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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok guys and gals i've a new topic for u,i want to hear from u what should be the storyline of Bairi Piya Sequel or say BP 2,I'd like you to be as descriptive about your ideas and storyline as possible.

Ok here goes my take on the story

this time i want amoli to be an educated lady of village,not only educated but the only educated lady of the village,i want her to stay in village to change the village pple life for good ofcourse(i knw too typical😛)but i want Digvijay,to be the same man but ofcourse not characterless,involved with village girls but the same who knws very well how to get his means done,manipulative, a businessman who can go to any extent to gain profit,ofcourse not good with the village pple,treats them like dirt,not respectful to them and don't want anyone in the village to get education coz it might challenge his powers(friends don't take me wrong frankly speaking i want his character with grey shades who can go to any extent to get his love and to win,coz only in this case he can reform so v shud see him a bad guy atleast for the first 100 episodes or so)ok amoli this time shud act sensible being an educated lady and shud be very clear about her feelings whether its hatred or love & is in love with her childhood friend,the guy can be anyone but not radhe🤢 ofcourse he irritates me a lot and he shud not be lame or coward.again thakur cud be shown as a married guy but this time he is not happy with his marriage,he knws his wife loves him but he.....................a big question mark.urmila can again b thakur's first wife for another heartbreak😆😆 but this time she shud act sensible and divorce him when she comes to know about her husband interest in amoli so that he can get married to amoli asap.now how does thakur and amoli meet for the first time?again it has to be a beautiful moment😳,thakur get to know about some rebel sort of things going on in the village and goes to counter that but falls for amoli badly😳coz she wud the one who is involved in all this
(ok i leave it to creatives how they shoot this sequence)again the cat and mouse game starts,digvijay super possessive about his love,but here is the twist amoli already in love and when digvijay comes to knw about this he feels super jealous,he tries everything threatening,bribing even kidnapping of guy to make amoli his,he creates misunderstandings between amoli and her beloved and even becomes successful in tht,he makes amoli realize tht the guy is cheating on her,doesn't lov her and left her for someone else and she has to marry him,amoli though unwilling but marries digvijay to revenge her beloved but on the very first night she comes to knw that it was just a plan by digvijay to get married to her and there is no such thing,meanwhile the guy shud be thrown out of the village or may be just killed i bother least(i knw how horrible my thoughts are😆😆😆)tug of war starts between amoli and thakur but creatives need to show us the daily dose of their cute and naughty moments.at first amoli hates him but falls for him badly in the process.
i'll cme back with my weird thoughts again😆,adding some more spice to story.
Looking forward to your take on the story,i apologize in advance if i have offended anyone with my story line.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yur story is just awesome I thik U should a story writer👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes i like it because dv role demand as a different and difficult personlity compare as goody goody like other tv drama heroes
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Posted: 14 years ago
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friends i also want to hear from u that what u want to see in BP 2,ur storyline share it with all of us,even the weirdest and the most wild ideas are welcomed here😛😛😉😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good ideas . i hope we can see them in sequel. you should be writer and send this ideas to ekta so she can think of this ideas
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ swfer--
Wow you have great talent. Love your ideas. Seriously you should this sent to Ekta and let her see your ideas. You can PM Nitu123, she has the info if you need it.
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you can not menstion hear some back dated eps1 when amoli said urmila,dv more loving husband and now he loves me and forget you, then after 10 years later dv also forget and cheat me and choose a new wife for himself it could be the new track would be built even dv have their children 2 in begining eps dv also said his friend amoli made some magic on me when magic is over then i have no meaning of marriage with her i just use her according to my need what you think about that[/QUOTE


ok i like your suggestion but the thing is we have many loopholes in bairi piya 1(let's say it 1),we wanted urmila back just for the sake of story extension and she also has some raaz thing about digvijay that has yet to be unfolded as the matter of radhe has been cleared for us surely she will also end up as a negative character but coz ov closure ov our show we didn't able to watch it.now why i want in bairi piya 2,thakur getting married to amoli in first place coz seriously we had enough of urmila and radhe acting as kabab mai haddi for amoli and thakur and enough of amoli bhaasans about marriage and in support ov her duffor husband.
2. about digvijay's marriage theory specially marriage with amoli,ok let it be an obsession or zidd ov digvijay but i want, the more he knows about amoli the more he falls in love with her,Love is a slow process even if its not love in the start but it has to be a true love in the end.what i think about urmila part is that may be digvijay was forced to get married to urmila(i mean this cud be the case in bairi piya 1 as well)or coz of family pressures or maybe just coz ov a deal,so apparently he was happily married to urmila but he never loved her but respected her coz she was so hopelessly in lov with him but when digvijay laid an eye on amoli,she sets fireworks in his heart.and about digvijay just using amoli and moving ahead would not possible even in bairi piya 2 coz when she rejects him,doesn't love him even after marriage,he has to reconsider his thoughts😛so actually i want the matters which remained unquestioned in bairi piya 1 should be answered well in bairi piya 2.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: king99

@ swfer--

Wow you have great talent. Love your ideas. Seriously you should this sent to Ekta and let her see your ideas. You can PM Nitu123, she has the info if you need it.



thanks a lot Saba,it's been a pleasure that u liked my ideas,i've just put the things which ve been coming in my mind i.e just going through the flow while writing it,i knw i'm not a good writer but desperately wanted to share my storyline with my forum friends,if u guys are ready to bear me then i can add some more twists and tracks into this.😆Off the record Ekta's creatives and story writers are far more creative than me🤣
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@ a-z-9😳

@ krambaig😳

@ cole 1😳

@ uxghya😳 thanks a lot for the appreciation and bearing my storyline😆if u can bear me more i can add further twists and spice to the story😉but wait a min why didn't u guys have shared your ideas with us😭i'm waiting for it.😛😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unreserved!!

here we can hav two storylines depending on the situation

1. if we get a sequel!!

hmm , that will be interesting 😳 , i want the whole scene "where dv goes to jail for 5 yrs " a hallucination of amoli 😆😆(it is possible , cuz afterall it is mai's serial) indeed dv went to jail but was out of it within one month and amoli queen waited for him with her heart😳, after coming out of jail , dv won amoli's heart and her too , so next morning dv is back to his devil self😈 , explaining that it was all a plan to win her 😆 indeed he neva lost his devil nature and was just acting.... (he has done this before naa) here that confusion can be cleared during which we all questioned dv's character that how he was just standing when amoli was ordered to be stoned, this can be explained that dv was already having a backup plan and he was also the one who sent kajri to free chandna ...

in short i want the devil back... mr.softy is a big no no for me , however i don't want dv to be bad with women like he was before but he can still act witty , devlish (like punishing those who mess with him) and handling situations properly.. in this case his character will be justified properly..and we can hav urmila back also as a twist , she has some raaz abt dv too ....

on the other hand , we can hav amoli , who has started hating dv again, she now tries to harm his territory being her wife but is unable to leave haveli ( for obvious reasons , she will not leave , afterall she loves to be thakurain and also , dv won't let her to leave) when they both will be in same place we can see their romance also... but with a new angle ! sometimes amoli will act all lovy dovy infront of dv , in order to harm him in worst manner... ofcourse her plans will backfired bcoz we hav devil in full form ...

basically i want her to find the good man in devil and fall in love with devil and admire the good man in him ( considering the fact that he was acting being good before) , during all this , i don't want mr.softy back!!!!

2. if we get a season two...

hmm , in season one , dv was thakur of village , now i will like to see dv as a high class business man with connections to underworld (note :he is not a Don , 😡) , he is highly manipulative , witty and chaalbaaz😆, he knows how to use ppl for his own well being and then throws them out (remember the personality of ranvir , he was good too , so we can hav ranvir like personality as devil). and then one day he meets amoli maata 😆😉... and falls in love with her

amoli's character needs to be strong.. she should be educated , i would like her to be working for an NGO (any ngo , not a problem for me😆) , so she meets dv one day , for collecting some funds etc , or may be dv is kabzaofying some land , which belongs to some orphanage etc and amoli stands against him ...

then we can hav dv in full devil form , he manipulates everyone , and uses every mean to have amoli .......

i like both these options , but will prefer 1st because i strongly feel the story is incomplete , devil's character is not justified...
Edited by missbubbly04 - 14 years ago

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