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hey everyyy one. here is 2days update.
PART 1

Amoli cuming downsatirs , with all housemates standing at the end of stairs....... dv looks at her with measureless pain n tears in eyes ........... just hoping tht she mite read his eyes n stays back. Amoli looks back into his eyes n her eyes do reflect her innner delimma butttttttt she still manages 2 pose being determined 2 go. As amoli cums down....... his eyes still on her but she cudnt meet his gaze hence looks simply downwords. Maata g , brusting out cums over 2 dv and pleads him 2 stop amoli. She says tht if dv can bring her in haveli by holding her hands so he can stop her as well........ so he must. Butttttt dv refuses saying tht he cant stop her. She can go whereever she wanna go as he can not c her being shatterd infront of him and its a better option for him 2 b shattered himself rather thn watching amoli in turmoil. He further says tht he wud keep all promises tht he gav 2 her while taking pheras .... whther she believes their marriage 2 b a fake one.He tells his mother tht most important promise was tht he will provide amoli with all her desires even if tht goes against his desires ......... all dv's words n his tears made amoli shake inside as was clearlyyyyyyy reflected from her face. Dv then with tear-filled eyes cums over 2 amoli n says tht she can leave butttttttttttttt ll hav 2 return as no one can luv her in ths world as much as he does sooooooooo she ll hav 2 cum back for his luv. He repeats tht its nt possible for him 2 survive without her buttttttttttttt he is sure tht his luv will win n will make her cum bak 2 him and accept his luv........... all these statements n falling tearsssssssss were enough for tearing our hearrt guys buttttttttttt ths amoli does react butttttttttttttt simplyyyyyyyy of no use. Dv then requests her 2 leave once he ll b gone from there as he wont b able 2 c her leaving...he tells her tht he is leaving so tht his desire must not overcum his luv n promise bcoz if ths wud happen then he wud becum a veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy bad person , tht amoli knws very well. Dv then goes upstairs as a broken , shattered , failed man.

Amoli looks at him leavinggggggg n it was clear thttttttttt she did feel every bit of his painnnnnnnnn but.................. walks awayyyyyy to leave............

In , their bedroom........................ dv stands facing radhey's photo utters a monologueeeeeeee saying tht he hated radheyyyyyyy as he took amoli away from him and hates him even more now as he is ruling amoli's heart though he actually did nothing , however he did everything for amoli but still cudnt get an inches space in her heart. He further says tht he hates radhey bcoz he betrayed him n the girl belongs 2 him even when he has gone out of her life.............. n he on the oder hand failed 2 make her hissssssssssss even after bringing her into hs life.................. he hates radhey bcoz he cant stop her n she is going awyyyyyyyyy with his heart n soul.........

Dv cryingggggggggggggggggggg ........................ amoli taking steps towards the exit.................

PART 2

But guysssssssss.............. at the very moment , when amoli was abt 2 cross the haveli's door-step................ dv's destinyyy or his fate tht always favored his luv ( as dv said himself ) strucks again............... n his saviour chandana enters haveliiiiiiiiii and in vryyyyyyy abrupt an tragic condition hugs amoli. amoli , gets worried at her condition asks the reason n chnadna takes her 2 a room , n reveals tht she is on the verge of loosing her maried life as she simplyyyyy arranged fake pregnancy for herself inorder 2 save her marriage. Amoli extremelyyyyyy shocked and angry at ths did says ths n tht 2 chandana butttttt poor girl cries saying tht she had no oder choice as her patti was alreadyyyyyyyy willing 2 leave her for kamodi.She further adds 2 amoli's worry telling her tht her sasu maa has becum doubtful as is insisting for a family doctor checkup. Amoli does try to make chandana realize tht its more thn serious issue as ths truth isnt possible 2 b hidden for long. Chandana , crying bitterlyyyyyy requests amoli 2 help her out as she finds her only hope in chandana.......amoli understandng her turmoil , adds hope 2 her and asks her to go back ......... chandana shares her fear tht her secret wud b disclosed the next dayyyyyy butttttt our gr8 amoli maata says tht there is a way out n amoli will surelyyyyy solve her problem. So amoli madam decides 2 stay backkkk for chandana buttttttttttttttttt ................ amoli dear thts actuallly 4 dv ;-).

KAjri enters her bedroom , where puneet is drinking 2 celebrate dv's loss ........ he then in tht drunken state shares his so called happiness and reason 2 celebrate with kajri. He tells kajri tht he was the one behind amoli's departure as it will lead 2 dv's defeat since his lifeeeeeeeeeeee is simplyyyyyyyyyy nt possible widout amoli n ths all will end in mking him the malik........... n then he will rule the village. Puneet then gets unconsious ............ leading kajri aloneeeeeee to share her actual intentions with us. She decides 2 do whtever possible 2 stop puneet n making him unsuccessful in his pathetic plan.

PART 3

Awesomleyyyyyyyyy executed part guyssss........................ Its raining havelyyyyyyyyyy , dv sitting in garden and recalls whtever happened whn amoli told him regarding her decision 2 leave. He recalls how she simplyyyyyy refused 2 hav any sort of association with him or with their marrige. Ths makes dv cryyyyyyy .,........ in pelting rainnnnnnnn. Suddnlyyyyyyyy ,................. to amoli arives from the oppsite direction with n umbrella............ she cums opposite 2 dv n stands still. Dv looks at her and stnads in utter fist of emotions..........he cums close n says tht she did leave but has returned in his dreams........... the umbrella flies awayyyyyy......... amoli replies tht she isnt a dream but has returned for real....................... Ths was sheer happines for himmmmmmmmmmm............... his heart filled with pleasure n he hugs amoli tightlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy....................... yupppppppppppppp ............... he hugggggggggggs .............. gets her into his armssssss with tears n smileeee. N the same song from yesterday plays in BK. After few beautiful ........ luv filled moments.......... he gets awayyyyy. Amoli amazed all of us as she didnt react 2 his such hugeeeeeeee act n didnt even push him away. Dv then moves away an speaks his heart out with immeasurable hapiness all over hisself. He says tht he knew she will cum bak for his luv ........ his luv has won.......... amoli tries 2 speak but he stops her..................... he remines amoli of their first encounter.................WAOOOOOOOOOO wht a sequenceeeeeeeee tht was................ ! he then continues tht they both were totallyyyyyy different then buttttttt the rain was the same. HE tells her tht he wanted 2 hold her hand since then , wanted to b with her in rain n tht wish of him has nowwwwwwwwwww cum 2 realityyyyyyyyy. HE ......... then veryyyyyy innocentlyyyyyyyyy builds castle in air telling amoli , how they will b sharing their life beautifullyyyyyyyyyyyy from now on........... But amoli brusts his bubble asking him 2 hold on as she isnt staying in haveli for him............... Dv , re-shattered asks her the actual reason but amoli refuses 2 tell as she promised with chandana ,,,,,,,,,,,, dv looks at her in utter disoppointment and then leaves ...................... wlks awyyyyyy as a lost player.............

Amoli , sad at his disoppintment , calls him but he moves away widout respondinggggg.............. amoli then says in silence tht she doesnt want 2 hurt him buttttttt cant let him associate false hopes with her..........

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey my jani superb best best updater deeba .........ummaahhhh...............

😃 oi jani always superb smashing elegant update ....mashallah se

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hey my jani u so


ur the best .u rocks my buddy
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oye yar acha hoa thakur ne amoli ko jaane diya .....jab dekho sali nakre dekha thi hai .......waise maan hi maan amoli ka dil tha rok kyun nai rehan hooo pati dev hahhahahahahah......waise thakur ne kya mast mast
dialogues bole hain .........akar asa hota amoli ufffffffff kitna maza aata ....waise thakur saab koi fikar not kyun k amoli k pass poori duniya me koi option nai hai aap k elawa so who ap k pass hi aay ge 😃

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oi chandana kya mast idea nikala tha apne ghar ko save kar ne k liye ........waise kya faida tummare susral me koi tummare kam ka nai yahan tak tummara pati bhi bikar hai hahahahahhahaha

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ufffffffffff chachi se help ....jo apni to kar hi nai pa rahi hai ...in pay chor rahi hooo apni takleef......aur hum ne chora hai in pay apna thakur un ko to dekha nai ja raha hai is se ........chachi ko seek aao k dekho chachi me kaise kaise kar k apne ghar ko bacha rahi hoon ...jo mujhe rakna hi nai chate hain .....

par ap k pass best pati best susral .....mast life hai ....samjao 😃

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puneet khushi teri saari nikal jay ge ........fikar na kar ....so kar utna aur dekna chachi chacho ko ass pass ....phir kaisa kaisa ro na aay ga tujhe teri har khushi ko hummari nazar lagti hain .........tummari biwi kam nai ye acha tujhe barbaad kare ge .....band bej ne wala hai kuch time me .............taiyar hoja hahahahhahahahahah🤣

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haay kya mast barish hawa k saath us pay amoli ka aana☺️ thakur ki jaan wapis laa na us pay thakur saab ne kya tait hug kiya☺️ k dil khush hoga ya tha☺️ kay baatei kar rehan the haay kya secen tha☺️ .......par is amoli ko aj hi apna mu khol na tha😡 amoli tujse thakur ki khushi dekhi nai ja rahi thi kya 😡..........ARMAANon se kab tak khelle ge yar😡😡😡


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sharad kelkar supriya kumari .............yar dono bohat bohat bohat best kam kar rehan .......best jodi yar kya mast chemistry hai ☺️........hats off .........👏


mehak...........................................😎
Edited by jaan 234 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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buddyyyyy.....greattttttttttt updates once again.....just awesome as always......👏👏👏👏👏

realllyyyyy just out standingllllyyyyy superrrbbbbbbbbbbbbb.......⭐️StarStarStarStar
aik dum blasting..........just luved it...!!! Keep up ur good work all the best buddy....!!!!🤗
wat an tearfullll epi guyzzzz.....😭
but it's feel gooood tht Amoli madam is going to stay in Havelliiii......😃😃
but its more than enough yar........sooooo annoyed wid Amoli.............staying just for Chandna...😲
and not for DV.........😡 how heartless Amoli....why doesnt she see his tears and his voice of heart and his luuuvvvvvv....😔 and still DV will do anything for happiness....😔 sooo shattered and heart broken he was......😭😭 DV did sooooo much for her even tht🤢 Radhay didnt do a little bit of tht for Amoli....phir bhi.....Amoli madam na........." mar kar bhi kabab main hadi buna hoa hay".......
she'll hav to pay for DV's suffering.....
ooohhhhhh bechara DV.....😭😭😭 crying sooo much...cudnt see him like ths...
but the way Amoli was coming to the doorway....was feeling like she'll stay by herself.......buttttttt
tht Chandna madam came wid a new drama......but thanxxxx to her bcoz of her Amoli's stay....
and surrialll in laws of Chandna's......specialy sass.......as usuall wd her shakkkk.........😕
but yar Chandna shud nt hav done ths all....it'll bring more difficulties for DV......
and tht Puneet...i think Kajrriii will b enough for him to punish.....k**** 😡😡
he'll get wat he deseve.....😡Ouch
and when Amoli came back to DV...it was tooo gooood to be true for him........
and the way he huged Amoli...........tht was sooooo fulll of luvvv......and in the rain......
ooohhhhhhhhhhh myyyy......😍
and DV's feelings and happiness.....just great to watch wid superbbb dialogues....!!!
and Amoli the heart breaker...............blasted again tht she has not came back 4 u....but for sumthings else she's came back ..........and bashed all DV's happiness and dreams....
and just made him soullessly broken..............😭😭
but Amoli really got feelings for DV na...tht's y she was apologizing frm him...
coz she also dont wanna see DV like ths na...thn why Amoli always hurt him.......???????
but jo bhi ho yarooooo....i think its enough for DV n Amoli's luv story tht they are 2gather again.....
wid kismat connection.....😉
and it'll bring sumthing verrry goood and interesting.......
soooo just waiting for next epi and next week........for upcoming close moments.....😉😉
but cudnt wait anymore.....😃😃
Edited by artfriend - 15 years ago
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cheer up babyyyyyyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shali

people stil crying.......



yaar try 2 understand dey r "khushi k aasu"
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shali

people stil crying.......

yrrrrrrrrrrrr hav 2 na till our dv criesssssssssss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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o welcummmmmmmm g
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Posted: 15 years ago
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dear twettycat
thank you so much for your lovely post and comments👏👏👏
without your daily update how can i know the storyline?????😉
i am waiting for something good to happen!!!!!!!😍
best wishes

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