FF: May be you are the one for me( Cha 15 pg 33).Updated - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
hey 1 suggesstion plz make an index on pg 1..
either main post or any other post..
it need not b hyperlinked.. it can just be simple too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey congo u got promoted..
Now u r allowed 50 posts in 24 hrs
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
i liked it
bhairu has a son named aryan wow
aww d worried mother she is
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
It was awesome yr vasant ne nakli married couple banna diya sharad aur Maya ko ..hmm vava ke thoughts same
Love this story
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5

Goa

Vikram Patel talked to 1721 next day

"I am taking my wife to America tomorrow under the pretext of her relative's wedding. Actually once we reach I will convince my wife and we will settle there. I will tell her that you want to be a singer and you will stay in India for some days. I will manage that afterwards. But my only worry is where you would be going. I cannot keep you here forever to make my wife happy. It will be selfish to involve a person you just met accidentally in your problems"

!721 noticed that he was really worried more about her than his wife. He wants to move just because he don't want to involve her in his problems

"Sir" she cleared her throat. She don't know whether she has right to ask this question or not. Considering the situation it may worry him more. But she couldn't help.

"Where has your daughter gone?" she asked without losing a second. He then answered her question for the next fifteen minutes.

Mumbai

"For the First time, I didn't talk for the whole 30 minutes. Just because of you two. Suddenly in one minute I am a musician next minute I am married and next minute suddenly I am married to a person who loves to irritate me. Wow! Wonderful" she said in one breath with an irritable voice.

"For your information I have more important jobs than to irritate you. In our planet more girls are willing to be my wife and you just got a fluke luck but also complaining" he said unpacking the gadgets in the suitcase.

"Oh really! Who are those invisible girls in our planet. Please tell I love to meet them" she said with a fake smile.

"Stop it Maya! Sharad! Vasant told. " And Maya! You are overreacting. Look at the bright side. We got a home because of this lie. They seems to be good. We will tell them that these are all fake once they are ok us. Just go and freshen up yourself" Vasant tried to calm her down. "And listen after dinner we are going to put our strategies to complete our mission. We will finalize the possible places to search our friends. Okay?"

"Okay!" she said and went inside

Maya remembered that how vasant knows everything about her since childhood. He always planned her surprise birthday parties. He knows what makes her happy her each her like and dislike. It is visible with his gifts he used to send her and the jokes and poems he wrote to cheer her up when she was sad. These small things done by him made her to like him. When she gets to know that he saw her only as his best friend she got disappointed as she blamed himself for imagining things and expected more from him. But those moments are so precious for her to forget

"I think she is more upset than I thought" sharad said when he was alone with vasant.

"I don't understand one thing sharad. You were all concern about her when she was absent and when she is there, you always fight with her" vasant said

"It is not like that.." sharad started

"What not? You are doing this for childhood. You sent all her birthday gifts through me because you were not sure what she will think. When she thought I did that you stopped from telling me truth and because of you I got her friendship. But actually you did to be friends with her. So whenever I thought to patch up you both you started fighting with her and made things worse. You just don't have courage to tell her truth" vasant said

"What to do? She hates me since I pushed her accidentally in childhood. If she had known I bought her those gifts she would have thrown them. At least she has them now and this truth has too old and has no value now" sharad said"

Not this one. The another truth that you are in love with her" Vasant said

Goa

"I have told you everything beta! I should thank you! You have given the smile I wanted to see in her even it lasts for a short while"

"Sir! I can be your daughter as long as you want me to be"

Vikram Patel was shocked to hear that. "What?" he said

"yes! I am ready to become Varsha and repay you for saving me, for thinking about me and for telling every detail about your life" she said firmly

"But beta! Now you don't remember anything you may agree. Once you gets your memory back, your family may need you. Infact they may be searching for now also. It is not right" he said

Varsha felt so guilty about her lie. This man think so much about her but she cannot say anything to him.

"Sir! Its okay. At this moment till you say, I am ready to become your daughter"

Mumbai

"What?" sharad said in surprise "I don't love her"

"Come On. I am not dumb. You know each and every likes and dislikes about her. Whenever she was sad you made her happy with your poems and jokes. And the best thing is you preferred her happiness than revealing your love for her. She became my friend because I became voice of your actions. If you had encouraged yourself she would have become your friend too. May be she will get to know your love too"

"No ! ..." sharad started

" Not again" Vasant now I have decided I will not be your messenger. You will do it all yourself. Understood? But I don't get one thing why you always fight with her? Vasant said

"Because at least now she remembers me with annoyance otherwise she would have not even cared about my existence and promise me you won't tell her anything" Sharad said

"First thing! You are crazy and second I won't tell her anything" Vasant said

"Good" Sharad felt relieved

"You are going to tell her now" Vasant said.

Goa

"Vimala! Varsha got her memory back and we all are planning to go to Mumbai at my sister's house for vacation" Vikram Patel told his wife


Varsha entered her room and closed the Door

"I need to contact high command from the planet. How will I my friends then? Hope they are safe" she said in an anxiety tone.

She remembers how the spaceship got damaged and their unexpected landing on the earth. She also remembered how some humans saw them and spread the news of aliens in earth.

"That initial days was so stressful. At least we three had the back of each other. Now I lost them" she was sad how three of them were separated in the crowd of some festival of humans.

"I will contact my high officials. Only they will help me" She opened her suitcase and tried to connect the signal to her planet. She couldn't able to get the signal properly but she voice message has been sent to her. She opened that message and it said

"1721! We have tried to contact you but couldn't reach you. Your friends contacted us and they said they are in a place called Mumbai on earth. Inform us about your safety and we have sent three more people to search you" She tried to contact their signal again. It was too weak. The connection got failed again. "This machine has become too old to even connect" she cursed

"Mumbai?" that's the place where uncle wanted to go" she cheered at this thought to have found a way to reach her friends and "Three more people?" She exclaimed. "Who are they?" she wondered.

Precap: Pg12

Edited by barbieindia - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
superb update!!
loved it completely..
well written..

sorry for late unres..

vikam telling about his daughter varsha to 1721..
but u dint tel us.. what happened to varsha..
plz keep her alive...

maya shouting at vasant & sharad for their bluffing...
wow!!! Sharad loves Maya since childhood,
due to a childhood incident he thinks maya hates him..
so he sends all gifts, poems everything to maya through vasant...

maya thinks vasant knows her too well but actually it was sharad...
ohh i feel pity for these both..
bechara vasant bich me phasega..

1721 feeling guilty seeing d care vikram has for her too
she offers to stay as his daughter until he wants..

so they r going to mumbai..

1721 talks with high command & comes to know her frnds r in mumbai & 3 other people r send to get them back too

so waiting for their meet

continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Woh gal .it was mast update awww sharad is such a darling yr... He loves and cares for Maya but he is afraid to reveal it because she would then hate him if he told just because bachpan ek accident hua tha ..awww don't worry sharad she will not get angry tell ur feelings and yes yes vasant bichara indono ke bich owl bangaya and vasant feels bad and worried for sharad awww friends
Well what happened to real varsha ..but then now this varsha wants to become real daughter of Mr Patel so that she can repay them for saving her...

Story is nice

Hey one another suggestion you can use colourful font it will look good
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Precap:-
"I have seen lots of hindi soaps and hindi movies yesterday sharad. I will tell human ways of proposing a girl" said Vasant in the living room of bhatt house teaching sharad how to propose

First you kneel down like this with ring and turn towards the girl and should say
" Will you marry me?"
Vasant was actually shocked to see a girl infront of him and he was holding the ring towards her

"Varsha?" Vasant heard bhavna aunty from his behind
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
wow wat a teaser 😲😲😲
i loved it...
plz update soon...
ab toh aur curious ho gai me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhairulove

nice update
i liked it
bhairu has a son named aryan wow
aww d worried mother she is
thnks 4 d pm


Thank you so much😊😛 Glad u liked it

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