||Badi Door Se Aaye Hain - A Tale Re-written|| FF

Bhavika

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I was watching BDSAH episode again on youtube and found that I wanted some changes so badly that it made me re-write BDSAH. I will be updating altered chapters as per the episodes. The canon characters will remain the same but I'll be introducing new ones as well. Some will be introduced right from the start and some will enter the story later on. Following are the new characters that I am gonna introduce in the start:

Manasvini Adhikari

Manasvini was 5 years old when her parents died in a car crash, she lived with her aunt in Chandigarh for 16 years but came back to Mumbai when she was of age to acquire her old home ( a row house in Sunshine Colony) that her parents had left her in their will along with other things. She started her own business of wedding planning and in past 4 years she's become a successful wedding planner and is counted among the top 10 wedding planners in Mumbai. She's a fun loving, caring, a little bit childish, confident, modern girl who has quite a different philosophy regarding things. She thinks differently, sometimes behave differently as well. She loves to make other smile says that it gives her the "kick" as her favorite actor Salmaan Khan had said.

She's best friends with Anna and Manav (he will enter this FF as he did in the show) and loves the Sunshine Colony people and live together as a family.

(From left to right)

Mercury, Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus and Neptune

These are Manasvini's pets whom she loves like she loves her sunshine family. Usually all of them behave nicely but they tend to act according to their owner's (Manasvini) emotional state. They bite the one who try to scare her, the bark at the one whom she wants to scare. The show affection towards those who behave nicely with Manasvini and who won't harm her. Just as their owner, they are as well different from the other dogs.

Girishma Ghotala/333

[center]Girishma Ghotal aka 333 is the youngest child and the only daughter of Vasant (9211) and Varsha (1721) Ghotala. She is sweet little kid of age 100 years (alien age), she is only 5 years old in human age terms. She with her family has come to Earth in search of her eldest brother 2015. She is highly intelligent, so much intelligent that it rivals that of Pritesh😆 (who's gonna have a crush one her😉😆)She has the power to create illusions, make others fantasy come true and sometimes make others think that what they saw was just a dream. But because she's just a baby in terms of alien age her power isn't properly developed and drains her off energy fastly. Excessive usage of her power makes her weak and sometimes she faints as well.
She is most close to her elder brother Hemant (-426), she's the only one who never gets tired of correcting Hemant's language.

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Firstly welcome to the forum...

May I know ur name???

Were u old.visiter of forum or new member here???

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hiya

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Nice concept of story...

Plz.start soon

Eager to read more...

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Krish58

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Hey their..welcome to forum...what's ur name..and same questions as of coolhi1988...

Same majja aayega...

Anyways loved the concept would like to read it story also we are also writing here stories ..do read...

And Haan

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Bhavika

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: coolhi1988
Firstly welcome to the forum...
May I know ur name???
Were u old.visiter of forum or new member here???

My name is Bhavika, thanks for welcoming me😃

I used to visit the forum all the time but never participated in any discussion.😳

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Bhavika

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Originally posted by: coolhi1988
Nice concept of story...
Plz.start soon
Eager to read more...

Thank you.

I will update soon.

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hiya

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Originally posted by: its-bk

My name is Bhavika, thanks for welcoming me😃
I used to visit the forum all the time but never participated in any discussion.😳

Nice name Bhavika...

U share my sister in laws name...

Really

Ohh dear!!

U Shud HV participated in discussion...

Well wen will u start d story??

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hiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: its-bk

Thank you.
I will update soon.

My pleasure

Btw wat do u do???

Study/work??

Wer r u from??

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Bhavika

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Originally posted by: Krish58
Hey their..welcome to forum...what's ur name..and same questions as of coolhi1988...
Same majja aayega...

Anyways loved the concept would like to read it story also we are also writing here stories ..do read...

And Haan
Welcome to forum

I am Bhavika😃

Thanks for being so welcoming😳

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Bhavika

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