 years ago

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HAHAHA! Zeisha, had a good a laugh too at ur post............but tell me one thing, where did Radhe appear from all of a sudden on the scene here?❓ Thought the 2 were alone! 😕 And too good u too, king99! 👏

Now back to the story.....

Amoli & DV part ways from there & Amoli is dropped home by DV's friend Radhe. Once DV reaches home, he just can't get over the fact that Amoli fell for Radhe, that bewkoof & duffer, who has no sense at all & is a total gadha😆 & thinks he just can't let Radhe get Amoli as the ❤️of his life so has gotta do something with him.😈

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DV_LVR

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: indumak2002
HAHAHA! Zeisha, had a good a laugh too at ur post............but tell me one thing, where did Radhe appear from all of a sudden on the scene here?❓ Thought the 2 were alone! 😕 And too good u too, king99! 👏

Now back to the story.....

Amoli & DV part ways from there & Amoli is dropped home by DV's friend Radhe. Once DV reaches home, he just can't get over the fact that Amoli fell for Radhe, that bewkoof & duffer, who has no sense at all & is a total gadha😆 & thinks he just can't let Radhe get Amoli as the ❤️of his life so has gotta do something with him.😈

ok ...first of all if Radhe is DV's friend then why would she go with him????????!!!!!!!😕

and second of all how did she become love of his life already??????

third he is not the headstrong DV but a humble one who doesnt get such emtions 😲.....so here goes:

"DV then thinks that it is not in his control whom Amoli wishes to go with and leaves the matter. Some villagers have seen DV Amoli in the hut the previous night and while Amoli leaves with Radhe ; the villagers go and complain to Amoli's dad at the same time...."

please continue 😃

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Thats exactly wot i was thinkin that if Radhe is DV's friend y is Amoli going wiv him 😕 n dey jus met??? but i like dat da Radhe hate club started again 😆

Ok continuing..........Villagers tell Amoli's dad of previous nite incident n Daddy goes mad.........he then calls a panchayat ........n he calls 4 his daughter n DV.........i thought we havnt had a panchayat in long tym 😉

I hope im not breaking any rules but i hav another track as well................

Villagers about 2 talk 2 Amoli's dad but meet DV in way.........being naive they tell him wot they about 2 do........

So which eva scenario u like take it frm there..........

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Indira Makkuni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Guyz, before we continue with the storyline, I would like to bring some points to ur notice from the story so far...........

How come ur forgetting that it hasn't been said anywhere so far, that Amoli's meeting her friend's bro aka DV's friend Radhe for the 1st time? Maybe she could have met him at her friend's house before too & fallen in ❤️ with him, no?😆 And maybe Radhe may have had the same feelings for her meanwhile........these can be some scenes revealed later in the story & shown as black & white, like they usually do in the serials!😆 And so Amoli went off with him confidently. And maybe Radhe had started considering her as the love of his life, which DV knew about. Another thing, as far as I remember, it has only been said that Amoli is a millionaire's daughter in the beginning of the story, not a Thakur's or anyone else's of that sort, and it also hasn't been mentioned that she's from a village; she could be living in a city too!😉 So how can a millionaire living in the city call for a panchayat?😕 And from Amoli's attitude & behavior so far, it seems she's the spoiled brat of a milionaire & is of a very modern khayalat! 😆

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

Ok i think we need 2 get this straight is da story set in a village or in a city??? i said panchayat coz Kirthi wrote villagers

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Indira Makkuni

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Yes, exactly PreciousPri. We gotta confirm whether it's set in a village or a city....but as said before, DV is a small town boy & Amoli could be from a city too, instead of a village. So kirthik, could u plz confirm this for us before we proceed?

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PreciousPri

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Yes plz Kirthi as Indu said we cant go any further in dis story wivout knowing this

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DV_LVR

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: PreciousPri
Yes plz Kirthi as Indu said we cant go any further in dis story wivout knowing this

Pri

well i did say DV is a small town boy while she is a miilionaire's daughter.....so lets say these two are studying in the same college and DV is on a scholarship and amoli gets in coz her dad is one of the trustees and radhe is a classmate(which would explain her going with him)..dv joined a little late coz he was sorting out the scholarship details and the college had already started. (just wanna see dv amoli in a youngsters role 😃)

so taking the above situation into account...i would say instead of villagers; we call them students and dad will still get to know through friends and he makes the principle and other teachers take disciplinary committee (our panchayat!!) and to take action on DV

sorry about the confusion caused ... hope this helps

oh and by the way; you guys are awesome writers...i so enjoy reading your posts in this topic👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Indira Makkuni

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Wowwwwwwwwwww! Way to go kirthik! 👏👍🏼 What a storyline! Am really ❤️ing the idea of DV & Amoli as youngsters studying in college! Ufffffffffffffffff! Wish it would be really like this, if BP were given a Season-2! 😍 Kirthi, u surely should send ur stories to Ekta! 😆

And BTW, thank u for acknowledging us as writers! 😉

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DV_LVR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: indumak2002
Wowwwwwwwwwww! Way to go kirthik! 👏👍🏼 What a storyline! Am really ❤️ing the idea of DV & Amoli as youngsters studying in college! Ufffffffffffffffff! Wish it would be really like this, if BP were given a Season-2! 😍 Kirthi, u surely should send ur stories to Ekta! 😆

And BTW, thank u for acknowledging us as writers! 😉

he he he thanks...i will definitely try sending her ..lets see what happens😆😆😆😆

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