How the story should have been....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Post Amoli & DV's marriage the story of Bairi Piya became weak......somewhere the
storyline was completely lost......this is how I would have liked the story to proceed....

Amoli vows to make DV's life hell........so she takes all her cues from his past life....
....girls.....tempts him with the prettiest of girls from Kamudi's stash......
...power.....takes his power away from him by becoming sarpanch
....money.....slowly but surely starts controlling all money matters...
.....army of goons.....is also controlled by her......
.......humiliation.....she also does this to him in public....like the black sari thing...
...her final revenge is his love for her........so she makes him jealous
with some other guy.....and then pretends she is pregnant.....
none of this works......he has the patience and the single mindedness for his
love.....

all this while she is slowly falling in love with him........but just can't give
even a smallest inkling of it....it has to be under complete wrap or her revenge
will become meaningless.......

all this while she is slowly falling in love with him.....
she watches him in the night.....unbeknown to
him she knows exactly when he needs her support.....does not give it to him
publicly....but when he is not aware....the story is different....

.....and she agonisingly waits for his move....but he won't make a move till
she makes the first move herself.....and one fine day she breaks down
and makes her move....

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Posted: 14 years ago
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i agreed lot of part gone missing due to rushed ending

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